Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Sua resposta precisa ser mais clara e organizada. Evite repetir informações e confundir o tempo verbal. Use frases mais curtas e diretas para expressar suas ideias de forma natural e eficaz.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I often buy them when I travel. For example, next week I will visit the US with my family, and we plan to go to shopping malls to buy shoes.

Sugestão: Tente evitar repetições e erros gramaticais. Seja mais específico e claro ao falar sobre suas experiências. Use conectores para melhorar a fluidez da resposta.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Last weekend, my wife bought me two pairs of shoes online, one brown and one black.

Sugestão: Melhore a precisão e clareza das informações. Explique melhor as moedas e use frases mais simples e diretas. Evite erros gramaticais e use conectores para ligar as ideias.

Exemplo: In Brazil, I usually spend at least 400 reais on shoes. However, I don't know how much I will spend in the US because I want to buy tennis shoes, flip flops, and running shoes for my favorite sport.

Sugestão: Evite usar expressões vagas como "you know" e organize melhor suas ideias. Use frases claras e conectores para explicar suas preferências de forma natural e eficaz.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are better for daily activities. For example, I wear them to work or when I spend weekends with my family at the park or visiting museums.

× So we are going to the shopping malls, outlet malls and buy many shoes.

✓ So we are going to the shopping malls, outlet malls and buying many shoes.

After 'going to', when expressing planned activities, the verb should be in the '-ing' form to indicate the action that will be done. Here, 'buy' should be 'buying' to correctly follow 'going to'.

× Yes I I have both. I have both shoes online.

✓ Yes, I have bought both. I have bought shoes online.

The phrase 'I have both' is unclear and incorrect. The student likely means they have bought shoes online. Also, the repetition 'I I' is a mistake. Correcting to 'I have bought both' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× Last weekend my my my wife bought me twice pair of shoes.

✓ Last weekend my wife bought me two pairs of shoes.

The phrase 'twice pair' is incorrect. The correct plural form is 'two pairs' when referring to more than one pair of shoes. Also, the repetition 'my my my' is an error and should be corrected.

× In Brazil I usually spend at least 400 Heis which is the currents of Brazil, but in the US I really don't know how much I'm going to spend there because I would like to buy tennis shoes, flip flop and also a running shoes to practice my favorite sport.

✓ In Brazil I usually spend at least 400 Reais, which is the currency of Brazil, but in the US I really don't know how much I'm going to spend there because I would like to buy tennis shoes, flip flops and also running shoes to practice my favorite sport.

The word 'Heis' is incorrect; the correct term is 'Reais' for Brazilian currency. Also, 'currents' should be 'currency'. 'Flip flop' should be plural 'flip flops' to match the plural context. 'A running shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'running shoes' without 'a' because 'shoes' is plural.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because it's more, you know, it's better to use this kind of shoes when you go to your job or you are going to spend your weekend with your family at the park or a museum to go to a sightseeing this kind of things.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because it's better to use this kind of shoe when you go to your job or spend your weekend with your family at the park or a museum to go sightseeing and do these kinds of things.

The phrase 'this kind of shoes' is incorrect; 'kind' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun 'shoe'. Also, 'a sightseeing this kind of things' is incorrect; it should be 'go sightseeing and do these kinds of things' to correctly express the activities. The sentence is also improved by removing unnecessary fillers for clarity.