Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 질문에 바로 답한 뒤 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하고 문법 오류를 고치세요. 구체적으로는 'learning shoes' 같은 잘못된 표현을 바로잡고, 'I often exercise. To running.'처럼 어색한 단문들을 하나의 완전한 문장으로 합치면서 빈도 표현(once a week 등)을 추가하세요. 또한 동사의 형태와 전치사 사용을 정확히 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially trainers for exercise because I work out regularly. I usually buy new running shoes every three months because I run often.

Sugestão: 간결하게 경험을 말하고 최근 사례를 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 'I have a lot of experience'는 모호하니 구체적인 빈도나 횟수를 말하면 좋습니다. 중복 표현(‘bought I purchased’)을 피하고, 연결어를 사용해 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. For example, last month I purchased a pair of running shoes from a popular sports website.

Sugestão: 숫자 표현과 부정문을 정확히 사용하세요. '3001'처럼 의미가 불분명한 숫자는 피하고 통화 단위(eg. dollars, won)를 포함하세요. 또한 중복된 부정('don't never')을 고치고 이유를 덧붙여 구체적으로 말하세요.

Exemplo: I usually spend about $150 on a good pair of running shoes. Although it's expensive for me, I never regret buying them because they last a long time and protect my feet.

Sugestão: 의도는 분명하지만 문법과 어휘 선택을 개선하세요. 'prefer to comfortable shoes'는 틀리고, 'I have a disease with my feet'보다는 구체적이고 자연스러운 표현('a foot problem' 등)을 사용하세요. 불필요한 단어('off SH learning')를 제거하고, 이유와 구체적 고려사항(예: cushioning, fit)을 덧붙여 연결어로 문장을 매끈하게 만드세요.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes because I have a foot problem. When I buy running shoes, I pay attention to cushioning and the right fit to avoid pain.

× To running.

✓ To run.

The infinitive 'to' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Use 'to run' instead of 'to running'. Suggestion: Use 'to' + base verb after expressions like 'I exercise' when indicating purpose.

× last month I bought I purchased shoes online.

✓ Last month I bought shoes online.

The student used both 'bought' and 'purchased' redundantly. Use a single past tense verb. Also capitalize the sentence start. Suggestion: Use one past tense verb (bought or purchased) to avoid redundancy.

× I believe that I spend about 3001.

✓ I believe that I spend about 3000.

The number '3001' seems unintended; typically round numbers are used for estimates. If currency symbol is missing, include it (e.g. '3000 dollars'). Suggestion: Use a realistic rounded amount and include the currency if necessary.

× It is expensive for me but I don't never regret at all.

✓ It is expensive for me but I never regret it at all.

The sentence contains a double negative ('don't never') which is ungrammatical in standard English. Also the object 'it' should follow 'regret'. Suggestion: Use a single negative 'never' and include the object: 'I never regret it.'

× I prefer to comfortable shoes because I have a disease with my feet so when I purchase running off SH learning shoes I consider comfortable size.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I have a foot condition, so when I buy running or training shoes I consider comfort and size.

Multiple issues corrected: 'prefer to comfortable shoes' should be 'prefer comfortable shoes' (no 'to'); 'a disease with my feet' is awkward — use 'a foot condition'; 'purchase' fine but 'running off SH learning shoes' appears to be incorrect word choice; likely 'running or training shoes'; 'consider comfortable size' should be 'consider comfort and size' or 'consider the fit and comfort'. Suggestion: Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'prefer', use natural collocations ('foot condition', 'running or training shoes'), and state what you consider ('comfort and size').

× I often exercise. To running.

✓ I often exercise; I go running.

Fragment 'To running.' is sentence fragment and not grammatically connected. Combine ideas into a complete sentence like 'I often exercise; I go running.' Suggestion: Use a full verb phrase ('go running') or infinitive correctly ('to run') in context.