Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant but has hesitations (umm), some repetition and minor grammar issues. To improve, remove filler words, use one concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. For example, say how often, then explain seasonal preference with a linking phrase (e.g. "in winter" / "in summer") and avoid repeating phrases like "buying the shoes." Also correct small grammar issues ("once a month", "seasonally").

Exemplo: I love buying shoes and I usually buy new ones about once a month. In winter I prefer boots for warmth and in summer I choose sandals for comfort and breathability.

Sugestão: Good content but contains repetition, small errors and choppy sentences. Improve by giving a single fluent reply: name the app briefly, state what you bought and give specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Fix grammar ("a pair of boots", "from there"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences max and avoid short fragmented statements.

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a pair of boots online from the Jolando app last winter because they looked warm and durable, so they kept my feet dry and comfortable.

Sugestão: The answer gives useful information but has pronunciation/word-choice and grammar problems and hesitations. Clarify location phrasing ("living in Denmark"), correct the price range statement and avoid unclear words ("zoo's nor"). Use one sentence for cost and a second to explain brand preference with reasons, using linking words like "because" or "so" and more precise vocabulary ("comfortable" and "eco-friendly").

Exemplo: I live in Denmark and usually spend about 500 to 1,000 kroner on a pair of shoes. I often choose Nike or New Balance because they are comfortable and I appreciate their more sustainable materials.

Sugestão: Good balanced answer showing flexibility, but it is slightly wordy and has some word-choice slips ("fashionable suit" for shoes) and grammatical awkwardness. Make a clear topic sentence, then give two short specific examples with linking words ("for example", "whereas"). Replace incorrect words and keep sentences concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer both depending on the occasion. For example, I wear fashionable shoes to parties or birthdays, whereas for running, the gym or everyday use I choose comfortable trainers.

× Yes I love buying shoes umm and I often buy shoes like umm once in a month and also I like buying the shoes.

✓ Yes, I love buying shoes and I often buy them, like once a month, and I also enjoy buying shoes.

The original has awkward repetition and a wrong article with frequency expression. Use 'buying' correctly here as a gerund to talk about a habit. Replace 'once in a month' with the correct frequency expression 'once a month'. Omit unnecessary 'the' before 'shoes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: simplify and avoid repeating the noun; use pronoun 'them' for clarity.

× This season wise if it's winter I would love to buy boots and if it's summer I would love to buy sandals in uh sports.

✓ Season-wise, if it's winter I love to buy boots, and if it's summer I prefer to buy sandals or sports shoes.

The original mixes conditional 'would' with a general statement about preferences. Use present simple ('I love'/'I prefer') for habitual or general preferences. 'Season-wise' is better hyphenated and placed at the start. 'Sandals in uh sports' is unclear; clarify as 'sandals or sports shoes'.

× Yes I have bought the shoes online from Jolando.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online from Jolando.

Present perfect 'have bought' is correct to indicate past action with relevance now. Remove the definite article 'the' because speaking generally about shoes doesn't require it. Keep present perfect form but streamline the sentence.

× It's an app for an online shopping.

✓ It's an app for online shopping.

The phrase 'online shopping' functions as an uncountable noun here; the article 'an' before it is incorrect. Remove 'an' to form the correct phrase 'for online shopping'.

× I bought a boot a pair of boot from their for winter.

✓ I bought a pair of boots from there for winter.

Use plural 'boots' when referring to a pair. Use 'a pair of boots' as the correct collocation. Also correct 'their' (possessive) to 'there' (place). Place 'for winter' at the end is acceptable. Suggestion: 'I bought a pair of boots there for winter.'

× So it's dry. It's warm and comfortable for me in the winter.

✓ They're dry, warm, and comfortable for me in winter.

If referring to the boots, use plural pronoun 'they' not 'it'. Also combine short sentences into one for fluency. Omit the article 'the' before 'winter' when speaking generally about the season. Use commas between adjectives.

× As I'm leaving in Denmark, I spend around 500 to 1000 kroner for a zoo's uh, nor Normally I would uh prefer shoes from Nike or uh, from New Balance.

✓ As I'm living in Denmark, I spend around 500 to 1000 kroner on shoes normally. I usually prefer shoes from Nike or New Balance.

Correct 'leaving' to 'living' (wrong word). Use preposition 'in' with 'living in Denmark' is fine. Use 'on shoes' not 'for a zoo's'. 'Normally' or 'usually' should be placed before the verb for natural word order: 'I usually prefer'. Remove filler words. 'Prefer shoes from Nike or New Balance' is fine.

× It is very comfortable and uh, environment friendly.

✓ They are very comfortable and environmentally friendly.

Refer to 'shoes' with plural pronoun 'they'. 'Environment friendly' is incorrect adjective form; use 'environmentally friendly' (adverb + adjective) or 'environment-friendly'. Match plural 'are' with 'they'.

× I would prefer both shoes because it depends also on the situation.

✓ I would prefer both, because it also depends on the situation.

Word order is awkward. Place 'also' before 'depends' or after 'because' for natural flow: 'because it also depends on the situation'. 'Both shoes' is odd—'both' alone is sufficient when context is clear.

× If I have to go on a party or for some birthdays then I would wear a fashionable suit or if I'm going for a running or for a gym or it's a normal day I would rather prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ If I have to go to a party or to a birthday, I would wear a fashionable outfit; if I'm going running, going to the gym, or it's a normal day, I would prefer comfortable shoes.

Use correct prepositions: 'go to a party' and 'a birthday' not 'on'. 'For a running' is incorrect; use 'going running' or 'go for a run'. 'A gym' should be 'the gym' or 'go to the gym'. 'Rather prefer' is redundant; use 'prefer'. Split into two clearer clauses and keep consistent verb forms for habits and hypotheticals.