Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: In English (Cambodia), you should try to speak more clearly and avoid repeating filler words like 'like'. Also, make your sentences more structured and concise to express your ideas naturally and effectively.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually buy at least one pair of shoes each year because I find fashionable shoes help me feel confident when I walk.

Sugestão: Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words such as 'like'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: Yes, I mostly buy branded shoes online because they are usually cheaper than in physical stores, and I can read customer feedback before buying.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating words and filler sounds. Use clear and concise sentences with specific details. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Recently, I spent more on shoes because I bought a branded pair that cost around $100. It is comfortable and worth the price.

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot, and comfortable shoes help me stay relaxed and confident throughout the day.

× Yes, I buy shoes or at least one pairs per year and like I walk by them because like I find it's like fashionable and make me like work and confidently.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes or at least one pair per year and I like to walk by them because I find they are fashionable and make me work confidently.

The word 'pairs' should be singular 'pair' because it refers to 'one'. Also, 'make me like work and confidently' is incorrect; it should be 'make me work confidently' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I buy shoes or at least one pairs per year and like I walk by them because like I find it's like fashionable and make me like work and confidently.

✓ Yes, I buy shoes or at least one pair per year and I like to walk by them because I find they are fashionable and make me work confidently.

The pronoun 'it's' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' (plural). It should be 'they are' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.

× Yields mostly I bought it online especially for the like brand shoes which is like expensive one because I find a shoes online is worth like cheaper than in the store like actual store and also is have feedback for me if I bought.

✓ Yes, mostly I bought them online especially for branded shoes which are expensive because I find shoes online are cheaper than in the actual store and also have feedback for me if I bought them.

The pronouns 'it' and 'a shoes' are incorrect. 'Shoes' is plural, so 'them' should be used instead of 'it'. Also, 'a shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'shoes'.

× Yields mostly I bought it online especially for the like brand shoes which is like expensive one because I find a shoes online is worth like cheaper than in the store like actual store and also is have feedback for me if I bought.

✓ Yes, mostly I bought them online especially for branded shoes which are expensive because I find shoes online are cheaper than in the actual store and also have feedback for me if I bought them.

The phrase 'brand shoes which is like expensive one' is incorrect. It should be 'branded shoes which are expensive' to match plural subject and correct adjective form.

× Yields mostly I bought it online especially for the like brand shoes which is like expensive one because I find a shoes online is worth like cheaper than in the store like actual store and also is have feedback for me if I bought.

✓ Yes, mostly I bought them online especially for branded shoes which are expensive because I find shoes online are cheaper than in the actual store and also have feedback for me if I bought them.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary after 'especially'. The correct phrase is 'especially branded shoes' without 'for'.

× Recently I spent many of times on shoes because like I just bought the like branded one which is expensive and it maximum around maximums or $100 per per pair. And yes it's comfortable and worth the price.

✓ Recently I spent a lot of money on shoes because I just bought a branded one which is expensive and costs around $100 per pair. And yes, it's comfortable and worth the price.

The phrase 'spent many of times on shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'spent a lot of money on shoes'. Also, 'it maximum around maximums or $100 per per pair' is incorrect; it should be 'costs around $100 per pair'.

× Recently I spent many of times on shoes because like I just bought the like branded one which is expensive and it maximum around maximums or $100 per per pair. And yes it's comfortable and worth the price.

✓ Recently I spent a lot of money on shoes because I just bought a branded one which is expensive and costs around $100 per pair. And yes, it's comfortable and worth the price.

The phrase 'the like branded one' should be 'a branded one' to correctly use the article with singular noun.

× Recently I spent many of times on shoes because like I just bought the like branded one which is expensive and it maximum around maximums or $100 per per pair. And yes it's comfortable and worth the price.

✓ Recently I spent a lot of money on shoes because I just bought a branded one which is expensive and costs around $100 per pair. And yes, it's comfortable and worth the price.

'Many of times' is incorrect when referring to money spent; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of money'.

× Recently I spent many of times on shoes because like I just bought the like branded one which is expensive and it maximum around maximums or $100 per per pair. And yes it's comfortable and worth the price.

✓ Recently I spent a lot of money on shoes because I just bought a branded one which is expensive and costs around $100 per pair. And yes, it's comfortable and worth the price.

The preposition 'on' is correct with 'spent money on shoes', so no change needed here.

× I prefer to comfortable shoes as is it like as a person like to walking around and I would to choose the comfortable shoes that make make me like stay in a comfortable ways to walk around and additionally it make me like work in confidently.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes as I am a person who likes walking around and I would choose comfortable shoes that make me stay comfortable while walking and additionally make me work confidently.

The phrase 'I prefer to comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer comfortable shoes'. Also, 'as is it like as a person like to walking around' is incorrect; it should be 'as I am a person who likes walking around'. The phrase 'make make me like stay in a comfortable ways' should be 'make me stay comfortable while walking'. 'It make me like work in confidently' should be 'make me work confidently'.