Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and be concise. For example, directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with linking words.

Exemplo: I don't often buy shoes because I usually wear sandals. However, when I was in college, I used to wear half shoes occasionally.

Sugestão: Improve your vocabulary by using the correct word 'footwear' instead of 'foodware'. Also, make your sentences more natural and coherent by using linking words and correct grammar.

Exemplo: No, I haven't bought shoes online because I prefer to buy footwear in person. This way, I can try them on before purchasing.

Sugestão: Use correct vocabulary like 'footwear' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I usually spend around ₹500 on footwear. However, if there is an important event, I might spend between ₹1000 and ₹2000.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to make it more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because they support my feet well. If shoes don't fit properly, it can affect my walking and cause discomfort.

× I do not usually use shoes so sometime back I use the type of half shoes for girls like when I was in college and all, but currently I'm using a regular Chapel rather than a shoe.

✓ I do not usually use shoes, so sometime back I used the type of half shoes for girls like when I was in college and all, but currently I'm using regular chappals rather than shoes.

The verb 'use' in 'I use the type of half shoes' should be in past tense 'used' because it refers to a past time 'sometime back' and 'when I was in college'. Also, 'Chapel' is corrected to 'chappals' which is the correct plural noun for footwear. The plural form 'shoes' is used instead of 'a shoe' to match the context.

× Not really, I'm not used to have the habit of buying foodware from online stores.

✓ Not really, I'm not used to having the habit of buying footwear from online stores.

The phrase 'used to' when followed by a verb should be followed by the '-ing' form, so 'used to have' should be 'used to having'. Also, 'foodware' is incorrect; the correct word is 'footwear'.

× I usually go to the shop and buy them in person only.

✓ I usually go to the shop and buy them only in person.

The adverb 'only' should be placed before the phrase it modifies for clarity. 'Only in person' is the correct placement to indicate the manner of purchase.

× I do not spend a very much amount on shoes.

✓ I do not spend a very large amount on shoes.

The phrase 'a very much amount' is incorrect. 'Much' is used with uncountable nouns without 'a'. The correct quantifier here is 'a very large amount' or 'much money'.

× I normally buy food wear in the range of around ₹500 unless it is an important function or an occasion to attend when I will buy something in the range of 1000 or 2000.

✓ I normally buy footwear in the range of around ₹500 unless it is an important function or an occasion to attend, when I buy something in the range of ₹1000 or ₹2000.

'Food wear' is incorrect; the correct word is 'footwear'. Also, 'when I will buy' is incorrect in this context; simple present 'when I buy' is used for future events in time clauses. Added commas for clarity.

× I prefer comfortable shoes rather than having fashionable shoes because shoes are the one which helps us to walk in a steady and nice way.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable shoes because shoes are the ones which help us to walk in a steady and nice way.

The phrase 'rather than having fashionable shoes' is incorrect; 'rather than fashionable shoes' is correct. Also, 'shoes are the one' should be 'shoes are the ones' because 'shoes' is plural, and 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural subject.

× So if we have any fit issues or any problem with that, it may really affect the way of our walking.

✓ So if we have any fit issues or any problem with them, it may really affect the way we walk.

The pronoun 'that' is incorrect when referring to plural 'issues'; it should be 'them'. Also, 'the way of our walking' is awkward; 'the way we walk' is more natural and grammatically correct.