Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. One important rule is that students must do daily exercises to maintain physical health. This is beneficial because regular exercise helps children develop stronger bodies and minds.

Sugestão: Focus on expressing your opinion clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons to support your view.

Exemplo: I don't think students benefit from having more rules because rules are usually made by teachers or school leaders without considering students' opinions. Therefore, students may feel their perspectives are ignored.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples using linking words to explain why the teacher was dedicated.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a dedicated teacher named Suresh when I was in first grade. He not only taught us theory but also included practical lessons, which made learning more effective and interesting.

Sugestão: Clarify your opinion and avoid confusing phrases. Use correct grammar and complete your ideas. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because many students already follow the existing rules. However, some students with physical disabilities may find it hard to follow certain rules, so fewer rules would be more inclusive.

Sugestão: Work on fluency and clarity. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples to describe the strictness of the teacher.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very strict English teacher named Lalit when I was in eighth grade. He gave us a lot of homework and regularly checked it. If we didn't complete it, he would punish us in different ways.

Sugestão: Improve pronunciation and grammar. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Express your ideas clearly with specific reasons and examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to work as a teacher in a school without strict rules because it would give me the freedom to teach creatively. For example, I could use my own teaching methods to help students learn better.

× there are so many rules for children's in schools

✓ there are so many rules for children in schools

The word 'children's' is a possessive form and incorrect here; the plural noun 'children' should be used without an apostrophe to indicate more than one child.

× there is a one rule especially which is the we have to do daily exercises in schools

✓ there is one rule especially which is that we have to do daily exercises in schools

The phrase 'a one rule' is incorrect; 'one rule' without 'a' is correct. Also, 'which is the we have to' is awkward; 'which is that we have to' is clearer.

× doing exercise can be some more beneficial for children's in their young mind

✓ doing exercise can be more beneficial for children in their young minds

'Some more beneficial' is incorrect; 'more beneficial' is correct. Also, 'children's' should be 'children' and 'mind' should be plural 'minds' to match plural subject.

× they can be get more stronger

✓ they can get stronger

The phrase 'can be get' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed directly by base verb 'get'. Also, 'more stronger' is redundant; 'stronger' alone suffices.

× students get more benefit from the more rule

✓ students get more benefit from more rules

'The more rule' is incorrect; 'more rules' is the correct plural form without 'the'.

× a rule can be can be created by the top table of students

✓ a rule can be created by the top table of students

Repeated phrase 'can be can be' is an error; only one 'can be' is needed.

× sometimes it created by the teachers

✓ sometimes it is created by the teachers

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' for passive voice in present tense.

× students have have no not any kind of their own perspective

✓ students have no kind of their own perspective

Double negatives 'no not any' are incorrect; only 'no' or 'not any' should be used.

× when I was AI was in 1/6 standard

✓ when I was in 1/6 standard

The phrase 'I was AI was' is incorrect; 'AI' is likely a typo and should be removed.

× who is one of the most dedicated teacher in our whole schools

✓ who is one of the most dedicated teachers in our whole school

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' after 'one of the most'. Also, 'schools' should be singular 'school' if referring to one school.

× every time he teach someone not for only basis on the theory

✓ every time he teaches someone not only based on theory

'Teach' should be 'teaches' for third person singular. 'Not for only basis on' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'not only based on'.

× but is he also added a practical basis

✓ but he also adds a practical basis

Incorrect word order 'is he also added'; correct is 'he also adds'. Also, 'added' is past tense; present tense 'adds' fits better.

× which is more effective effective way to teach us

✓ which is a more effective way to teach us

Missing article 'a' before 'more effective way'. Also, 'effective' is repeated twice mistakenly.

× I suggest that students should be less rude because students should provide less rule

✓ I suggest that students should have fewer rules because students should follow fewer rules

'Less rude' is incorrect; 'rude' is an adjective, not quantifiable. 'Provide less rule' is incorrect; students do not provide rules, and 'less' should be 'fewer' for countable nouns like 'rules'.

× there are so many students who already stay in the rule and follow follow always the rules that provided by the schools

✓ there are so many students who already stay within the rules and always follow the rules provided by the schools

'Stay in the rule' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'stay within the rules'. Also, 'follow follow always' is repetitive; 'always follow' is correct.

× there are some students who who don't wanna follow rule but but they they had some physical disability which

✓ there are some students who don't want to follow rules but they have some physical disability

Repeated words 'who who', 'but but', 'they they' are errors. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is better. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules'. 'Had' should be 'have' for present tense.

× when I was in a IT standard

✓ when I was in IT standard

Article 'a' is unnecessary before 'IT standard'.

× there is a teacher's uh, in, in English subject

✓ there is a teacher in the English subject

Incorrect possessive 'teacher's' should be 'teacher'. Also, 'in English subject' should be 'in the English subject'.

× He is one of the most St. deserts, uh, in my schools

✓ He is one of the most strict teachers in my school

'St. deserts' is a mishearing or typo; likely meant 'strict teachers'. 'Schools' should be singular 'school' if referring to one school.

× He always uh, gave us so many homework at home

✓ He always gave us so much homework at home

'Homework' is uncountable; 'so many' is incorrect, 'so much' is correct.

× you all regularly check if you didn't uh, complete homework

✓ he regularly checks if you didn't complete homework

Subject 'he' is singular third person; verb should be 'checks'. Also, tense mismatch with 'didn't complete' is past; 'checks' is present.

× You always punish us by different way

✓ He always punished us in different ways

Subject is third person singular past; verb should be 'punished'. 'By different way' is incorrect; correct is 'in different ways'.

× I do like to, uh, work as a teacher in a rude preschools

✓ I do like to work as a teacher in a rule-free preschool

'Rude preschools' is incorrect; likely meant 'rule-free preschools'. Also, 'a' with plural 'preschools' is incorrect; singular 'preschool' fits.

× there are so many things which can be valuable for me

✓ there are many things which can be valuable to me

'Valuable for me' is less common; 'valuable to me' is preferred. 'So many' is acceptable but 'many' is more formal.

× I can wait anything I want

✓ I can do anything I want

'Wait anything' is incorrect; likely meant 'do anything'.

× when I, I was in schools and I can, uh, also provide us so many students

✓ when I was in school and I can also teach many students

'Provide us so many students' is incorrect; 'teach many students' is correct. 'Schools' should be singular 'school'.