Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện điểm ngữ pháp và rõ ràng bằng cách trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn và tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ: ‘a lot of sales’, ‘bear’). Nên nói rõ tần suất (per month / per year) và giải thích ngắn gọn lý do với liên từ hợp lý như 'but' hoặc 'so'. Hãy giữ tối đa 3–4 câu tự nhiên.

Exemplo: Yes, I used to buy shoes quite often because it was a hobby, but now I buy far less. I usually purchase one or two pairs a year because I need to save money for other expenses. However, I still browse sales online when I have time.

Sugestão: Cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp, dùng liên từ để làm rõ lý do và kết quả. Tránh lỗi từ như 'Sue' và cụm 'reduce too much'. Nên nói 2–3 câu: khẳng định + lý do cụ thể (vouchers, convenience, delivery) + ví dụ ngắn nếu cần.

Exemplo: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is very convenient and there are usually vouchers that lower the price. For example, I recently bought trainers on an app with a 20% voucher and had them delivered to my door within two days.

Sugestão: Nói cụ thể về số tiền bằng cách dùng đơn vị phù hợp (e.g., 'million VND') và cấu trúc rõ ràng: quá khứ vs hiện tại. Tránh nói mơ hồ ('big numb down'). Thêm liên từ để so sánh và giải thích mục đích tiết kiệm. Giữ 2–3 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

Exemplo: In the past I spent a lot on sports shoes, around 6 or 7 million VND per pair. Now I find them expensive, so I try to save money and buy shoes less often to cover other expenses.

Sugestão: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cấu trúc câu và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer...). Sau đó dùng liên từ ('if', 'however') để so sánh và đưa ví dụ cụ thể cho từng trường hợp. Tránh câu lặp và lỗi như 'it's fixed'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes for everyday activities because they support my feet during exercise or long walks. However, I choose fashionable shoes for formal events or parties when appearance matters more.

× I used to buy a lot of sales because it has been my hobby but now I need to spend more money to the other things so now I just buy one or two bear a month a year.

✓ I used to buy a lot during sales because it was my hobby, but now I need to spend money on other things, so now I only buy one or two pairs a year.

Errors: incorrect past/present reference and verb forms, wrong phrase 'buy a lot of sales', incorrect article and plural for 'pair'. Suggestion: use 'used to' with past explanation 'was my hobby'; say 'during sales' for shopping events; use 'spend money on other things'; 'one or two pairs a year' for correct plural noun and frequency.

× Of course because it is very convenient and sometime you buy Sue in on the app they get you some voucher and the cost can reduce too much so so you just wait from home and they provide it to you.

✓ Of course, because it is very convenient and sometimes when you buy shoes on an app they give you some vouchers and the cost can be reduced a lot, so you just wait at home and they deliver them to you.

Errors: wrong prepositions and words ('buy Sue in on the app', 'wait from home'); incorrect adverb form 'sometime'. Suggestion: use 'buy shoes on an app', 'give you vouchers', 'cost can be reduced', 'wait at home', and 'deliver them' for correct phrasal use.

× In the past I used to spend too much money for sports shoes, umm around 6 or 7 million big numb down.

✓ In the past I used to spend too much money on sports shoes, around six or seven million dong.

Errors: preposition 'for' should be 'on', and 'shoes' is fine but currency phrasing was incorrect. Suggestion: use 'spend money on' and write the currency unit clearly (e.g. 'million dong').

× But now it is I think it's very expensive so I need to save the money to do all the things.

✓ But now I think they are very expensive, so I need to save money for other things.

Errors: awkward pronoun 'it is I think it's', wrong singular/plural agreement 'it' for shoes, and unnecessary article 'the' in 'the money' and 'to do all the things'. Suggestion: say 'I think they are very expensive' and 'save money for other things'.

× I think it's depend on where you go, what you do and what your purpose you want.

✓ I think it depends on where you go, what you do and what your purpose is.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'it's depend' should be 'it depends', and redundant phrase 'what your purpose you want'. Suggestion: use 'it depends' and a clear clause 'what your purpose is'.

× If you want to do exercise, running, work around is so comfortable shoes.

✓ If you want to exercise, run, or work, comfortable shoes are better.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and word order, 'do exercise, running, work around' is ungrammatical, and 'is so comfortable shoes' mixes verb agreement and noun. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to exercise', base verb 'run', and plural noun with correct verb 'comfortable shoes are better'.

× But you went to you go to the event, it's fixed.

✓ But when you go to an event, you should wear formal shoes.

Errors: mixed past 'went' and present 'go', unclear 'it's fixed'. Suggestion: use consistent tense 'when you go' and clarify meaning: 'wear formal shoes' or 'dress appropriately for the event'.