Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and repetitions. Try to give a clear and concise response directly addressing the question, and avoid filler words. Also, provide a specific reason or example to support your opinion.

Exemplo: No, I don't enjoy buying shoes because it often takes a lot of time and can be stressful. Instead, I prefer to spend my money on other things like books or hobbies.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors and repetitions. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, especially during sales. I find it convenient and sometimes necessary when I can't visit stores in person.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear due to hesitation and unclear currency reference. Provide a clear amount and explain why you consider it reasonable, using linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: I usually spend around 200 to 300 baht on shoes because I think this is a reasonable budget that helps me save money while still getting good quality.

Sugestão: Your answer has many hesitations and lacks fluency. Try to give a clear preference with reasons, using linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid unnecessary fillers.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because comfort is more important to me, especially if I wear them for long periods. Also, I look for good quality to ensure durability.

× I do not uh, enjoy buying shoes because it is stressful and uh, consuming, time consuming, uh, instead, instead I want, I prefer to spend more, spend money in other things like uh.

✓ I do not uh, enjoy buying shoes because it is stressful and uh, time-consuming, uh, instead, I prefer to spend money on other things like uh.

The phrase 'consuming, time consuming' is incorrect; 'time-consuming' is the correct adjective form using a hyphen. Also, 'spend money in other things' should be 'spend money on other things' because 'spend money on' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Yes, I have ever bought some shoes online when it was in was a sale and I also want my I also wanted to I was in the mood for buying and it is necessary.

✓ Yes, I have bought some shoes online when there was a sale, and I also wanted to because I was in the mood for buying and it was necessary.

The phrase 'have ever bought' is incorrect; 'have bought' is correct in present perfect tense. 'It was in was a sale' is incorrect; it should be 'there was a sale' to correctly use 'there be' structure. Also, 'I also want my I also wanted to' is confusing and should be simplified to 'I also wanted to'. The tense consistency is maintained by using past tense 'was' and 'wanted'.

× I usually spend 2 or 200 or 300 MB in my in buying my shoes because I think it is one reasonable budget and it makes it can make me save money.

✓ I usually spend 200 or 300 MB on buying my shoes because I think it is a reasonable budget and it can help me save money.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when talking about spending money. Also, 'one reasonable budget' should be 'a reasonable budget' for correct article usage. The phrase 'it makes it can make me save money' is redundant; 'it can help me save money' is clearer.

× I prefer comfortable shoes, uh, to fashionable shoes because, uh, uh, because I think uh, it uh, comfortable shoes is more important for me. Uh, and uh, with good quality. Yeah, one hour.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes because I think comfortable shoes are more important for me and should be of good quality.

The phrase 'comfortable shoes is' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; combining the ideas into one sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.