Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, avoid filler words, and give a clear, concise frequency. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don’t do it very often. Generally I buy shoes only when I need them — for example, new running trainers every six months or heels for special events.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (past simple and modal verbs), remove repetition, and give a concise reason with one example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online; however, my experience was poor because they often arrived in the wrong size. For instance, the trainers I ordered last year were too small, so I now prefer to try shoes on in a store.

Sugestão: State a clear estimate or range, use correct tense and article usage, and give specific reasons with linking words. Keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Exemplo: I buy shoes only occasionally, so I usually spend between $50 and $120 per pair. I’m willing to pay more for running shoes or party shoes because comfort and durability matter when I wear them for long periods.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain briefly with a specific reason and an example. Use clearer phrasing (’fashionable’ vs ‘comfortable’) and a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I wear them for many hours. For example, I choose stylish sneakers that have good arch support so I look good but don’t get sore feet.

× Whenever I need to buy any kind of shoes like uh, heels or comfortable one or sneakers, I try to bought them that time.

✓ Whenever I need to buy any kind of shoes like heels, comfortable ones, or sneakers, I try to buy them at that time.

The verb 'bought' is the past tense, not the past participle needed after 'try to'. After 'try to' we must use the base form 'buy'. Also plural form 'comfortable ones' is needed for consistency and 'at that time' is the correct phrase. Suggestion: use 'try to buy' and match singular/plural nouns correctly.

× Otherwise I do not prefer to bought it in regular basis.

✓ Otherwise I do not prefer to buy it on a regular basis.

Plural/singular and verb form errors: 'bought' is past tense; after 'prefer to' use base verb 'buy'. Also the correct expression is 'on a regular basis' not 'in regular basis'. Suggestion: use 'prefer to buy' and 'on a regular basis'.

× Yeah I bought shoes online but it didn't didn't goes well because every time I ordered anything online it give me a wrong size or did not fit in my uh in my feet.

✓ Yes, I bought shoes online but it didn't go well because every time I ordered something online it gave me the wrong size or did not fit my feet.

Multiple tense errors: after 'didn't' the base form 'go' is required, not 'goes'. Use 'it gave me' (past tense) to match 'I ordered'. Also 'anything' is better as 'something' and 'fit my feet' is correct word order. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use base verbs after 'didn't'.

× So that's why I do not recommend it to bought it online or I would never bought it online.

✓ So that's why I do not recommend buying them online or I would never buy them online.

After 'recommend' we use the gerund 'buying' or 'recommend that someone buy'. 'Bought' is past tense and incorrect here. Also use 'buy' (base form) for 'would never buy'. Match plural 'them' with 'shoes'. Suggestion: use 'recommend buying' or 'recommend that you do not buy'.

× As I mentioned earlier, I do not buy shoes regular basis. I bought it occasionally.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I do not buy shoes on a regular basis. I buy them occasionally.

Tense inconsistency: 'I do not buy' (present) should pair with 'I buy them occasionally' (present habitual), not 'I bought' (past). Also include 'on a' before 'regular basis' and use plural 'them' for shoes. Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual actions and match plurals.

× So whenever I buy anything shoe for my for running or any party, I try to bought it quite expensively because it's not about just shoe, it also about our comfort because I we have to wear it for a long time.

✓ So whenever I buy any shoes for running or for a party, I try to buy them quite expensively because it's not just about the shoes; it's also about comfort since we have to wear them for a long time.

Use base form 'buy' after 'try to' (not 'bought'). Fix noun forms: 'any shoes', 'for a party', plural 'them'. Replace 'quite expensively' with 'buy them relatively expensive' is awkward; 'buy them at a higher price' or 'buy higher-quality/more expensive ones' is clearer. Also correct 'it's not just about the shoes' and remove extra pronoun 'I'. Suggestion: use base verbs after modal/infinitive structures and correct noun plurality and article usage.

× It's a contradictory question for me because I prefer fashionable with comfortable shoes because I wear shoes for a long period of time, so I need to buy them for a fashionable since and also comfortable since.

✓ It's a difficult question for me because I prefer fashionable yet comfortable shoes. I wear shoes for long periods, so I need to buy ones that are both stylish and comfortable.

Awkward structure and incorrect word choice: 'contradictory question' is unnatural; 'difficult' or 'tricky' fits better. 'Prefer fashionable with comfortable shoes' should be 'prefer fashionable yet comfortable shoes'. 'For a long period of time' can be 'for long periods'. 'For a fashionable since' is incorrect — likely intended 'that are fashionable' and 'comfortable'. Suggestion: simplify structure, use 'yet' or 'and' to connect adjectives, and use 'that are' before adjective phrases.

× it give me a wrong size or did not fit in my uh in my feet.

✓ it gave me the wrong size or did not fit my feet.

Preposition 'in' before 'my feet' is unnecessary; English uses 'fit someone' or 'fit someone/something on the feet' but here 'did not fit my feet' is correct. Also verb agreement and tense corrected to 'gave' to match past context. Suggestion: remove unnecessary prepositions and keep tense consistent.

× I do not prefer to bought it in regular basis.

✓ I do not prefer to buy them on a regular basis.

Pronoun disagreement: 'it' refers to 'shoes' (plural) so use 'them'. Also 'bought' is wrong (see earlier). Use 'on a regular basis'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.