Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız doğal ancak daha açık ve akıcı olabilir. "I'm a woman" ifadesi gereksiz ve konuyla alakasız görünüyor. Ayrıca, alış sıklığını belirtirken daha net ve doğru İngilizce kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, "I usually buy shoes once or twice a month." gibi daha kısa ve net cümleler tercih edin.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes once or twice a month because I enjoy updating my collection.

Sugestão: Cümleniz karışık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. "I buy every time" ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz. Ayrıca, "my city not give it this kind of stuffs" ifadesi yanlış. Daha doğal ve doğru bir şekilde, neden online alışveriş yaptığınızı açıkça belirtmelisiniz. Örneğin, "I often buy shoes online because my city doesn't have many stores selling them."

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are not many shoe stores in my city, so online shopping is more convenient for me.

Sugestão: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve bazı ifadeler yanlış kullanılmış. "Obsessive compressive problems" ifadesi uygun değil. Ayrıca, harcama miktarını belirtirken daha spesifik ve net olmalısınız. Örneğin, "I usually spend a lot of money on shoes and bags because I consider them important accessories." gibi daha açık ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I usually spend quite a lot of money on shoes and bags because I think they are important accessories that complete my outfits.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. "I love like a fashionable" ifadesi yanlış. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir şekilde tercihlerinizi açıklamalısınız. Örneğin, "I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes because I like to look stylish, but I also need comfort for sports." gibi cümleler kullanabilirsiniz.

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. I like fashionable shoes for style, but I also need comfortable ones for sports and daily activities.

× I'll buy one time in a month, maybe or two.

✓ I buy shoes once or twice a month.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'll buy' (future tense) when the context requires present habitual action. Also, 'one time in a month, maybe or two' is awkward; 'once or twice a month' is the correct expression.

× I buy every time.

✓ I buy them all the time.

The phrase 'I buy every time' is incomplete and unnatural. Adding 'them' and 'all the time' clarifies the habitual action in present tense.

× Using online platform for buying something, clothes, shoes everything because my city not give it this kind of stuffs and I'll buy online other time and every day.

✓ I use online platforms to buy things like clothes and shoes because my city doesn't provide these kinds of items, so I buy online sometimes and even every day.

Incorrect prepositions 'using online platform for buying' should be 'use online platforms to buy'. Also, 'my city not give it this kind of stuffs' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my city doesn't provide these kinds of items'. 'Other time and every day' is unclear; 'sometimes and even every day' is better.

× I use so much money spend on shoes and bags because bags and shoes are so important and cosmetics.

✓ I spend a lot of money on shoes and bags because they are very important to me, along with cosmetics.

'I use so much money spend' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I spend a lot of money'. Also, 'bags and shoes are so important and cosmetics' is unclear; it should specify that cosmetics are also important.

× This is my 3 obsessive compressive problems.

✓ These are my three obsessive-compulsive problems.

The original sentence has incorrect number agreement and word order. '3' should be spelled out as 'three', and 'obsessive compressive' is a mishearing of 'obsessive-compulsive'. Also, 'problems' should be plural and the sentence should be plural 'These are'.

× But I can buy so expensive shoes and bags.

✓ But I can buy very expensive shoes and bags.

'So expensive' is informal and less appropriate here; 'very expensive' is the correct adverb to modify 'shoes and bags'.

× Both of them because I love fashionable shoes, but I love my comfortable shoes because I do a lot of sports so I need to buy comfortable shoes.

✓ Both, because I love fashionable shoes, but I also love my comfortable shoes since I do a lot of sports and need to buy comfortable ones.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. Using 'both' alone is better. Also, 'comfortable shoes' is repeated unnecessarily; 'comfortable ones' is more natural.

× But I love like a fashionable and so I like a fashionable.

✓ But I like fashionable shoes, so I buy them as well.

The phrase 'love like a fashionable' is incorrect. The correct form is 'like fashionable shoes'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I buy all of them generally.

✓ Generally, I buy both types of shoes.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Placing 'generally' at the beginning and specifying 'both types of shoes' improves clarity and sentence structure.