Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer provides a list of rules, but it lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. To improve, try to use complete sentences with correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Also, organize your answer with linking words to make it more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear the school uniform and tie their hair neatly. Additionally, they need to bring their lunch from home and carry all the necessary academic books for their classes.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use clearer sentence structures and linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because rules help them learn better and develop discipline. Moreover, following rules ensures that students complete their work properly and on time.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical errors. To improve, avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your points. Also, use correct verb forms and more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: Yes, I have had several dedicated teachers. They not only taught their subjects well but also encouraged us to build successful careers and maintain discipline.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. To improve, try to speak more confidently, avoid filler words, and use correct grammar. Also, organize your answer clearly with linking words.

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules at school because having too many can frustrate students. However, it is important that the existing rules are followed properly.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the main idea but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, use correct verb forms, clarify your points, and connect ideas with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very strict English teacher at school. He was strict about our homework and discipline. Although we sometimes felt frustrated, he ultimately helped us improve a lot.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains informal language and grammatical mistakes. To improve, use formal language, avoid filler words, and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to work in a school without strict rules because I believe that if students respect their teachers and maintain discipline, they will listen without the need for many rules.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school like student have to wear school dress mask, they have to tie their hair properly, they have to tie their shoes properly, they have to pack their lunch from home and they also have to pack all their academic book which they need in their classes.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school like students have to wear school dress mask, they have to tie their hair properly, they have to tie their shoes properly, they have to pack their lunch from home and they also have to pack all their academic books which they need in their classes.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject 'rules' and the context referring to multiple students. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple academic books. Using singular forms here is incorrect because the sentence talks about multiple students and multiple books.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school like student have to wear school dress mask, they have to tie their hair properly, they have to tie their shoes properly, they have to pack their lunch from home and they also have to pack all their academic book which they need in their classes.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school like students have to wear school dress mask, they have to tie their hair properly, they have to tie their shoes properly, they have to pack their lunch from home and they also have to pack all their academic books which they need in their classes.

The verb 'have' is correct for plural subject 'students'. However, the original sentence incorrectly uses singular 'student' with plural verb 'have'. Correct subject-verb agreement requires both subject and verb to be plural or singular accordingly.

× Yes, there I think students would benefit more from more rules, because rules is a thing that helps a student to learn, to be disciplined, to do their works properly and time to time.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from more rules, because rules are things that help a student to learn, to be disciplined, to do their work properly and on time.

The phrase 'rules is a thing' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should be paired with 'are' and 'things'. Also, 'works' should be singular 'work' when referring to tasks in general. 'Time to time' should be 'on time' to express punctuality.

× Yes, there I think students would benefit more from more rules, because rules is a thing that helps a student to learn, to be disciplined, to do their works properly and time to time.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit more from more rules, because rules are things that help a student to learn, to be disciplined, to do their work properly and on time.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'rules'. The correct verb form is 'are' to match the plural subject. Also, 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with plural 'rules'.

× Yeah, actually several teachers were so dedicated for their subject and they really helps students to learn and also encourage them to build a successful career and to be disciplined.

✓ Yeah, actually several teachers were so dedicated to their subject and they really help students to learn and also encourage them to build a successful career and to be disciplined.

The verb 'helps' is incorrect because the subject 'they' is plural. The correct verb form is 'help'. Also, 'dedicated for' should be 'dedicated to' (see next correction).

× Yeah, actually several teachers were so dedicated for their subject and they really helps students to learn and also encourage them to build a successful career and to be disciplined.

✓ Yeah, actually several teachers were so dedicated to their subject and they really help students to learn and also encourage them to build a successful career and to be disciplined.

The correct preposition after 'dedicated' is 'to', not 'for'. 'Dedicated to' is the standard collocation when expressing commitment or devotion to something.

× So most of the teachers were so dedicated about their subject and towards their students.

✓ So most of the teachers were so dedicated to their subject and towards their students.

The phrase 'dedicated about' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'dedicated to'. This is a prepositional usage issue rather than singular/plural, but the correction is necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× So most of the teachers were so dedicated about their subject and towards their students.

✓ So most of the teachers were so dedicated to their subject and towards their students.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect after 'dedicated'. The correct preposition is 'to' when expressing dedication or commitment.

× Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student have so much rules, he or she will be frustrated.

✓ Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student has so many rules, he or she will be frustrated.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'a student'. Also, 'so much rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is countable; it should be 'so many rules'.

× Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student have so much rules, he or she will be frustrated.

✓ Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student has so many rules, he or she will be frustrated.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'a student'. The correct verb form is 'has'.

× Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student have so much rules, he or she will be frustrated.

✓ Umm, I prefer fewer rules at school because if we, if a student has so many rules, he or she will be frustrated.

'Rules' is a countable noun, so the quantifier 'much' is incorrect. The correct quantifier for countable nouns is 'many'.

× Yes, I had really strict teacher in my school.

✓ Yes, I had a really strict teacher in my school.

The singular countable noun 'teacher' requires an article 'a' before it. Omitting the article is incorrect in this context.

× He was English teacher and he was so strict about our homeworks and disciplined and about our praise.

✓ He was an English teacher and he was so strict about our homework and discipline and about our praise.

'Homework' and 'discipline' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks' and 'disciplined'. Also, 'English teacher' requires the article 'an' before it.

× He was English teacher and he was so strict about our homeworks and disciplined and about our praise.

✓ He was an English teacher and he was so strict about our homework and discipline and about our praise.

The phrase 'English teacher' requires the indefinite article 'an' before it because 'English' starts with a vowel sound.

× He was English teacher and he was so strict about our homeworks and disciplined and about our praise.

✓ He was an English teacher and he was so strict about our homework and discipline and about our praise.

'Homework' and 'discipline' are uncountable nouns and should not be pluralized. Using 'homeworks' and 'disciplined' as nouns is incorrect.

× So I sometimes we all feel so frustrated about him, but at the end of the day he really helps us a lot.

✓ So sometimes we all feel so frustrated about him, but at the end of the day he really helps us a lot.

The phrase 'I sometimes we all' is incorrect and redundant. Removing 'I' corrects the sentence structure.

× Yeah, I would love to work as a teacher in a rule free school because it's not necessary that the students must have to have the rules.

✓ Yeah, I would love to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because it's not necessary that the students must have the rules.

The phrase 'must have to have' is redundant; 'must have' or 'have to' alone is sufficient. Also, 'rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free' when used as a compound adjective.

× It's not necessary. You know, if we respect our teacher and we discipline and we become friendly, it's students gonna listen to us.

✓ It's not necessary. You know, if we respect our teacher and we are disciplined and we become friendly, the students are going to listen to us.

'We discipline' is incorrect; it should be 'we are disciplined' to express the state of being disciplined. Also, 'it's students gonna' is incorrect; it should be 'the students are going to' for proper subject-verb agreement and formal expression.

× We don't need to, uh, stuck in.

✓ We don't need to, uh, get stuck in.

The verb 'stuck' cannot follow 'need to' directly. The correct form is 'get stuck in' to express becoming involved or trapped in something.