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Part 1

Examinador

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Candidato

Yeah, my school is well known in educational boards for its strict regulations. For example, you should be on class on time and hand out assignments on time. The rules help my school keep high academic standards.

Examinador

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Candidato

I think it depends on the situation. Students may benefit more from reasonable rules that help them develop good habits, but for the rules that are too strict, they may be just feel stressed out.

Examinador

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Candidato

Yeah, when I was a junior high school student, my Chinese teacher is a really dedicate person. She went to school early in the morning and leave the school after every student left.

Examinador

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Candidato

I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think in today's Chinese universities the rules plays a role more than it should have been. It restricts our creativity.

Examinador

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Candidato

Still in my junior high school my math teacher is a really strict person I'm not really good yet maths and calculating so he always call me to answer the questions and I feel stomach ache just.

Examinador

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Candidato

For me, I think it's more things to consider as a teacher about the rules because when you as a teacher, the rules plays a role that assistant you to manage the students. So I would say not.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答较为自然且内容相关,但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题,如“on class”应为“in class”,“hand out assignments”应为“submit assignments”。建议注意基本语法和词汇搭配,避免小错误。

Exemplo: Yes, my school is well known for its strict rules. For example, students must be in class on time and submit assignments promptly. These rules help maintain high academic standards.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够流畅,且有语法错误,如“may be just feel stressed out”应为“may just feel stressed”。建议加强句子连贯性和语法准确性。

Exemplo: I think it depends on the situation. Reasonable rules can help students develop good habits, but overly strict rules may just make them feel stressed.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在时态错误和拼写错误,如“dedicate”应为“dedicated”,“leave”应为“left”。建议注意时态一致和词汇拼写。

Exemplo: Yes, when I was in junior high, my Chinese teacher was very dedicated. She arrived at school early and left only after all the students had gone.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但语法错误较多,如“rules plays”应为“rules play”,“more than it should have been”表达不够地道。建议改进语法和表达的自然性。

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because I think the rules in Chinese universities play a bigger role than necessary, which restricts our creativity.

Have you ever had a really strict teacher?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答语法混乱,句子不完整且表达不清晰,如“I'm not really good yet maths and calculating”应为“I wasn't very good at math and calculations”。建议加强句子结构和表达清晰度。

Exemplo: When I was in junior high, my math teacher was very strict. Since I wasn't good at math, he often called on me to answer questions, which made me feel very nervous.

Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答表达不够清晰,语法错误较多,如“rules plays a role that assistant you”应为“rules play a role that assist you”。建议提高句子连贯性和语法准确性。

Exemplo: I think teachers need to consider rules carefully because rules help them manage students. Therefore, I would not want to work in a school without any rules.

Gramática

Verb in the present participle form

× Students may benefit more from reasonable rules that help them develop good habits, but for the rules that are too strict, they may be just feel stressed out.

Students may benefit more from reasonable rules that help them develop good habits, but for the rules that are too strict, they may just feel stressed out.

这里的“may be just feel”中,“be”是不必要的,正确用法是“may just feel”,因为“may”后面直接跟动词原形或形容词。多余的“be”导致语法错误。

Verb in the present participle form

× Yeah, when I was a junior high school student, my Chinese teacher is a really dedicate person.

Yeah, when I was a junior high school student, my Chinese teacher was a really dedicated person.

这里“dedicate”应为形容词“dedicated”,表示“敬业的”,而不是动词形式。形容词用来修饰名词。

Past tense issue

× She went to school early in the morning and leave the school after every student left.

She went to school early in the morning and left the school after every student left.

句子描述过去的动作,动词时态应保持一致,第二个动词“leave”应改为过去式“left”。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think in today's Chinese universities the rules plays a role more than it should have been.

I prefer to have fewer rules at school because I think in today's Chinese universities the rules play a role more than they should have.

“rules”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“play”,而不是“plays”。另外,“it should have been”应改为“they should have”,保持主谓一致。

Singular and plural issue

× Still in my junior high school my math teacher is a really strict person I'm not really good yet maths and calculating so he always call me to answer the questions and I feel stomach ache just.

Still in my junior high school my math teacher was a really strict person. I'm not really good at maths and calculating, so he always called me to answer the questions and I just felt stomach ache.

“maths”前应加介词“at”,表示擅长某科目;“call”应为过去式“called”,与过去时态保持一致;“feel stomach ache”应为“felt stomach ache”,且“just”位置调整更自然。

Singular and plural issue

× For me, I think it's more things to consider as a teacher about the rules because when you as a teacher, the rules plays a role that assistant you to manage the students.

For me, I think there are more things to consider as a teacher about the rules because when you are a teacher, the rules play a role that assist you to manage the students.

“more things”前应加“there are”表示存在;“you as a teacher”应为“you are a teacher”;“rules”复数,谓语动词应用复数“play”;“assistant”应为动词“assist”,表示“帮助”。

Vocabulário

EarlyAdvance; Primitive; Prompt
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
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