Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'more' and incorrect plural forms like 'footwears'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes quite often because, as a teenager, my feet grow quickly. I usually prefer comfortable footwear like sneakers or sports shoes rather than high heels or boots.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points with linking words. Also, be specific about your experience to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a pair of shoes online recently. They looked nice, but unfortunately, they were too big. Because of that, I had to return them and order a different size to ensure a better fit.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your sentences and organise your ideas logically. Use correct verb forms and provide specific details to make your answer more effective.

Exemplo: I usually spend between 200 and 600 on shoes. For example, sports shoes typically cost around 300, but I recently bought a waterproof pair for 400. School shoes are usually less expensive.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys your opinion but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid awkward phrasing and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to express your preference clearly and concisely.

Exemplo: I prefer a balance between fashionable and comfortable shoes. I wouldn't choose shoes that are stylish but uncomfortable, nor those that are comfortable but look odd. So, I usually pick shoes that look good and feel comfortable.

× Yes, I do buy shoes really often 'cause I'm still a teenager and my feet grows faster and I prefer comfortable footwears more than high heels or maybe boots.

✓ Yes, I do buy shoes really often 'cause I'm still a teenager and my feet grow faster and I prefer comfortable footwear more than high heels or maybe boots.

The noun 'feet' is plural, so the verb should be 'grow' not 'grows' to agree in number (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Also, 'footwear' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form, so 'footwears' is incorrect and should be 'footwear'.

× Last time I bought a shoe online and it was quite nice, but the only disappointment was it was too big.

✓ Last time I bought shoes online and they were quite nice, but the only disappointment was that they were too big.

The phrase 'a shoe' is singular but contextually it is more natural to refer to 'shoes' plural. Also, pronouns should agree in number with their antecedents: 'it' should be 'they' for plural 'shoes'. Additionally, 'was it was' is repetitive; 'was that they were' is clearer.

× I can't. Make sure the size is perfect for me so I have to return it and try something else.

✓ I can't make sure the size is perfect for me, so I have to return it and try something else.

The period after 'can't' incorrectly breaks the sentence. 'Can't make sure' is a modal verb phrase and should be continuous without a full stop. The sentence should be one complete sentence for clarity.

× But I bought a waterproof shoe last time which costed me 400.

✓ But I bought a waterproof shoe last time which cost me 400.

The verb 'cost' is irregular and its past tense form is the same as the base form 'cost', not 'costed'. Therefore, 'costed' is incorrect.

× And school shoes is.

✓ And school shoes are.

The subject 'school shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I prefer both of them. I wouldn't choose something that's really fashion and very uncomfortable or something very comfortable but looks a bit weird.

✓ I prefer both of them. I wouldn't choose something that's really fashionable and very uncomfortable or something very comfortable but looks a bit weird.

The word 'fashion' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'something'. The correct adjective is 'fashionable'.

× I prefer I'll choose middle. Middle like looking good looking but mostly comfortable.

✓ I prefer, I'll choose the middle. The middle means looking good but mostly comfortable.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding articles and restructuring improves clarity and grammatical correctness.