Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more structured and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and grammatical errors such as 'have to done'.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a proper uniform and complete their homework daily. Additionally, we are expected to show discipline and respect towards our parents and teachers.

Sugestão: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use linking words like 'because' to connect ideas smoothly. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also, correct word choice is important, for example, 'roles' should be 'rules'.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help students manage their time better and develop good habits. Moreover, rules encourage discipline and respect among students.

Sugestão: Improve fluency by reducing filler words and use more precise vocabulary. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details connected by linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I have a dedicated teacher who teaches English. She is very kind and always teaches us politely. Furthermore, she motivates us to develop good habits, focus on our studies, and respect others.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more direct. Use linking words to explain your opinion and provide specific reasons. Avoid filler words and grammatical mistakes.

Exemplo: I prefer to have a balanced number of rules at school because some rules, such as those ensuring discipline and safety, are necessary for a peaceful environment.

Sugestão: Try to organize your answer with a clear main idea and supporting details. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

Exemplo: No, most of my teachers are polite and kind. However, one of our coordinators is quite strict about some rules, and I personally do not like her because of that.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and avoid vague statements. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Also, correct vocabulary such as 'rural free school' should be 'rule-free school'.

Exemplo: No, I would not like to work in a rule-free school because teaching is not my passion and I have other future goals. Moreover, I believe that a school without rules would lack structure and discipline.

× Uh, yeah, there are many kind of rules for the students at our school like we have to wear a proper uniform, uh, discipline, respect our parents and teachers.

✓ Uh, yeah, there are many kinds of rules for the students at our school like we have to wear a proper uniform, uh, discipline, respect our parents and teachers.

The phrase 'many kind of rules' is incorrect because 'many' requires a plural noun. 'Kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' to agree with 'many'.

× We have to done our homework on daily and learning other things.

✓ We have to do our homework daily and learn other things.

The phrase 'have to done' is incorrect because 'have to' is followed by the base form of the verb, not the past participle. Also, 'on daily' is incorrect; 'daily' alone is sufficient as an adverb. 'Learning' should be changed to 'learn' to maintain parallel structure.

× Yeah, I think with more roles, students will definitely, uh, take a benefit because from, uh, this a students can do their studies on time and they develop a good habits in them, and they can also show discipline and respect to others.

✓ Yeah, I think with more rules, students will definitely, uh, benefit because, uh, students can do their studies on time and develop good habits, and they can also show discipline and respect to others.

The word 'roles' is incorrect; it should be 'rules' to match the context. 'A students' is incorrect because 'students' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'A good habits' is incorrect because 'habits' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'take a benefit' is not idiomatic; 'benefit' is used without 'take a'.

× Yes, one of my teacher is very dedicated and she's our English subject teacher.

✓ Yes, one of my teachers is very dedicated and she's our English subject teacher.

The phrase 'one of my teacher' is incorrect because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. 'Teacher' should be pluralized to 'teachers'.

× She always uh, teach us in very polite way and uh, motivate us to uh, keep growing a good habits and focus on our studies and respect others.

✓ She always, uh, teaches us in a very polite way and, uh, motivates us to, uh, keep growing good habits and focus on our studies and respect others.

The verbs 'teach' and 'motivate' need to be in the third person singular form 'teaches' and 'motivates' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. Also, 'a very polite way' requires the article 'a' before 'very polite way'. 'A good habits' is incorrect because 'habits' is plural and should not have 'a'.

× Uh, yes, I wanted to, uh, change or like balance some rules at the school as some rules are very necessary, like discipline or have a peaceful environment or safe.

✓ Uh, yes, I want to, uh, change or balance some rules at the school as some rules are very necessary, like discipline or having a peaceful and safe environment.

The verb 'wanted' is past tense but the context suggests present desire, so it should be 'want'. 'Like balance' is awkward; 'balance' alone is sufficient. 'Have a peaceful environment or safe' is incorrect; 'having a peaceful and safe environment' is correct.

× No, we don't, uh, have any strict teacher overall subject teachers are mostly, uh, polite and kind.

✓ No, we don't, uh, have any strict teachers; overall, subject teachers are mostly, uh, polite and kind.

'Any strict teacher' should be pluralized to 'any strict teachers' because 'any' is used with plural countable nouns. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× Uh, but uh, one of our coordinate, she's so strict about, uh, some rules.

✓ Uh, but uh, one of our coordinators, she's so strict about, uh, some rules.

'One of our coordinate' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun. 'Coordinate' should be pluralized to 'coordinators'.

× No, I don't uh, like to work as a teacher in rural free school.

✓ No, I don't, uh, like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school.

The phrase 'rural free school' is incorrect; it should be 'rule-free school' to match the intended meaning. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'rule-free school'.

× Umm, first of all, I think this is not my passion.

✓ Umm, first of all, I think this is not my passion.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× I have my different future goals and rather than that, I think in Rule free school there is nothing.

✓ I have different future goals, and besides that, I think there is nothing in a rule-free school.

The phrase 'my different future goals' is awkward; 'different future goals' is better. 'Rather than that' is incorrect in this context; 'besides that' or 'moreover' is appropriate. 'Rule free school' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free school' and preceded by an article 'a'. The sentence structure is improved by reordering for clarity.