Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "needs" nên là "need" để phù hợp với chủ ngữ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ "students" quá nhiều và có thể dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, at my school, students need to hand over their mobile phones to teachers to help them concentrate. In addition, wearing uniforms is mandatory for all students attending classes.

Sugestão: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "rules that is" nên là "rules that are". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc mạch lạc với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết bằng từ nối.

Exemplo: I don't think having more rules would benefit students because while rules help maintain focus, overly strict regulations can limit students' freedom to express themselves.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác hoặc không cần thiết. Hãy cố gắng mô tả cụ thể hơn về giáo viên đó.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was about five years old, I had a very dedicated English teacher who always helped us learn patiently and made classes enjoyable.

Sugestão: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ "helps principles" nên là "help principals" và câu nên rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ được liên kết hợp lý.

Exemplo: I prefer having more rules at school because they help principals and teachers prevent students from misbehaving, which can lead to a better future for us.

× Yes, when students attend schools, they needs to give their mobile phones to the teacher so that they can focus.

✓ Yes, when students attend school, they need to give their mobile phones to the teacher so that they can focus.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because it refers to the general concept of attending school. Also, 'needs' should be 'need' to agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× Moreover, students must wear uniforms if they want to go to school to study.

✓ Moreover, students must wear uniforms if they want to go to school to study.

This sentence is correct in modal verb usage; no correction needed.

× As a student, I don't really think so, since students need to focus on studying, but still they cannot be prohibited from doing things they want or follow some rules that is very strict.

✓ As a student, I don't really think so, since students need to focus on studying, but still they cannot be prohibited from doing things they want or follow some rules that are very strict.

The phrase 'rules that is very strict' should be 'rules that are very strict' because 'rules' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are'.

× I had when I was around 5 years old.

✓ I did when I was around 5 years old.

The verb 'had' is incomplete here; 'did' is the correct auxiliary verb to answer the question about having a dedicated teacher. The sentence structure requires 'did' to form a proper response.

× I have since that my teachers who's who, umm, we usually called, uh, simultaneous.

✓ Since then, my teacher, whom we usually called 'Simultaneous', was very dedicated.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct pronoun use. 'Who's who' is incorrect here; 'whom' is appropriate as the object of the verb. Also, 'simultaneous' seems to be a nickname and should be in quotes.

× It was really dedicated in studying English and also helping us to do.

✓ She was really dedicated to studying English and also helping us.

'It' is incorrect for a person; 'she' should be used. Also, 'dedicated in' should be 'dedicated to'. The phrase 'helping us to do' is incomplete and should be simplified to 'helping us'.

× I think I want to have more rules at schools because it can helps principles and also teachers to prohibit students from doing something wrong and would have them to have a better and brighter future.

✓ I think I want to have more rules at school because it can help principals and teachers to prohibit students from doing something wrong and help them have a better and brighter future.

'Schools' should be singular 'school' to refer to the general concept. 'Helps' should be 'help' to agree with 'it'. 'Principles' is incorrect; the correct word is 'principals'. The phrase 'would have them to have' is incorrect and should be 'help them have'.