Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, correct minor grammar errors such as 'a comfortable shoes' to 'comfortable shoes'.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't shop for them often. However, whenever I need new ones, I prefer to try different styles, especially comfortable shoes, because I stand and walk a lot at work.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas logically. Also, use plural forms correctly, e.g., 'physical shops' instead of 'physical shop'.

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer physical shops over online stores because I like to try shoes on. Although I have bought slippers online, I avoid buying shoes this way since sizes can vary between brands.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent by linking sentences and correcting grammar errors such as 'different one' to 'different ones'. Also, avoid short, fragmented sentences and provide a clear topic sentence.

Exemplo: I usually spend less than $100 on shoes. The most expensive pair I bought cost $100, but I prefer trying different affordable options rather than buying expensive ones.

Sugestão: Avoid repeating ideas and filler words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'although' to make your answer more coherent. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'the comfortable one' to 'comfortable shoes'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I stand and walk a lot at work, which lasts six days a week. Although I like fashionable shoes, comfort is more important to me.

× I need a comfortable shoes.

✓ I need comfortable shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I like to go and buy and try a different one, specially the comfortable one

✓ I like to go and buy and try different ones, especially the comfortable ones

When referring to multiple items, 'one' should be pluralized to 'ones'. Also, 'specially' is incorrect here; 'especially' is the correct adverb to emphasize preference.

× I prefer physical shop over the online one.

✓ I prefer physical shops over the online ones.

The phrase 'physical shop' should be pluralized to 'physical shops' to match 'online ones'. Also, 'over' is correctly used here to indicate preference.

× I have bought slippers but not actually the shoes

✓ I have bought slippers but not actually shoes

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'shoes' in this context. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.

× I like to try them on and check on me rather than uh, just choosing the size from the online

✓ I like to try them on and check if they fit me rather than just choosing the size online

The phrase 'check on me' is incorrect; it should be 'check if they fit me' to express trying shoes for fit. Also, 'from the online' is incorrect; 'online' alone suffices.

× I tried on different one rather than buying the expensive one.

✓ I tried on different ones rather than buying the expensive one.

When referring to multiple items, 'one' should be pluralized to 'ones'.

× I prefer the comfortable one because I have to do lots of standing and walking around the work

✓ I prefer the comfortable ones because I have to do lots of standing and walking around at work

'One' should be pluralized to 'ones' when referring to shoes in general. Also, 'around the work' is incorrect; it should be 'around at work' or simply 'at work'.