Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'like'. Also, use correct grammar and be concise. For example, say 'Every school has rules to control and manage students effectively.'

Exemplo: Yes, every school has rules to help control and manage students effectively.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'additionally' correctly. Be specific and clear in your examples. For instance, 'Yes, more rules can help students manage their time better and reduce procrastination. Additionally, rules encourage students to listen to teachers and focus on their studies.'

Exemplo: Yes, more rules can help students manage their time better and reduce procrastination. Additionally, rules encourage students to listen to teachers and focus on their studies.

Sugestão: Make your answer clearer and more coherent. Use correct grammar and avoid incomplete sentences. For example, 'Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers who have good personalities and share their knowledge and experiences with me, which helps me learn.'

Exemplo: Yes, I have had many dedicated teachers who have good personalities and share their knowledge and experiences with me, which helps me learn.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary ('rules' instead of 'roles'). Be concise and clear. For example, 'I prefer more rules at school because they help me manage my behavior and develop discipline, which makes me a better student.'

Exemplo: I prefer more rules at school because they help me manage my behavior and develop discipline, which makes me a better student.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing phrases. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, 'Most of my teachers were strict, but not too serious. They were kind and encouraging depending on the situation.'

Exemplo: Most of my teachers were strict, but not too serious. They were kind and encouraging depending on the situation.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Use clear and correct sentences. For example, 'Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because I can use my experience and knowledge to help students develop self-discipline.'

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because I can use my experience and knowledge to help students develop self-discipline.

× Obviously it's like every schools must have rules to UH to control the students and UH manage students in effectively.

✓ Obviously, it's like every school must have rules to control the students and manage students effectively.

The word 'schools' should be singular 'school' because 'every' is used with singular nouns. Also, 'in effectively' is incorrect; 'effectively' should be used without 'in'.

× Obviously it's like every schools must have rules to UH to control the students and UH manage students in effectively.

✓ Obviously, it's like every school must have rules to control the students and manage students effectively.

The adverb 'effectively' is used to modify the verb 'manage', so it should not be preceded by the preposition 'in'.

× Yes, as the rule can manage and, uh, discipline students in effective way.

✓ Yes, as the rules can manage and discipline students in an effective way.

The word 'rule' should be plural 'rules' because it refers to multiple rules. Also, 'effective way' needs the article 'an' before it.

× Yes, as the rule can manage and, uh, discipline students in effective way.

✓ Yes, as the rules can manage and discipline students in an effective way.

The phrase 'in effective way' requires the article 'an' before 'effective way' to be grammatically correct.

× For example, of student can be on times that make them uh, don't procrastinations.

✓ For example, students can be on time which helps them not to procrastinate.

'Student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Procrastinations' is incorrect; the verb 'procrastinate' should be used instead.

× And additionally, uh, there are also rules to listens to teachers make or to focus on the license.

✓ Additionally, there are also rules to listen to teachers and to focus on the lessons.

The verb 'listens' should be 'listen' after 'rules to'. 'Make' is incorrect here and 'license' should be 'lessons' to fit the context.

× Yes, there are many dedicated teachers in my schools that I study with them and yes they behave in a good personalities and they have shared opinions, experiences or knowledgeable.

✓ Yes, there are many dedicated teachers in my school that I study with, and yes, they behave with good personalities and have shared opinions, experiences, or knowledge.

'Schools' should be singular 'school' as it refers to the institution. 'In a good personalities' is incorrect; it should be 'with good personalities'. 'Knowledgeable' is an adjective; 'knowledge' is the correct noun here.

× Yes, there are many dedicated teachers in my schools that I study with them and yes they behave in a good personalities and they have shared opinions, experiences or knowledgeable.

✓ Yes, there are many dedicated teachers in my school that I study with, and yes, they behave with good personalities and have shared opinions, experiences, or knowledge.

The pronoun 'them' is unnecessary after 'teachers' and should be omitted.

× They have for me that which make me be.

✓ They have supported me, which has helped me to be better.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I prefer to have more roles as schools as like as the more roles in school works, I can develop myself through this role to uh, manage my uh, behavior and uh, develop my discipline, which make me become a better and focus on my love.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because the more rules there are, the more I can develop myself through these rules to manage my behavior and develop my discipline, which makes me become better and focus on my goals.

'Roles' should be 'rules' as the context is about school regulations. 'Schools as like as the more roles in school works' is incorrect and rephrased for clarity. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'which'. 'Love' is likely a misused word; 'goals' fits better.

× I prefer to have more roles as schools as like as the more roles in school works, I can develop myself through this role to uh, manage my uh, behavior and uh, develop my discipline, which make me become a better and focus on my love.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because the more rules there are, the more I can develop myself through these rules to manage my behavior and develop my discipline, which makes me become better and focus on my goals.

'A better' is incomplete; it should be 'better' without 'a'.

× I would say my all teachers were strict, but it's not all seriously in strict way like they can be in street size and funny signs.

✓ I would say all my teachers were strict, but not always seriously strict; sometimes they could be humorous and kind.

'My all teachers' should be 'all my teachers'. 'Not all seriously in strict way' is ungrammatical and rephrased. 'Street size and funny signs' is unclear and replaced with 'humorous and kind' for clarity.

× It depends on the situations that student works or but mostly they are uh, encouraged and like kind for us because like we're my classmate and I was.

✓ It depends on the situations that students face, but mostly they are encouraging and kind to us because we are classmates.

'Student works or' is incorrect; 'students face' is appropriate. 'Encouraged and like kind for us' should be 'encouraging and kind to us'. 'We're my classmate and I was' is ungrammatical and corrected.

× Uh, yes, because like a rule free schools. So then no, like no rules to strip the student so I can use my experiences, knowledge and umm my uh mindset to share to my students to make them develop self development and self-discipline.

✓ Yes, because in a rule-free school, there are no rules to restrict the students, so I can use my experiences, knowledge, and mindset to share with my students to help them develop self-development and self-discipline.

'Rule free schools' should be 'rule-free school'. 'No rules to strip the student' is incorrect; 'restrict the students' is correct. 'Share to my students' should be 'share with my students'.