Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to answer the question directly and clearly. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'shoes' instead of 'suits' or 'sauces') and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise and structured with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often. I prefer comfortable shoes like Adidas and Nike because they are easy to walk in. I enjoy exploring different styles from these brands.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific details about your experience or opinion.

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online. However, my brother once sent me a pair of Nike Jordan shoes from abroad. I really like their quality and I still use them regularly.

Sugestão: Be clear and precise when giving numbers or amounts. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unnecessary hesitation and filler words. Explain your answer with relevant reasons or examples.

Exemplo: I usually spend around 200 to 300 dirhams on shoes, depending on the brand and quality. I prefer not to buy very expensive shoes, but I focus on getting good value for money.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I can wear them anywhere and use them every day. However, I also like fashionable shoes for special occasions, so I try to balance both.

× I didn't buy suits really often but I really like buying suits as I always prefer to wear shoes rather than heels because it will be really convenient and easy to walk and I just find and I'm exploring various types of sauces. Adidas, Nike.

✓ I don't buy shoes really often but I really like buying shoes as I always prefer to wear shoes rather than heels because it is really convenient and easy to walk and I just find and I'm exploring various types of shoes. Adidas, Nike.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'didn't buy' when the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'don't buy' is appropriate. Also, 'suits' is incorrect; the correct word is 'shoes'. 'Will be' should be 'is' to match the present habitual context. 'Sauces' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'shoes'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Not I have not bought shoes online but my brother has sent me a Nike suit I think the name is umm Jordan uh from the abroad.

✓ No, I have not bought shoes online but my brother has sent me a Nike shoe, I think the name is umm Jordan, from abroad.

The phrase 'Not I have not' is incorrect; it should be 'No, I have not'. 'Suit' is incorrect when referring to a single shoe; it should be 'shoe'. The article 'the' before 'abroad' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'from abroad' is correct. These changes correct pronoun usage and article errors.

× I think it depends on the quality and the suits brand. Uh, mostly I spend 223 thousands, uh, on my shoes as I don't prefer much expensive more than that, so I try to maintain the quantity of the suits as I prefer it.

✓ I think it depends on the quality and the shoe brand. Uh, mostly I spend 223 thousand, uh, on my shoes as I don't prefer anything more expensive than that, so I try to maintain the quantity of the shoes as I prefer.

'Suits brand' is incorrect; it should be 'shoe brand'. '223 thousands' is incorrect quantifier usage; it should be '223 thousand'. 'Much expensive more than that' is incorrect; it should be 'anything more expensive than that'. 'Quantity of the suits' should be 'quantity of the shoes'. These corrections fix quantifier and noun usage errors.

× I think it depends on your dressing sense or I prefer both of the shoes. But personally I prefer comfortable shoes which I can wear wherever, wherever I want to go and I can try or almost use everyday. Yeah.

✓ I think it depends on your dressing sense, but I prefer both types of shoes. But personally, I prefer comfortable shoes which I can wear wherever I want to go and I can try to use almost every day.

The phrase 'both of the shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'both types of shoes'. 'Try or almost use everyday' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'try to use almost every day'. Also, 'everyday' as one word is an adjective; here, the adverbial phrase 'every day' is correct. These corrections improve pronoun and adverb usage for clarity.