Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains errors such as confusing 'rooms' with 'rules'. To improve, use the correct vocabulary and provide a clear, concise response directly addressing the question. Avoid redundancy and grammatical mistakes.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to use smartphones during class to minimize distractions.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains vocabulary errors ('rooms' instead of 'rules') and some grammatical mistakes. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and be more precise in your explanation.

Exemplo: I don't think more rules would help. In fact, too many strict rules can limit students' growth and reduce their creativity because they feel restricted.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by correcting grammar ('student' should be 'students') and adding more specific details about why the teacher was dedicated. Use linking words to enhance coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated Chinese teacher in primary school. She always prepared interesting lessons and patiently helped students who struggled, which inspired me a lot.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear due to incorrect word usage ('rooms' instead of 'rules') and awkward phrasing. To improve, directly state your preference and explain your reasons clearly with proper vocabulary and grammar.

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because having less strict regulations allows students to develop their skills and concentrate better on their studies.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and informal language ('condemn' is too strong here). Try to use more appropriate vocabulary and express your feelings politely. Also, avoid overly negative statements.

Exemplo: Yes, my high school geography teacher was very strict and often pointed out my mistakes. Although it was challenging, it helped me improve my work.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and explaining your opinion more fully. Avoid using 'holy' in this context; instead, use words like 'important' or 'respectable'.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school. Teaching is an important job that requires talent and dedication, and I don't think I have those qualities.

× Yes, we have a lot of rooms for our students at our college campus.

✓ Yes, we have a lot of rules for our students at our college campus.

The word 'rooms' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'rules'. Using the correct quantifier with the correct noun is essential for clarity.

× For example, we have a room that every student can't play our smartphone during the class.

✓ For example, we have a rule that students can't use their smartphones during class.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'room' instead of 'rule' and misuses pronouns 'our smartphone' instead of 'their smartphones'. Also, 'play' is not the correct verb for using a smartphone in this context.

× if we have too many strict rooms in our school, it will definitely restrict the development of our students and also make makes them less creative at the same time.

✓ if we have too many strict rules in our school, it will definitely restrict the development of our students and also make them less creative at the same time.

The word 'rooms' is incorrectly used instead of 'rules'. Also, 'make makes' is a repetition error; only 'make' is needed.

× When I was in primary school, I met a wonderful Chinese teacher who was always willing to dedicate herself to her career and also our student.

✓ When I was in primary school, I met a wonderful Chinese teacher who was always willing to dedicate herself to her career and also to her students.

The pronoun 'our student' is incorrect; it should be 'her students' to match the singular teacher and plural students.

× Definitely the latter because less rooms in school will make room for our students to develop ourselves and focus more on our study.

✓ Definitely the latter because fewer rules in school will make room for students to develop themselves and focus more on their studies.

'Less rooms' is incorrect; 'fewer rules' is appropriate for countable nouns. Also, pronouns should be consistent and appropriate: 'ourselves' to 'themselves' and 'our study' to 'their studies'.

× Yes, when I was in high school, my geography teacher was very strict man and he would condemn me for every little mistake I've ever made.

✓ Yes, when I was in high school, my geography teacher was a very strict man and he would condemn me for every little mistake I ever made.

The article 'a' is missing before 'very strict man'. Also, 'I've ever made' is better as 'I ever made' to fit the past narrative.

× Definitely no, although I respect all my teachers very much, I dislike being a teacher because I think it's a very holy job that only people with great talents can do it.

✓ Definitely not, although I respect all my teachers very much, I dislike being a teacher because I think it's a very noble job that only people with great talents can do.

'Definitely no' should be 'Definitely not' for correct negation. 'Holy' is not appropriate here; 'noble' better describes a respected profession. Also, 'can do it' should be 'can do' to avoid redundancy.