Shoes— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + reason), then add a time frequency and a brief explanation using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I don't enjoy buying shoes very much because I usually stick to one brand, Nike. I typically buy the same model, Air Force Ones, so I only need a new pair about every six months when the old ones wear out.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with a direct statement, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Fix tense consistency and avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because it is convenient and often cheaper. Also, since I always buy the same model, I know my size well, so ordering online is reliable and saves time.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer with a specific amount, then add a brief explanation. Remove hesitations and unclear phrasing; use correct currency phrasing and sentence structure.

Exemplo: I usually spend under 2,000 New Taiwan dollars on a pair of shoes. Since I buy Air Force Ones online and stick to the same model, I can usually find them within that price range.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference, then give one or two concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar and avoid trailing or unfinished sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, classic shoes rather than fashionable or colorful ones because I value function over trends. Therefore I choose simple designs that are comfortable for daily use.

× Actually I'm not enjoy buying shoes a lot because I always buy 1 brand like Nike and I always buy Air Force One and if maybe six months I will buy it for one time because they broke it broken so that I.

✓ Actually I'm not enjoying buying shoes a lot because I always buy one brand, like Nike, and I always buy Air Force Ones. Maybe every six months I buy a new pair because they get broken.

Error type: incorrect use of verb + -ing (need 'enjoy' -> 'enjoying' in continuous description). Also several other issues apply (numbers, plural, word order, redundancy). I corrected to 'I'm not enjoying' to use the present continuous for a habitual dislike in this context, changed '1' to 'one', made 'Air Force One' plural to refer to pairs, rephrased the time expression to 'every six months', and replaced 'they broke it broken' with 'they get broken' to use the correct passive/state verb. Suggestion: use '-ing' after 'not' with 'be' + verb-ing when describing ongoing feelings ('I'm not enjoying'), use words instead of numerals in speech, ensure plurals for countable items, and use clear time expressions like 'every six months'.

× Yeah, I always bought shoes online because it's really convenient and I always buy the same type and same model of shoes, so I understand which size I need to choose. So I buy online will be more cheap and convenient.

✓ Yeah, I always buy shoes online because it's really convenient, and I always buy the same type and model of shoes, so I know which size I need to choose. Buying online is usually cheaper and more convenient.

Error type: inconsistent use of past tense 'bought' with habitual 'always'. Habitual actions require present simple 'buy' rather than past 'bought'. Also 'understand' is better as 'know' for facts about size, and 'will be more cheap' is incorrect word order and tense; use 'is usually cheaper'. Suggestion: use present simple for regular habits, use 'know' for awareness of facts, and use 'cheaper' not 'more cheap'.

× Umm I always buy umm Air Force One model so maybe. And I also always buy boated buy on online shops so on is under 2000 Taiwanese dollars in average.

✓ Umm I always buy the Air Force One model. I also always buy boots on online shops, so they are usually under 2000 Taiwanese dollars on average.

Error type: singular/plural and unclear word choice. 'Air Force One' as a model should take 'the' and can stand singular or be plural depending on context; 'buy boated buy' appears to be 'boots' or 'bought' confusion — I interpreted as 'boots'. 'On is under' is incorrect; use 'they are usually under' and 'on average' at the end. Suggestion: choose correct nouns ('boots' if appropriate), use articles ('the Air Force One model'), match plural forms with plural verbs ('they are'), and place 'on average' after the amount.

× I also always buy boated buy on online shops so on is under 2000 Taiwanese dollars in average.

✓ I also always buy boots from online shops, so they are usually under 2000 Taiwanese dollars on average.

Error type: incorrect preposition. Use 'from' or 'on' for online shops; 'buy ... on online shops' is unnatural. Also 'in average' should be 'on average'. Suggestion: use 'from online shops' or 'on online stores' and use the fixed phrase 'on average'.

× And I prefer comfortable shoes and also classic style. I'm not really enjoy buying fashion style and colorful one because I think shoes is a more functional for me, so comfortable is really necessary and I.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes and a classic style. I'm not really enjoying buying fashionable or colorful styles because I think shoes are more functional for me, so comfort is really necessary.

Error type: incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and agreement. 'Classic style' needs article 'a', 'fashion style' -> 'fashionable styles' or 'fashion styles', 'colorful one' -> 'colorful styles/pairs', and 'shoes is' should be 'shoes are'. Also 'I'm not really enjoy' should be 'I'm not really enjoying' (verb + -ing). Suggestion: use adjectives correctly (fashionable), ensure noun-verb agreement ('shoes are'), and keep consistent plural/singular forms.