Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and relevant: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, avoid hesitations and unrelated words (e.g., 'food'). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences, and give a specific frequency and brief reason. Use linking words if you add details.

Exemplo: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy shoes once or twice a year because I prefer to try them on in stores to ensure comfort.

Sugestão: Organize your response: give a clear yes/no, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictory phrases (e.g., 'does some good idea because you can try on'—you can't try on online). Use correct vocabulary and fewer hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but I prefer buying in stores. For example, the pairs I ordered often did not fit well, so I like to try shoes on before I buy them.

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: state a specific amount in one sentence, then give one clear reason with correct grammar. Avoid repetitions and fillers. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Exemplo: I usually spend about $100 on a pair of shoes because I value good quality and comfort, and I prefer to invest in shoes that last longer.

Sugestão: Answer directly and explain briefly with correct vocabulary. Avoid incorrect or unclear medical terms; say the condition clearly (e.g., 'disc herniation' or 'back problem'). Keep it to one or two sentences and use linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I have a back problem (a herniated disc), so I need shoes that provide good support and cushioning.

× Yes, I like buying food, uh, shoes because, uh, for me, I like to uh, work very comfortable and probably I buy shirts once or two times per year and I also like to try on 1st.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes because I want to be comfortable when I work. I probably buy shirts once or twice a year, and I also like to try things on first.

This sentence has multiple issues: 'buying food, uh, shoes' is confusing (word choice/order), 'work very comfortable' is incorrect adjective/adverb use and structure (should be 'be comfortable at work' or 'be comfortable when I work'), 'once or two times' should be 'once or twice'. Also 'try on 1st' should be 'try things on first'. These fit Grammar Problem Types 13 (adjective/adverb), 26 (sentence structure), and 18 (order of words). Suggest speaking in shorter clear sentences, use 'comfortable' with a verb (be/feel), and use 'once or twice' for frequency.

× Yes, I used to buy shoes online but I think it does some good idea because you can try on.

✓ Yes, I used to buy shoes online, but I think it's not a good idea because you cannot try them on.

The original mixes meanings: 'used to buy' is acceptable, but 'does some good idea' is incorrect; should be 'is not a good idea'. Also 'you can try on' should be 'you cannot try them on' to explain downside. This falls under Grammar Problem Types 26 (sentence structure) and 13 (word choice). Suggest using 'is a good idea' or 'is not a good idea' and include the object 'them' after 'try'.

× So the times that I bought shows online they didn't fit me really well.

✓ The times that I bought shoes online, they didn't fit me very well.

Errors: 'shows' is wrong word (should be 'shoes') and 'really well' is colloquial but acceptable; 'very well' is more standard. This is Grammar Problem Types 13 (incorrect use of words) and 26 (sentence structure). Suggest proofread for singular/plural and choose 'very well' in formal responses.

× So I prefer to try on on the stores.

✓ So I prefer to try them on in stores.

The phrase has duplicated 'on on' and wrong preposition 'on the stores'. Correct is 'try them on in stores' or 'in the store'. This matches Grammar Problem Types 11 (prepositions) and 26 (sentence structure). Suggest avoid repeating words and use 'in' for locations (in stores).

× I probably spend about $100 on shoes because for me it's very important that you have umm, a good quality.

✓ I probably spend about $100 on shoes because, for me, it's very important to have good quality.

Original mixes second-person 'you have' with first-person statement; better to use infinitive 'to have' and omit 'a' before 'good quality'. This is Grammar Problem Types 12 (pronouns) and 13 (adjective/article use). Suggest keep pronouns consistent with speaker and use 'good quality' without 'a'.

× And for that I don't like to spend my money and you know, cheap shoes.

✓ Because of that, I don't like to spend my money on cheap shoes.

Incorrect structure 'don't like to spend my money and...cheap shoes' should be 'spend my money on cheap shoes'. This is Grammar Problem Types 26 (sentence structure) and 11 (preposition). Suggest use 'spend money on' + noun.

× So I prefer to spend more money and feel more comfortable and that should that in that way should I gain.

✓ So I prefer to spend more money to feel more comfortable and gain that benefit.

This sentence is confusing and ungrammatical: redundant phrasing 'that should that in that way should I gain'. Simplify to 'spend more money to feel more comfortable and gain that benefit.' This is Grammar Problem Type 26 (sentence structure). Suggest keep sentences concise and avoid redundant clauses.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because I have a discount hernia, so I need comfortable shoes for that reason.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I have a disc hernia, so I need comfortable footwear for that reason.

'Discount hernia' is incorrect — likely 'disc hernia' or 'herniated disc'. Repeating 'comfortable shoes' is redundant; 'footwear' or 'comfortable shoes' once is fine. This matches Grammar Problem Types 13 (word choice/adjectives) and 26 (sentence structure). Suggest use correct medical term 'herniated disc' and avoid repetition.