Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "I really love" and "I really like". Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say "I enjoy buying shoes, especially from physical stores because I can try them on and check the quality. Additionally, I usually buy new shoes every few months depending on the season or specific needs."

Exemplo: I enjoy buying shoes, especially from physical stores because I can try them on and check their quality. Additionally, I usually buy new shoes every few months depending on the season or if I need something specific. Shopping in person also helps me find better deals and get advice from the staff.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and incomplete, which affects the coherence and effectiveness. Avoid filler words like "uh" and try to complete your sentences. Also, provide more specific details about your experience. For example, you could say "Yes, I have bought shoes online from a well-known store. Although the prices were quite high, the quality and style were good, so I was satisfied with my purchase."

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online from a reputable store. Although the prices were quite high, the quality and style were excellent, so I was happy with my purchase.

Sugestão: Your answer provides relevant information but contains some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to be more precise and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, use correct vocabulary such as "comfort" instead of "comfortability". For example, you could say "I usually buy a few pairs of new shoes each month, spending around 150 dollars per pair, depending on the quality and comfort."

Exemplo: I usually buy a few pairs of new shoes each month, spending around 150 dollars per pair, depending on the quality and comfort they offer.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some awkward phrasing and filler words. Avoid unnecessary details like "match my feet" and incorrect expressions such as "I'm a fashion man." Instead, be clear and concise. For example, you could say "I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy keeping up with trends and expressing my personal style."

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes because I enjoy keeping up with trends and expressing my personal style.

× Yes I really love.

✓ Yes, I really love it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'it' completes the sentence and clarifies what is loved. Also, a comma after 'Yes' improves readability.

× the prices is quite expensive uh,

✓ the prices are quite expensive, uh,

The subject 'prices' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Then I decided to buy from the the.

✓ Then I decided to buy from there.

The phrase 'from the the' is incorrect and unclear. Replacing it with 'from there' correctly refers to the previously mentioned store.

× I pay buy a few shoes in a month.

✓ I buy a few pairs of shoes in a month.

The phrase 'pay buy' is incorrect and redundant. Also, 'a few shoes' should be 'a few pairs of shoes' because shoes come in pairs.

× it depends on the quality and the comfortability.

✓ it depends on the quality and the comfort.

The word 'comfortability' is not commonly used; 'comfort' is the correct noun form to describe how comfortable something is.

× I prefer to buy uh, fashionable shoes and I love to match my feet, uh, and also underwear and my shoes,

✓ I prefer to buy fashionable shoes and I love to match them with my clothes and underwear,

The phrase 'match my feet' is incorrect; shoes are matched with clothes, not feet. Also, 'my shoes' is redundant here. Using 'them' refers back to 'fashionable shoes' correctly.