Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, say "Yes, I like buying shoes because there are many attractive designs and colors. I often buy shoes to match my style." Avoid redundancy and incorrect word usage like "color compound."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because there are many attractive designs and colors. I usually buy shoes a few times a year to update my wardrobe.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a direct answer and support it with clear reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and I can easily find shoes that match my office outfits."

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and I can easily find shoes that match my office outfits. Moreover, online shopping saves me time.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and lacks specific details. Try to give a direct response with clear supporting information. For example, "I usually spend more money on shoes than other clothes because I think shoes are important for my overall look."

Exemplo: I usually spend more money on shoes than on other clothes because I believe good shoes complete my outfit and last longer.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to give a clear preference and explain your reason with specific details. For example, "I prefer comfortable shoes because I have wide feet, and comfort is more important for me than fashion."

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I have wide feet, so comfort is more important to me than fashion. However, I also like shoes that look nice.

× I like buying some shoes because there are so many pretty shoes and many fashion company make some shoes very fascinated and attracting people and I like the color compound.

✓ I like buying shoes because there are so many pretty shoes and many fashion companies make shoes that are very fascinating and attractive, and I like the color combinations.

The word 'company' should be plural 'companies' to agree with 'many'. 'Some shoes' is unnecessary; 'shoes' is sufficient. 'Fascinated' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'fascinating'. 'Attracting people' should be 'attractive'. 'Color compound' is incorrect; the correct term is 'color combinations'. These corrections fix pluralization and adjective usage.

× many fashion company make some shoes very fascinated and attracting people

✓ many fashion companies make shoes that are very fascinating and attractive

'Company' should be plural 'companies' to match 'many'. 'Some shoes' is unnecessary; 'shoes' is sufficient. 'Fascinated' is incorrect; 'fascinating' is the correct adjective. 'Attracting people' should be 'attractive' to describe the shoes.

× I like buying some shoes

✓ I like buying shoes

'Some' is unnecessary here because 'shoes' is a plural countable noun used generally. Removing 'some' makes the sentence more natural.

× make some shoes very fascinated and attracting people

✓ make shoes that are very fascinating and attractive

'Fascinated' is a past participle and incorrect here; 'fascinating' is the correct adjective to describe shoes. 'Attracting people' should be replaced with 'attractive' to properly describe the shoes.

× I like the color compound

✓ I like the color combinations

'Color compound' is not a correct phrase; the correct term is 'color combinations' to describe the mix of colors.

× I often use some online platform with buying some shoes

✓ I often use some online platforms to buy shoes

'With buying' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' when expressing purpose. Also, 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match 'some'.

× I often use some online platform

✓ I often use some online platforms

'Some' implies plural, so 'platform' should be plural 'platforms'.

× it can, uh, it's easy to match my office with, uh, I already with something I already get and, and also it can be.

✓ It is easy to match my office clothes with things I already have, and it is also convenient.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× match my office with, uh, I already with something I already get

✓ match my office clothes with things I already have

'Match my office with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'match my office clothes with'. 'I already get' should be 'I already have'.

× I can suspect precise uh, money

✓ I cannot specify the exact amount of money

'Suspect precise money' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'specify the exact amount of money'.

× when I spend my money for some outfits

✓ when I spend my money on some outfits

'Spend money for' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on'.

× I pro umm, proportion for shoes are bigger than other things

✓ I think the proportion for shoes is bigger than for other things

'Proportion for shoes are' is incorrect; 'proportion' is singular, so 'is' is correct. Also, 'for other things' is clearer.

× proportion for shoes are bigger than other things

✓ proportion for shoes is bigger than for other things

'Proportion' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'than other things' should be 'than for other things' for clarity.

× there are many, uh, both of both 2 advantages involved like fashion, fashiona fashionable and comfortable

✓ there are many advantages of both types, like fashionable and comfortable

'Both of both 2 advantages' is incorrect and redundant. 'Many advantages of both types' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× fashion, fashiona fashionable and comfortable

✓ fashionable and comfortable

'Fashiona' is a typo and should be 'fashionable'. The word 'fashion' alone is not an adjective here.

× more because my uh, feet shape is very.

✓ more because my feet shape is very particular.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'particular' or another adjective completes the thought.