Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid repetition and filler words to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question with clear sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because they are an essential part of my outfit. I usually buy new shoes every two or three months to keep my collection updated.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure subject-verb agreement.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it saves both time and energy. Moreover, it provides me with the opportunity to exchange them easily if needed.

Sugestão: Reduce filler words and improve fluency. Use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer clearly with linking words to explain your reasons.

Exemplo: I usually spend between 4000 to 5000 rupees on a pair of shoes in India, which I consider a mid-range price because I prefer not to spend too much on shoes.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use clear linking words to explain your preferences and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, depending on the occasion. For work, I choose comfortable shoes because I wear them for long hours. However, for parties, I prefer fashionable shoes that complement my outfit.

× They are very essential part of my outfit outfit outfit.

✓ They are a very essential part of my outfit.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very essential part' which is a singular noun phrase. Also, the repetition of 'outfit' is unnecessary and likely a mistake. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I regularly buy shoes in every two or three months.

✓ I regularly buy shoes every two or three months.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before 'every two or three months'. The correct expression is simply 'every two or three months' without 'in' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, most of the time I bought shoes online because it saves my time and energy both and it also provide me and it also provides me opportunity to exchange it easily.

✓ Yes, most of the time I buy shoes online because it saves me time and energy, and it also provides me the opportunity to exchange them easily.

The verb 'bought' is in past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is appropriate. Also, 'provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Saves my time and energy both' is better as 'saves me time and energy'. 'Opportunity to exchange it' should be 'opportunity to exchange them' since 'shoes' is plural.

× I usually purchase a pair of shoes in rupees 4000 to 5000 in India.

✓ I usually purchase a pair of shoes for 4000 to 5000 rupees in India.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used before the price. The correct preposition to indicate cost is 'for'. Also, the currency unit 'rupees' should follow the amount.

× It's a mid range uh price for uh shoes Uh because I don't want to spend too much on UH shoes.

✓ It's a mid-range price for shoes because I don't want to spend too much on shoes.

The phrase 'mid range' should be hyphenated as 'mid-range' when used as an adjective. The filler 'uh' should be removed for clarity. Repetition of 'uh' and capitalization is unnecessary.

× I prefer both fashionable shoes and or comfort and comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'and or' is incorrect. The correct conjunction to express inclusion of both options is 'and'. Also, 'comfort and comfortable shoes' is redundant; 'comfortable shoes' suffices.

× If I'm at work, I definitely choose a comfortable pair of shoes because I have to wear them for a long for long hours instead.

✓ If I'm at work, I definitely choose a comfortable pair of shoes because I have to wear them for long hours.

The phrase 'for a long for long hours instead' is redundant and awkward. Removing the repeated 'for long' and 'instead' clarifies the sentence.

× If I'm looking for an party wear shoes then I go for.

✓ If I'm looking for party wear shoes, then I go for them.

The article 'an' is incorrect before 'party wear shoes' because 'party' starts with a consonant sound. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'them' completes the thought.