Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes and how often, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and repetitive phrases. Use linking words (for example, however) to connect ideas and use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'ballet flats' instead of 'bellies').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I only shop for them when necessary. For example, I buy formal shoes for special occasions, such as pencil-heel pumps to match my dresses. Otherwise, I usually buy casual shoes about once a year when my current ones wear out.

Sugestão: Structure the response: state clearly that you have bought shoes online, then describe typical outcomes with specific examples and a linking word (for example, however). Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'they didn't fit' not 'shoes doesn't fit'). Mention how you handle problems briefly to show problem-solving.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. Often they fit well, but occasionally sellers send the wrong item or a different color, and sometimes the size is incorrect. In those cases I return the shoes and ask for a refund or exchange.

Sugestão: Give a clear estimate and explain your reasons with one or two specific details. Start with an approximate price range or proportion of budget, then justify why you spend more on formal shoes (e.g., durability, appearance). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Exemplo: I usually spend around $80–$150 on formal shoes because I want them to look smart and last longer. For casual shoes I spend less, typically $40–$80, but I still choose good-quality pairs for comfort and durability.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a brief example. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repeating phrases. Finish the sentence about formal shoes if you want to contrast preferences.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes, especially for daily wear, because I walk a lot and usually wear jeans and sweatshirts. However, I buy fashionable formal shoes occasionally for events when I need to look more polished.

× Yes, I do like to buy shoes, but whenever it's need, whenever I have a special occasion or special days, I prefer to buy formal shoes.

✓ Yes, I do like to buy shoes, but whenever there is a need or I have a special occasion, I prefer to buy formal shoes.

The original uses 'it's need' which is ungrammatical. This is a 'there be' / present tense issue: use 'there is/are' to indicate existence. Also 'special days' is redundant with 'special occasion'; use one. Suggestion: say 'there is a need' or 'I need them' and choose consistent singular/plural form.

× Uh, sorry, uh, the formal shoes that are pencil heels, bellies with my formal attires.

✓ Uh, sorry, the formal shoes are pencil heels or ballet flats that I wear with my formal attire.

The sentence has incorrect word choice and pronoun/reference errors ('bellies' should be 'ballet flats'; 'attires' should be 'attire'). Use correct noun forms and clear reference: 'that I wear with my formal attire.' This fixes pronoun/reference and noun errors.

× But usually whatever I have to need to buy, umm, casually, I buy after a year whenever I need it.

✓ But usually I buy casual shoes only when I need them, often about once a year.

Original is awkward and ungrammatical ('have to need to buy'). This is a sentence structure issue. Simplify to clear subject-verb-object and correct number agreement ('them' for shoes). Provide clear time expression 'about once a year.'

× Yes, of course, multiple times I bought uh, online shoe, uh, sometimes it uh, fit on me uh, very well, but sometimes it's very rare when umm uh, by mistake sellers send me a wrong piece or uh, the color different piece as well as sometimes shoes doesn't fit on me.

✓ Yes, of course. I have bought shoes online many times. Sometimes they fit me very well, but occasionally sellers mistakenly send the wrong pair or a different color, and sometimes the shoes don't fit me.

Mixed tense and agreement errors: use present perfect 'have bought' for experiences. 'Online shoe' should be 'shoes online' or 'a pair of shoes online.' 'It fit' and 'shoes doesn't fit' show subject-verb agreement errors; use plural verbs 'they fit' and 'don't fit.' Fix word order and use 'pair' for footwear. This addresses past tense and subject-verb agreement.

× So that time I just go for return.

✓ So at that time I just return them.

'Go for return' is incorrect English. Use the verb 'return' with the object: 'return them,' or 'go to return them' but simpler 'I just return them.' This fixes preposition/verb collocation.

× I prefer to spend a lot of money on formal shoes as well as on my casual shoes.

✓ I prefer to spend more money on formal shoes than on my casual shoes.

Original 'a lot of money' is vague and comparative idea is intended. Use comparative structure 'more ... than ...' to express preference of spending. This addresses quantifier and comparison clarity.

× I prefer to buy a good uh uh, looking shoe for my formal tyres that are all also expensive.

✓ I prefer to buy good-looking shoes for formal occasions, which are usually expensive.

'Good uh uh, looking' should be 'good-looking'. 'Tyres' is incorrect word (possibly meant 'attires' or 'tyes'); use 'formal occasions' or 'formal outfits.' Also fix plurality and relative clause: 'which are usually expensive.' This corrects adjective formation and word choice.

× But on a casual basis, I prefer to buy, uh, good quality shoes.

✓ But for casual wear, I prefer to buy good-quality shoes.

Use hyphenated compound adjective 'good-quality' before noun and 'for casual wear' is more natural than 'on a casual basis.' This addresses quantifier/phrase usage and adjective form.

× Shoes Honestly I prefer comfortable shoe because on daily basis On daily basis I have to wear only comfortable shoes, sneakers or running shoes as I usually wear my western jeans and sweatshirts but the formal shoes that I buy for.

✓ Honestly, I prefer comfortable shoes because on a daily basis I have to wear comfortable footwear like sneakers or running shoes when I wear western jeans and sweatshirts. The formal shoes I buy are for special occasions.

The original is run-on, repeated phrases and incomplete clause 'the formal shoes that I buy for.' This is a sentence structure issue. Break into two clear sentences, remove repetition, ensure plural agreement 'shoes' and complete the final clause by stating purpose: 'for special occasions.'