Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples of rules at your school. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and arrive on time. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and completeness. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: I think it depends on the students. If they can follow strict rules, these can help them develop good habits. However, too many rules might be difficult for some students to follow, which could cause stress.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples of how the teacher was dedicated. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a dedicated math teacher who always helped us solve difficult problems. She worked hard to improve our grades and was very patient with us.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer having more rules at school because they motivate students to behave well. For example, rules about attendance help students develop discipline for their future.

Sugestão: Your answer is concerning and unclear. Avoid mentioning physical punishment as it is inappropriate. Instead, describe the teacher's strictness in terms of discipline or expectations, and explain how it affected you.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a strict science teacher in grade 10 who expected us to complete all assignments on time. Although he was strict, his teaching helped me improve my understanding of the subject.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Clearly express your opinion and explain why, using linking words and specific details.

Exemplo: If I had the chance to work in a rule-free school, I would teach students about the importance of rules. I believe rules help guide students and prepare them for the future.

× Education sector offers strict rules for every education participants for their good good path, involvement and development for their better future.

✓ The education sector offers strict rules for every education participant for their good path, involvement, and development for their better future.

The phrase 'every education participants' is incorrect because 'every' should be followed by a singular noun. Also, 'good good path' seems to be a repetition and should be corrected to 'good path'. The definite article 'The' is needed before 'education sector' to specify it.

× If they can absorb any types of strict rules, they can benefit in their life.

✓ If they can absorb any type of strict rules, they can benefit in their life.

The phrase 'any types' is incorrect because 'any' should be followed by a singular noun when used with 'type'. The correct phrase is 'any type of strict rules'.

× But on the other hand, if some student are really uh, hard to gain some types of rules and regulation.

✓ But on the other hand, if some students are really hard to follow some types of rules and regulations.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'rules and regulation' should be pluralized as 'rules and regulations' to be consistent.

× In my life there was my math teacher who always help us to solve some mathematic problem where she always dedicated to ours improvement of students marks.

✓ In my life, there was my math teacher who always helped us to solve some math problems and was always dedicated to our improvement in students' marks.

The verb 'help' should be in past tense 'helped' to match the past context. 'Mathematic problem' should be plural 'math problems'. 'Ours improvement' is incorrect; it should be 'our improvement'. Also, 'students marks' should be possessive 'students' marks'.

× She always work hard for our marks.

✓ She always works hard for our marks.

The verb 'work' should be in third person singular present tense 'works' to agree with the subject 'She'.

× In my opinion, there should be a more rules for the students at school because it tends to be a more motivation and empathetic rules for their life which improves your future.

✓ In my opinion, there should be more rules for the students at school because they tend to be more motivating and empathetic rules for their life which improve their future.

The phrase 'a more rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. 'More motivation and empathetic rules' should be 'more motivating and empathetic rules' to use correct adjectives. Also, 'it tends' should be 'they tend' to agree with plural 'rules'. 'Your future' should be 'their future' to maintain consistency.

× When I was in grade 10, the science teacher is really strict in my life.

✓ When I was in grade 10, the science teacher was really strict in my life.

The verb 'is' should be in past tense 'was' to match the past time reference 'When I was in grade 10'.

× He always beat me and slapped me for my few mistakes that I that I have done to tell about my answer.

✓ He always beat me and slapped me for the few mistakes that I had made when explaining my answer.

The phrase 'have done' should be past perfect 'had made' to indicate an action completed before another past action. 'My few mistakes' should be 'the few mistakes' for clarity. 'To tell about my answer' is awkward and corrected to 'when explaining my answer'.

× He always prefer to be to us.

✓ He always prefers to be strict with us.

The verb 'prefer' should be 'prefers' to agree with 'He'. The phrase 'prefer to be to us' is unclear and corrected to 'prefers to be strict with us' to convey intended meaning.

× If I had to chance to work in a rule free school, of course I will join dear and teach some students about some rules and regulation to guide them in proper way.

✓ If I had the chance to work in a rule-free school, of course I would join there and teach some students about some rules and regulations to guide them in a proper way.

The phrase 'had to chance' should be 'had the chance'. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. 'Join dear' is incorrect and corrected to 'join there'. 'Rules and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'. 'In proper way' should be 'in a proper way'.