Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, especially the example about hair rules. Try to give a clear topic sentence and complete your examples fully. Also, avoid ambiguity and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and coherent.

Exemplo: I am no longer a student, but when I was in school, we had many rules. For example, students were required to keep their hair short, not extending beyond their fingers. These rules were meant to maintain discipline and uniformity among students.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and expresses your opinion clearly, but it ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your sentences concise.

Exemplo: In my opinion, students benefit from having some rules, but adding too many rules can be harmful. If every action is restricted by rules, it can limit creative freedom and hinder cultural innovation. Therefore, a balance is necessary.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but lacks clarity and grammatical accuracy. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences properly. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples to support your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher in my 10th standard. During the board examinations, he taught computer applications diligently. He was so committed that he sometimes skipped his meals to help students study effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor grammatical errors such as 'a fewer rules' which should be 'fewer rules'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add a concluding sentence.

Exemplo: I personally prefer fewer rules at school. While disciplinary rules are important to maintain decorum, rules that restrict creativity and innovation should be avoided. This balance helps students learn effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer contains useful information but is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about the strictness and punishments.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a strict teacher who was responsible for discipline rather than teaching a subject. Whenever students misbehaved, he would punish them severely to maintain order in the school.

Sugestão: Your answer shows your opinion but ends abruptly and is somewhat unclear. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'central limit' and explain your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: I would love to work as a teacher in a school, but I believe some basic rules are necessary. Without any rules, students might behave irresponsibly, which could lead to chaos. Therefore, a few ground rules help maintain discipline and a positive learning environment.

× I personally would prefer a fewer rules at school.

✓ I personally would prefer fewer rules at school.

The article 'a' should not be used before 'fewer' because 'fewer' is used with plural countable nouns without an article. 'Rules' is plural, so 'fewer rules' is correct, not 'a fewer rules'.

× he used to do each computer applications.

✓ he used to teach each computer application.

The phrase 'do each computer applications' is incorrect because 'applications' is plural and 'each' is singular. Also, 'do' is not the correct verb here; 'teach' fits better. So, it should be 'teach each computer application'.

× her hair should be shorter, they shouldn't surpass her fingers when we.

✓ her hair should be shorter; it shouldn't surpass her fingers when we.

The pronoun 'they' is plural but refers to 'hair' which is singular or uncountable in this context. The correct pronoun is 'it'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs proper ending, but focusing on grammar, 'they' should be 'it'.

× If we put a rule on everything there, creative freedom would be lost and a lot of cultural innovation would be put on hold.

✓ If we put rules on everything there, creative freedom would be lost and a lot of cultural innovation would be put on hold.

The phrase 'a rule on everything' is less natural than 'rules on everything' because 'everything' implies multiple instances, so plural 'rules' fits better.