Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more complete and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more specific about your preferences.

Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often, usually once or twice a year when I really need a new pair. This is because I prefer to save money and only replace my shoes when the old ones are worn out. Moreover, I like to choose comfortable and durable shoes so I don't feel any discomfort while wearing them.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Use linking words to explain your experience clearly and provide more specific details about why you prefer physical stores.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but only once. I was a bit hesitant because the shoes didn't fit me properly when they arrived. Because of that experience, I usually prefer to buy shoes in physical stores where I can try them on first to ensure they fit well.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by adding linking words and slightly more detailed explanation to make it more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: Well, I usually spend around 2000 to 5000 pesos on shoes because I prefer to buy durable and comfortable ones. For example, I like brands like Crocs since they last long and are very comfortable to wear at work. Therefore, I don't buy shoes very often because I focus more on quality than quantity.

Sugestão: Complete your sentences and use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly. Also, try to finish your thoughts to avoid abrupt endings.

Exemplo: Personally, I prefer comfortable shoes because I spend most of my day at work on my feet moving around a lot. Comfortable shoes provide the necessary support and help me prevent foot pain, which is very important for me. Although fashionable shoes look great and are perfect for parties or special occasions, I prioritize comfort in my daily life.

× I don't buy shoes very often, usually once or twice a year when I really the new pair of shoes.

✓ I don't buy shoes very often, usually once or twice a year when I really need the new pair of shoes.

The original sentence is missing a verb after 'really'. The verb 'need' should be used here to complete the meaning. This is a verb form issue where the verb is omitted, causing the sentence to be incomplete.

× Besides, I like to choose comfortable and durable shoes so I don't feel the.

✓ Besides, I like to choose comfortable and durable shoes so I don't feel discomfort.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so I don't feel the.' It lacks the object or complement after 'feel the'. Adding 'discomfort' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I was bit hesitant because the shoes shoes didn't fit me properly when they arrive.

✓ I was a bit hesitant because the shoes didn't fit me properly when they arrived.

The sentence has a repeated word 'shoes shoes' and uses 'arrive' instead of the past tense 'arrived'. Also, 'a bit' is the correct phrase. The pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'shoes', but the verb tense needs correction.

× so I usually prefer buy shoes in physical stores where I can try them on tours.

✓ so I usually prefer to buy shoes in physical stores where I can try them on first.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb 'buy'. Also, 'tours' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'first' to indicate trying on before buying.

× For example, I like brands like Crocs because they last long and very comfortable to wear at work.

✓ For example, I like brands like Crocs because they last long and are very comfortable to wear at work.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' before 'very comfortable'. 'Comfortable' is an adjective and needs a linking verb to connect it to the subject.

× Although fashionable shoes look great and are perfect for parties or special.

✓ Although fashionable shoes look great and are perfect for parties or special occasions.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or special.' It needs a noun to complete the phrase, such as 'special occasions' to make the sentence complete and meaningful.