Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, especially during different seasons. When I was at university, I had more free time to shop both online and in stores.

Sugestão: 句子结构不完整，时态错误较多，建议使用完整句子并注意主谓一致，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I buy shoes online quite often because with the development of technology, online shopping has become more convenient.

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并具体说明花费和感受。

Exemplo: Last summer holiday, I traveled to Germany and spent about €100 on a pair of boots. I think these boots not only look good but also have sentimental value for me.

Sugestão: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并解释理由。

Exemplo: I prefer fashionable shoes because I like to keep up with trends. Although comfortable shoes are popular for their practicality, I enjoy wearing stylish ones.

× Is of course I quite keen on buying shoes in different seasons, especially at university because that time I have a more free time to shopping online or on shop.

✓ Of course, I am quite keen on buying shoes in different seasons, especially at university because at that time I have more free time to shop online or in shops.

句子中动词形式使用错误，“Is of course I”应为“Of course, I am”，动词“shopping”应改为动词原形“shop”，因为前面有“to”表示不定式，后面应接动词原形。

× Of course, I buying shoes online quite often because with the development of technologies, online shopping become the more convenient.

✓ Of course, I buy shoes online quite often because with the development of technologies, online shopping has become more convenient.

“I buying”应改为“I buy”，因为主语是第一人称单数，动词应为一般现在时形式；“online shopping become”应改为“online shopping has become”，表示现在完成时态，强调发展过程。

× Last summer holiday I travel in Germany, I spend €100 to buy our boots.

✓ Last summer holiday I traveled in Germany, I spent €100 to buy our boots.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式，“travel”改为“traveled”，“spend”改为“spent”。

× I think that boots not only make me make me feels decent, but also can offer some sentimental value to satisfy my mental.

✓ I think that boots not only make me feel decent, but also can offer some sentimental value to satisfy my mind.

“make me make me feels”重复且错误，应为“make me feel”；“mental”用词不当，应为“mind”表示心理。

× Last summer holiday I travel in Germany, I spend €100 to buy our boots.

✓ Last summer holiday I traveled in Germany, I spent €100 to buy my boots.

“our boots”指代不明确，应该用“my boots”表示自己的鞋子。

× I think that boots not only make me make me feels decent, but also can offer some sentimental value to satisfy my mental.

✓ I think that boots not only make me feel decent, but also can offer some sentimental value to satisfy my mind.

“feels”应为动词原形“feel”，因为前面有“make”作为使役动词，后面接动词原形；“mental”用词不当，应改为“mind”。

× But personally choosing the fashion shoes was always be my go tooth.

✓ But personally, choosing fashionable shoes has always been my go-to.

“go tooth”是错误表达，应为“go-to”表示首选；“fashion shoes”应改为“fashionable shoes”；时态应为现在完成时“has always been”。

× But personally choosing the fashion shoes was always be my go tooth.

✓ But personally, choosing fashionable shoes has always been my go-to.

“fashion shoes”应改为形容词形式“fashionable shoes”，修饰名词。

× I can't confess that many focus would like to pick the comfortable shoes because that is very accessible and affordable.

✓ I can't deny that many people would like to pick comfortable shoes because they are very accessible and affordable.

“confess”用词不当，应为“deny”；“focus”应为“people”；“the comfortable shoes”改为“comfortable shoes”；“that is”改为“they are”，主谓一致。