Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a direct and clear answer to the question first, then add supporting details. Avoid redundancy and filler words like 'uh'. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. Usually, I buy new shoes every two to three years because I focus more on my overall appearance, like my face and hair. However, I do enjoy shopping in general, including for other items like Legos.

Sugestão: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, use 'because' once and avoid repeating phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it gives me the freedom to exchange them easily and it saves a lot of time.

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and complete answer in one or two sentences. Avoid pauses or incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually spend around ₹4000 to ₹5000 on shoes, as I prefer mid-range options. I never buy very expensive shoes for myself.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, depending on the occasion. For work, I usually choose comfortable shoes; however, for parties, I prefer stylish ones.

× I like all types of shopping, whether it be shoes and I even have a fantasy of buying Legos.

✓ I like all types of shopping, whether it be shoes or I even have a fantasy of buying Legos.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used after 'whether'. The correct conjunction to use after 'whether' is 'or' to present alternatives. So, 'whether it be shoes or...' is the correct form.

× But I would buy a shoe often between two to three years sometimes or if.

✓ But I would buy shoes often, sometimes between two to three years.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The phrase 'or if' is left hanging without completion. Also, 'a shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to indicate general buying frequency. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and completes the thought.

× Yes, very often I bought shoes online because it's provide me freedom to exchange and also and and also it doesn't take much time.

✓ Yes, very often I buy shoes online because it provides me the freedom to exchange and also it doesn't take much time.

The sentence mixes past tense 'bought' with present tense context. Also, 'it's provide' is incorrect; it should be 'it provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The repeated 'and and also' is redundant and removed. The pronoun 'it' refers to the process of buying online and should be singular with correct verb agreement.

× I usually buy shoes of mid range like four ₹5000 in Indian currency.

✓ I usually buy mid-range shoes costing around ₹4000 to ₹5000 in Indian currency.

The phrase 'four ₹5000' is unclear and incorrect quantifier usage. It likely means a price range. 'Mid range' should be hyphenated as 'mid-range' when used as an adjective. The correction clarifies the price range and improves sentence clarity.

× I don't. I never purchase very expensive shoes for myself.

✓ I don't. I never purchase very expensive shoes for myself.

No correction needed here as the sentence is grammatically correct.

× If I am looking for an shoes for my work, work time then I definitely choose and comfortable one.

✓ If I am looking for shoes for my work time, then I definitely choose a comfortable one.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'shoes'. It should be omitted or replaced with 'some' if plural is intended. Also, 'and comfortable one' is incorrect; it should be 'a comfortable one' to refer to a singular shoe. The phrase 'work, work time' is redundant; 'work time' suffices.

× But if I am choosing a shoes for myself to going for a party then it would be an stylish 1.

✓ But if I am choosing shoes for myself to go to a party, then it would be a stylish one.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'shoes'; it should be omitted. 'To going' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to go'. 'An stylish' is incorrect because 'stylish' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a stylish' is correct. '1' should be spelled out as 'one'.