Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且内容不够具体。建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并具体说明规则内容。

Exemplo: Yes, my school has many rules. For example, students must study quietly in the dormitory and follow scholarship requirements. These rules help us focus on our studies and maintain order.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并举具体例子。

Exemplo: I believe the quality of rules matters more than the number. For instance, strict rules about sleep schedules can make students tired in class, which is not helpful. However, rules that encourage regular study habits can benefit students.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，内容表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和语法，具体描述老师的行为。

Exemplo: Yes, my advanced mathematics teacher is very dedicated. He explains topics in detail during class and offers extra tutorials for students who find the subject difficult. He also helps us communicate with other teachers when needed.

Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，缺少连贯的逻辑和具体细节。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词，并具体说明理由。

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules at my university because some rules are unreasonable. For example, the power is cut off at 11:00 PM, but I need to charge my laptop for the next day. This rule makes it difficult to prepare for classes.

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，缺少连贯性。建议使用正确的语法，清晰表达老师的严格和具体要求。

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very strict teacher for inorganic chemistry practicals. He only allows about 2% of students to get excellent grades, and the reports he requires are very detailed and challenging.

Sugestão: 回答表达不清楚，存在语法和拼写错误，且内容不完整。建议清晰表达观点，避免拼写错误，并具体说明理由。

Exemplo: No, I would not like to work in a school without rules. I believe rules are important to maintain discipline and help students perform well in their studies.

× There are rules on study on in the dorm and some other rules on the scholarships.

✓ There are rules on studying in the dorm and some other rules on scholarships.

介词使用错误。'rules on study on in the dorm' 中 'study on' 应改为动名词形式 'studying'，且 'on in' 重复，应去掉一个。

× These rules provide a framework for students who working and obey facilitate our study.

✓ These rules provide a framework for students who work and obey, facilitating our study.

代词和动词形式错误。'students who working' 应为 'students who work'，且句子缺少连接词，'obey facilitate' 应改为 'obey, facilitating'。

× some bad rules like getting up on 5:00 AM and sleeping at 12:00 PM can never benefit students

✓ some bad rules like getting up at 5:00 AM and sleeping at 12:00 AM can never benefit students

介词使用错误。时间点前应使用 'at' 而非 'on'。另外，'12:00 PM' 应为 '12:00 AM' 表示午夜。

× He not only taught very detailedly in the closet, he also provides some tutorials for students who are making this subject.

✓ He not only taught very thoroughly in the classroom, he also provides some tutorials for students who are studying this subject.

副词和词汇使用错误。'detailedly' 非标准副词，应改为 'thoroughly'；'closet' 应为 'classroom'；'making this subject' 应为 'studying this subject'。

× some rules in this school is unreasonable, such as there are power cut on 11:00 PM

✓ some rules in this school are unreasonable, such as there is a power cut at 11:00 PM

主谓一致错误。'some rules' 是复数，谓语应为 'are'；'there are power cut' 应为 'there is a power cut'，且时间点前应使用 'at'。

× He only allow 2% of students in the class to get uh excellent grade and the reports he require is really challenging the data.

✓ He only allows 2% of students in the class to get an excellent grade and the reports he requires are really challenging.

情态动词和动词形式错误。'allow' 和 'require' 应与主语 'He' 一致，改为 'allows' 和 'requires'；'uh' 是口语填充词，应去掉；'an excellent grade' 需要冠词；'reports ... is' 应为复数 'reports ... are'。

× No, I don't want to work like a teacher in a real free school because I think roofie is unreasonable to me and I don't like this value because I think some rules, maintaining disciplines and study performance is important in a.

✓ No, I don't want to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I think rules are unreasonable to me and I don't like this value because I think some rules, maintaining discipline and study performance, are important.

代词和词汇错误。'work like a teacher' 应为 'work as a teacher'；'roofie' 应为 'rules'；'maintaining disciplines' 应为 'maintaining discipline'；句子结构不完整，需补充完整。