Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答较为完整，但句子较长且有语法错误，如“in my high school”应为“when I was in high school”，“liked buying shoes very much every two or three months”表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达。

Exemplo: I used to buy shoes every two or three months when I was in high school because we wore uniforms and shoes were a way to show our personality. However, now I rarely buy shoes.

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇“can can”，且表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更自然的连接词，并且回答中可以加入个人体验使内容更具体。

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it's very popular in China. I find that online prices are usually cheaper than in stores, so I prefer shopping this way.

Sugestão: 回答中有拼写错误“pier”应为“pair”，句子结构不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免重复，句子更简洁明了。

Exemplo: I usually spend about 1000 RMB on a pair of shoes. Sometimes my parents buy shoes for me, so I don't have to pay.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误，如“uncomfortable shoes is more important”应为“comfortable shoes are more important”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致，表达观点时更明确，避免模糊。

Exemplo: When I was in high school, I preferred fashionable shoes. However, now I think comfortable shoes are more important because fashion trends change quickly.

× When I was in my high school, I liked buying shoes very much every two or three months because at that time we had to wear uniforms every day and could only express our personalities through shoes.

✓ When I was in high school, I liked buying shoes very much every two or three months because at that time we had to wear uniforms every day and could only express our personalities through shoes.

“in my high school”中的“my”是不必要的，正确表达是“in high school”，表示在高中阶段。

× Online shopping is very popular in China, so now I always buy them online and sometimes people can can find it is cheaper to buy them online than offline.

✓ Online shopping is very popular in China, so now I always buy shoes online and sometimes people can find it is cheaper to buy them online than offline.

“buy them online”中的“them”指代不明确，前文没有明确的复数名词，改为“buy shoes online”更清晰。

× Online shopping is very popular in China, so now I always buy them online and sometimes people can can find it is cheaper to buy them online than offline.

✓ Online shopping is very popular in China, so now I always buy them online and sometimes people can find it is cheaper to buy them online than offline.

句中“can can”重复，应删除一个“can”。

× My shoes are not very expensive, around 1000 RMB each pier, and sometimes my parents will buy shoes for me and for me they are free.

✓ My shoes are not very expensive, around 1000 RMB each pair, and sometimes my parents will buy shoes for me and for me they are free.

“each pier”应为“each pair”，“pier”是码头的意思，拼写错误。

× When I was a high school student, I would definitely choose the fashionable shoes, but now I think uncomfortable shoes is more important, and sometimes some fashionable ones will become outdated one day.

✓ When I was a high school student, I would definitely choose fashionable shoes, but now I think comfortable shoes are more important, and sometimes some fashionable ones will become outdated one day.

“the fashionable shoes”中“the”不必要，且“uncomfortable shoes is”主谓不一致，应改为“comfortable shoes are”，保持复数一致。