Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, organize your response with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetitions, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, 'usually' or 'because') to make your point coherent.

Exemplo: I don’t buy shoes often; I usually buy one pair a year. I prefer buying sturdy walking shoes because I mostly need them for daily walks and occasional outings.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then give clear reasons and a brief example. Avoid short fragments and fill words. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought shoes online because I know my size and it’s more convenient. For example, I usually shop during Black Friday sales to get better prices and a wider selection.

Sugestão: Give a clear amount first, then explain briefly why you spend that much. Remove unclear phrases and hesitations. Provide one concrete reason (quality, budget, frequency) to support the amount.

Exemplo: I usually spend about $100 on a pair of shoes because I prefer decent quality that lasts. Since I only buy shoes once a year, I don’t mind paying a bit more for comfort and durability.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' and avoid repetition. Add a short example to make your point more specific.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I value comfort for daily activities. For instance, I choose sneakers with good cushioning since I walk a lot and need support.

× Nista, but uh, I, I off, I bought, I buy a shoe once a year, maybe just a little because uh, I used to uh, have it, uh, when I go for a walk.

✓ No, but I buy shoes once a year, maybe just one pair, because I used to wear them when I go for a walk.

The original sentence has disfluent and repeated fragments, incorrect word choice ('Nista', 'off'), and mixed tenses. This is a sentence structure error: excess fillers and repetitions break coherence. Suggested improvement: remove filler sounds, choose consistent tense (present simple for habitual action), use plural 'shoes' or 'a pair' for clarity, and keep sentence concise.

× Honestly, I'm not a fashionista, but uh, I bought a shoe. I bought shoes, maybe a pair of shoes, uh, once a year, uh, I often use it when I go out of with my.

✓ Honestly, I'm not a fashionista, but I buy shoes, maybe a pair once a year; I often wear them when I go out.

The learner alternates between singular and plural inconsistently ('a shoe', 'shoes') and uses incorrect pronoun reference ('use it' and incomplete phrase 'out of with my'). This is a singular/plural issue and sentence structure problem. Use 'shoes' and 'them' for plural agreement; 'wear' is the correct verb for clothing; remove the unfinished phrase.

× Of course, yes, I just bought a shoe online because I know my size and I also online, but uh, I choose uh, all the shoes in the Black Friday because, uh, each.

✓ Of course. I have bought shoes online because I know my size, and I also choose shoes during Black Friday sales because they are cheaper.

The original mixes simple past and present improperly and includes incomplete fragments. This is a past tense issue: use present perfect ('have bought') to talk about experience, or simple past for a specific event. Also correct missing words and complete the clause about why choosing on Black Friday (e.g., 'because they are cheaper').

× Maybe $100 because it's, uh, because I often, uh, tie on my tie on my bus is uh, so I just, uh, I just have, uh, $100.

✓ Maybe about $100 because I usually spend little on shoes; I typically take the bus, so I only have about $100 to spend.

The sentence has unclear fragments and tense/confusion ('tie on my tie on my bus'). This is a present tense and sentence structure issue: use present simple for habitual actions ('I usually spend', 'I take the bus') and remove irrelevant or garbled phrases. Clarify the reason for the budget.

× I refer comfortable shoes over fashion fashion fashionable shoes because, uh, I'm not a fashionista and I'm concentrated on uh, the com on being comfortable. Umm, but uh, having a comfortable shoes have me.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I'm not a fashionista and I focus on being comfortable. Having comfortable shoes matters to me.

The original has multiple problems: wrong verb choice ('refer' should be 'prefer'), incorrect comparison preposition ('prefer X to Y'), repetition ('fashion fashion fashionable'), incorrect adjective-noun agreement ('a comfortable shoes'), and awkward last clause. These are sentence structure, preposition, and singular/plural issues. Use 'prefer X to Y', 'fashionable ones' for the plural form, and 'matters to me' to express importance.