Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'um' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, be careful with word choice and pronunciation, for example, 'shows' should be 'shoes'. Keep your answer concise and directly answer the question with clear supporting details.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially during sales or when I need a new pair.

Sugestão: Focus on clear pronunciation and correct word usage, such as 'bought' instead of 'both' and 'wide' instead of 'white'. Use linking words like 'for example' properly and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. Try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and sizes without leaving my home. For example, I purchased running shoes from an international website that offered better prices and more options than local stores.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and be precise with your vocabulary. Instead of 'peaceful', use 'durable' or 'long-lasting' to describe shoes. Also, specify the currency to make your answer clearer. Keep your answer structured with a topic sentence and supporting details.

Exemplo: I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around 500 to 1000 dollars per pair. I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are comfortable and durable.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and incorrect word usage such as 'shows' instead of 'shoes' and 'food health' instead of 'foot health'. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I value foot health. For example, when I walk or stand for long periods, comfortable shoes help prevent pain and discomfort.

× I like, enjoy buying shows quite a lot because they allow me, uh, to express my personal style and I usually buy new shows every few minutes and especially when there was our sales and when I need something uh, to shows and whenever I.

✓ I like and enjoy buying shoes quite a lot because they allow me to express my personal style, and I usually buy new shoes every few months, especially when there are sales or when I need something.

The word 'shows' is a misspelling of 'shoes'. Also, 'every few minutes' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'every few months' to indicate frequency of purchase. 'There was our sales' is incorrect; it should be 'there are sales' to match plural and present tense. The sentence structure is also confusing and needs to be clarified for better understanding.

× Yes, I have both shoes online several times.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online several times.

The phrase 'have both shoes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have bought shoes' to indicate past action using present perfect tense.

× It is very convenient because I can browse a white variety of styles and size without leaving my home.

✓ It is very convenient because I can browse a wide variety of styles and sizes without leaving my home.

The word 'white' is a typo and should be 'wide'. Also, 'size' should be plural 'sizes' to match 'variety of styles'.

× For example, I want purchased running shows from an international website which offered better price and more option than low.

✓ For example, I purchased running shoes from an international website which offered better prices and more options than local stores.

The phrase 'I want purchased' is incorrect; it should be 'I purchased' to indicate past tense. 'Shows' should be 'shoes'. 'Better price' and 'more option' should be plural 'better prices' and 'more options'. 'Than low' is unclear and should be 'than local stores' or similar.

× I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around 500 to 1000 per pair.

✓ I usually spend a moderate amount of money on shoes, typically around $50 to $100 per pair.

The amounts '500 to 1000' are likely incorrect or missing currency units; typical shoe prices are in tens or hundreds, so adding currency and adjusting numbers makes the sentence clearer.

× I prefer investing in good quality shows that are very comfortable and peaceful.

✓ I prefer investing in good quality shoes that are very comfortable and durable.

'Shows' should be 'shoes'. 'Peaceful' is not an appropriate adjective for shoes; 'durable' or 'long-lasting' would be better.

× Example, I prefer comfortable shows over fashionable ones because, uh, I value particularly on food health, uh, uh, for example, when I have a walk, I stands for a long periods.

✓ For example, I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I particularly value foot health. For example, when I walk, I stand for long periods.

'Shows' should be 'shoes'. 'Value particularly on food health' is incorrect; it should be 'particularly value foot health'. 'I have a walk' should be 'when I walk'. 'I stands' should be 'I stand'. 'For a long periods' should be 'for long periods'.