Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần trả lời ngắn gọn và trực tiếp hơn, dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng rồi thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết hợp lý. Tránh phát ngôn lặp và cấu trúc ngữ pháp không chính xác. Chú ý thì động từ và trật tự từ (ví dụ: “I don’t buy shoes often” thay vì diễn đạt vòng vo). Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (because, so, therefore).

Exemplo: I don't buy shoes very often. I usually stick to shoes that are comfortable and durable because I prefer not to replace them frequently. So I only buy new ones when my current shoes are worn out.

Sugestão: Cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên (không đảo ngữ ‘Never have I ever’ trong hội thoại thông thường) và rút gọn ý lặp. Nên nêu lý do cụ thể hơn (ví dụ: không chắc về kích cỡ, màu sắc khác với ảnh). Dùng liên từ để nối lý do (because, so).

Exemplo: No, I have never bought shoes online because I worry about the fit and the pictures often exaggerate the product. I prefer to try shoes on in a store so I can check the size and comfort before buying.

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp với con số rõ ràng và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do. Tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (depends, roughly). Có thể thêm so sánh hoặc điều kiện để làm câu thêm cụ thể.

Exemplo: It depends on the type of shoes, but I usually spend about 1,000,000 VND. I prefer affordable shoes that still offer good quality, so I avoid expensive brands unless I really need something special.

Sugestão: Trả lời thẳng và rõ ràng bằng một câu chủ đề rồi bổ sung 1–2 câu giải thích ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc (e.g., 'I have to be on my feet' thay vì 'work on my own feet'). Tránh mơ hồ và lặp ý.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because my job requires me to be on my feet all day. For example, I avoid high heels and choose supportive sneakers or flats that allow me to walk and stand for long periods.

× You might consider it a win a woman to buy a lot of shoes for yourself, but the situation doesn't apply for me since I just wear the shoes that I feel comfortable and I could wear them for the long period of time without changing it.

✓ You might consider it a win for a woman to buy a lot of shoes for herself, but that does not apply to me since I only wear shoes that I feel comfortable in and I can wear them for a long period of time without changing them.

The original sentence has subject-verb and pronoun agreement errors and incorrect pronoun forms. 'a win a woman' should be 'a win for a woman' (missing preposition), 'yourself' should match the subject 'a woman' so use 'herself', 'the situation doesn't apply for me' should be 'does not apply to me' (correct preposition), 'I just wear the shoes that I feel comfortable' needs a preposition 'in' after 'comfortable', 'I could wear them for the long period of time' should be 'I can wear them for a long period of time' (modal choice and article), and 'without changing it' must agree in number with 'shoes', so 'without changing them'. Suggestions: ensure subjects and pronouns agree in person and number, use correct prepositions ('for' vs 'to', 'comfortable in'), and match plurality of pronouns with nouns.

× Never have I ever tried to bought shoes online since I don't believe the quality of those picture the advertisement kind of exaggerating their products.

✓ I have never tried to buy shoes online since I do not believe the quality shown in those pictures; advertisements tend to exaggerate their products.

The original mixes present perfect structure with incorrect verb form 'bought' after 'tried to' — the infinitive 'to buy' is required. Also 'Never have I ever' is awkward; use 'I have never'. 'Those picture' must be plural 'pictures' and needs a preposition 'shown in' or a possessive. 'The advertisement kind of exaggerating' is ungrammatical — use 'advertisements tend to exaggerate'. Suggestions: after 'try to' use base verb form, use correct noun plural forms, and use proper verb constructions for general statements.

× Therefore I don't believe it. And when we buy shoes, we have to actually try it for real, try them for real, we have to put them on.

✓ Therefore I do not believe them. And when we buy shoes, we have to actually try them on in real life; we have to put them on.

Pronoun and preposition issues: 'believe it' is vague when referring to 'advertisements' (plural), so use 'believe them'. 'Try it for real' is incorrect: 'try them on' is the correct phrasal verb for footwear, and 'in real life' or 'for real' can be used but keep phrasing consistent. Suggestions: use appropriate phrasal verbs (try on) and match pronoun number to the noun referred to.

× I think it will depends on the shoes that I bought but basically it will be like roughly 1,000,000 VND.

✓ I think it depends on the shoes that I buy, but basically it will be roughly 1,000,000 VND.

'Will depends' mixes future and present and has subject-verb disagreement; use 'depends' after 'I think'. 'That I bought' is past tense but the speaker refers to general purchases, so use present 'that I buy'. 'It will be like roughly' is wordy — 'it will be roughly' is better. Suggestions: keep tense consistent for habitual actions (simple present), and ensure verb agreement.

× I don't want to spend too much money on shoes, I mean even like the good quality shoes with affordable price is acceptable for me so.

✓ I don't want to spend too much money on shoes; even good-quality shoes at an affordable price are acceptable to me.

Subject-verb agreement and article/adjective use: plural subject 'shoes' requires plural verb 'are' not 'is'. 'the good quality shoes' should be 'good-quality shoes' (hyphenated compound adjective) and 'with affordable price' should be 'at an affordable price'. Remove filler words like 'so' at the end. Suggestions: match verb number to subject, use correct adjective forms and prepositions for price expressions.

× Of course, I would go for the latter since my work requires me to move a lot to travel a lot, I have to work on my own feet basically every day.

✓ Of course, I would choose the latter since my work requires me to travel a lot; I have to be on my feet almost every day.

Tense and collocation issues: 'move a lot to travel a lot' is repetitive and awkward; 'requires me to travel a lot' is clearer. 'Work on my own feet' is incorrect collocation — the correct phrase is 'be on my feet'. 'Basically every day' is informal; 'almost every day' is more natural. Suggestions: use natural collocations (be on one's feet) and avoid repetition.

× Therefore the comfortable shoes will be better option for me. I mean the high heel all like the fashionable shoes.

✓ Therefore comfortable shoes would be a better option for me. I mean high heels and other fashionable shoes are not suitable.

Article and adjective issues: 'the comfortable shoes' should be 'comfortable shoes' or 'a better option'. Missing article 'a' before 'better option'. 'the high heel all like the fashionable shoes' is ungrammatical; use 'high heels and other fashionable shoes'. Suggestions: use correct countable forms ('high heels'), include necessary articles, and restructure to make contrast clear.