Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially on weekends. I prefer shopping during sales because I can get good discounts from various brands.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Focus on directly answering the question, then provide specific details using linking words to make your response coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online. For example, I recently ordered a pair of ASICS sneakers online that cost around 6,500 rupees.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, avoid using '1:00' which is unclear; instead, use proper numbers and linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: I come from a middle-class family, so I usually spend between 1,000 to 2,000 rupees on a pair of shoes to stay within my budget.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Keep sentences concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Because I like to stay trendy, I buy stylish shoes, but I also make sure they are comfortable and reasonably priced.

× I like to buy shoes and I like to buy shops at the weekends and apart from this, I also like to buy shoes on sales record as that time I got a lot of discounts from brands and that's where like to buy uh, any shoes item on any sale.

✓ I like to buy shoes and I like to buy shoes at the weekends and apart from this, I also like to buy shoes on sale because at that time I get a lot of discounts from brands and that's where I like to buy any shoe item on any sale.

The phrase 'buy shops' is incorrect; it should be 'buy shoes'. Also, 'on sales record' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on sale'. The verb 'got' should be 'get' to match the present tense context. The sentence also missed the subject 'I' before 'like to buy'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I like to buy shoes and I like to buy shops at the weekends and apart from this, I also like to buy shoes on sales record as that time I got a lot of discounts from brands and that's where like to buy uh, any shoes item on any sale.

✓ I like to buy shoes and I like to buy shoes at the weekends and apart from this, I also like to buy shoes on sale because at that time I get a lot of discounts from brands and that's where I like to buy any shoe item on any sale.

The phrase 'on sales record' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on sale'. Also, 'at the weekends' is acceptable but 'on weekends' is more common in Indian English. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× Nowadays technology is at the peak level and that's why I also use the technology and that's why I order few sneakers on online and I also order one shoes whose is from which is from ASICS and that is around 6.5 K and that I order online.

✓ Nowadays technology is at its peak level and that's why I also use technology and that's why I order a few sneakers online and I also ordered one pair of shoes which is from ASICS and that costs around 6.5 K and I ordered that online.

The phrase 'order few sneakers on online' is incorrect; it should be 'order a few sneakers online'. 'One shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'one pair of shoes' because 'shoes' is plural. Also, 'whose is from which is from' is incorrect; it should be 'which is from'. The verb tense is corrected to past tense 'ordered' to match the context. These corrections address pluralization and article usage.

× Nowadays technology is at the peak level and that's why I also use the technology and that's why I order few sneakers on online and I also order one shoes whose is from which is from ASICS and that is around 6.5 K and that I order online.

✓ Nowadays technology is at its peak level and that's why I also use technology and that's why I order a few sneakers online and I also ordered one pair of shoes which is from ASICS and that costs around 6.5 K and I ordered that online.

The preposition 'on online' is incorrect; the correct usage is 'online' without a preposition. Prepositions must be used correctly to maintain natural and grammatically correct sentences.

× Well I am from middle class family and that's why I do not like to spend a lot of money on shoes and I think I spend around 1:00 to 2K on one shoe item and it's my budget.

✓ Well, I am from a middle-class family and that's why I do not like to spend a lot of money on shoes and I think I spend around 1,000 to 2,000 on one shoe item and that's my budget.

The phrase 'middle class family' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, '1:00 to 2K' is unclear; it should be '1,000 to 2,000' to indicate the amount. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Here I have the mixed opinion. I like the both comfortable and fashionable because I'm a fashionable person and I like to buy a new trendy clothes or an shoe item and the shoe which is for in my comfort zone and I also like to buy their shoes and which is which also have a reasonable price.

✓ Here I have a mixed opinion. I like both comfortable and fashionable shoes because I'm a fashionable person and I like to buy new trendy clothes or a shoe item that is within my comfort zone. I also like to buy their shoes which also have a reasonable price.

The phrase 'the mixed opinion' should be 'a mixed opinion'. 'The both comfortable and fashionable' should be 'both comfortable and fashionable shoes'. 'A new trendy clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is plural so 'new trendy clothes' without 'a' is correct. 'An shoe item' should be 'a shoe item' because 'shoe' starts with a consonant sound. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and grammatical correctness.