Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add specific examples. Avoid repeating words like 'obviously' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must keep their hair neatly trimmed and wear a specific uniform every day. These rules help maintain discipline and a sense of unity among students.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I don't think students benefit from having more rules because it limits their freedom. If students have more freedom, they can develop independence and learn from their experiences. Therefore, fewer rules might encourage personal growth.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and clearly. Avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your thoughts and give specific examples if possible.

Exemplo: I have not met a very dedicated teacher yet, but I hope to find one in the future. Dedicated teachers inspire students and help them learn better, so I look forward to learning from such a teacher.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion at the start and support it with reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically.

Exemplo: I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it gives students more freedom. With fewer rules, students can manage their time better and focus on personal growth.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organise your ideas clearly. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to show contrast and explain your opinion.

Exemplo: Yes, I have had many strict teachers during my school days. They often punished students to maintain discipline. However, now I think strictness can be harmful, and if I were a teacher, I would use a more understanding approach.

Sugestão: Provide a clear and concise answer. Avoid repeating 'obviously' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to explain your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I would like to work as a teacher, but I believe a school cannot be completely rule-free. Rules are necessary to maintain order and ensure effective learning. However, these rules should not restrict students' creativity and freedom.

× Plus, there are too many rules for the student in my school, obviously some of the children was obviously you have to trim your hand.

✓ Plus, there are too many rules for the students in my school, obviously some of the children were told you have to trim your hand.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'too many rules' which implies multiple students. Also, 'children was' is incorrect; 'children' is plural so the verb should be 'were'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× Obviously we're not allowed to improve your head too long and you have to follow this uniform coat.

✓ Obviously we're not allowed to grow our hair too long and you have to follow this uniform coat.

The phrase 'improve your head too long' is incorrect. It should be 'grow our hair too long' to make sense. Also, 'your' should be 'our' to match the speaker's perspective. This involves third person singular and pronoun usage, but mainly verb usage and pronoun correction.

× So obviously there was a specific, specific uniform that you need to wear every day.

✓ So obviously there is a specific uniform that you need to wear every day.

The verb 'was' should be 'is' to match the present tense context. Also, 'specific, specific' is redundant and should be 'specific'. This is a tense and redundancy issue, but mainly verb tense correction.

× And obviously there was a lot of look like discipline.

✓ And obviously there was a lot of discipline.

The phrase 'a lot of look like discipline' is incorrect. 'Look like' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'a lot of discipline'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and phrases.

× You have to win a discipline.

✓ You have to maintain discipline.

The phrase 'win a discipline' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'maintain discipline'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and collocations.

× I think, I don't think it's true students will benefit from more rules because I think it will make a limitation for these children.

✓ I don't think it's true that students will benefit from more rules because I think it will limit these children.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'I think, I don't think' is contradictory and redundant. Also, 'make a limitation' is incorrect; 'limit' is the correct verb. This is an incorrect use of conjunctions and verb usage.

× I think the mode free.

✓ I think they need more freedom.

'The mode free' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means 'more freedom'. Also, pronouns are missing or incorrect. This is an incorrect use of pronouns and vocabulary.

× And obviously if you give more freedom to the student, I think they will get a chance to grow more and they will charge a lot.

✓ And obviously if you give more freedom to the students, I think they will get a chance to grow more and they will change a lot.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match 'they'. Also, 'charge a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'change a lot'. This is a singular/plural and vocabulary error.

× So obviously we should not be stuck with those kind of things. So I think we should give them instrument. We should give rather than opportunity rather than opportunity.

✓ So obviously we should not be stuck with those kinds of things. So I think we should give them instruments, or rather opportunities.

'Those kind of things' should be 'those kinds of things' for plural. 'Give them instrument' should be 'give them instruments'. The phrase 'rather than opportunity rather than opportunity' is redundant and unclear; corrected to 'or rather opportunities'. This is incorrect use of quantifiers and pronouns.

× So far have never experienced or I have never seen any dedicated teacher in my life.

✓ So far, I have never experienced or seen any dedicated teacher in my life.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. Also, 'have never experienced or I have never seen' is redundant; better to say 'I have never experienced or seen'. This is a sentence structure and present tense issue.

× But obviously I will, I look to, I will look to have that kind of appreciation in my life.

✓ But obviously I will, I hope to have that kind of appreciation in my life.

'I look to' is incorrect here; 'I hope to' is more appropriate. This is incorrect use of verbs and pronouns.

× Are you still in the part of learning? And I'm learning through my life.

✓ I am still in the process of learning, and I'm learning throughout my life.

'In the part of learning' is incorrect; it should be 'in the process of learning'. Also, 'through my life' should be 'throughout my life'. This is a present tense and preposition issue.

× So in the journey, if I will find some dedicated teacher, I would really love to learn many information.

✓ So in the journey, if I find some dedicated teacher, I would really love to learn a lot of information.

In conditional sentences, 'if' clause should use present tense, not 'will find'. Also, 'many information' is incorrect; 'a lot of information' is correct. This is a future tense and quantifier issue.

× This student is no character.

✓ This student has no character.

The phrase 'is no character' is incorrect; it should be 'has no character'. This is a verb usage and singular/plural issue.

× I prefer to have a list rule in my school.

✓ I prefer to have fewer rules in my school.

'A list rule' is incorrect; likely meant 'less rules' or 'fewer rules'. 'Fewer rules' is correct for countable nouns. This is a singular/plural and quantifier issue.

× Bigger top is possibly.

✓ The bigger, the better, possibly.

'Bigger top is possibly' is unclear and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'The bigger, the better, possibly.' This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and sentence structure.

× I think the more the least.

✓ I think the fewer the better.

'The more the least' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'the fewer the better' when referring to rules. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× The fewer the rules, the more freedom you will get and the more time you will get to English your time for yourself.

✓ The fewer the rules, the more freedom you will get and the more time you will have to spend on yourself.

'English your time' is incorrect; likely meant 'enjoy your time' or 'spend your time'. This is incorrect use of verbs and quantifiers.

× Yes, I, I have so many strict teacher.

✓ Yes, I have so many strict teachers.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match 'so many'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× There were so many teacher, we used to do very strict of the education.

✓ There were so many teachers, we used to have very strict education.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers'. Also, 'do very strict of the education' is incorrect; 'have very strict education' is better. This is singular/plural and verb usage issue.

× I used to punish the student.

✓ I used to punish the students.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I have also got a lot of participants from those teachers.

✓ I have also received a lot of punishments from those teachers.

'Participants' is incorrect; likely meant 'punishments'. This is incorrect use of vocabulary and pronouns.

× And if I was a teacher, I will never do this kind of thing.

✓ And if I were a teacher, I would never do this kind of thing.

In conditional sentences contrary to fact, 'if I was' should be 'if I were' and 'will' should be 'would'. This is a past tense and modal verb usage issue.

× Obviously I would like, I would love to work as a teacher, but obviously there is no thing as a rule preschool because obviously if you are in school, you have to follow some rule and regulation.

✓ Obviously I would like, I would love to work as a teacher, but obviously there is no such thing as a rule-free school because obviously if you are in school, you have to follow some rules and regulations.

'No thing as a rule preschool' is incorrect; should be 'no such thing as a rule-free school'. Also, 'rule and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'. This is incorrect use of quantifiers and plural forms.

× The student can be wild.

✓ Students can be wild.

'The student' is singular; 'students' plural is better to generalize. This is singular/plural issue.

× So obviously in order to maintain and in order to regulate the student, you need to keep the rule and regulation.

✓ So obviously in order to maintain and regulate the students, you need to keep the rules and regulations.

'The student' should be plural 'students'. 'Rule and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'. This is singular/plural and quantifier issue.