Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating words like 'every single day' and 'to school' unnecessarily.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, we must wear uniforms daily to promote discipline, and students are required to hand over their phones to teachers during class.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I believe that having stricter rules can help students develop better discipline. Moreover, it teaches them the importance of following rules and respecting others.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat long and contains filler words like 'umm' and some grammatical mistakes. Try to be more concise, avoid fillers, and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a dedicated math teacher who assigned a lot of homework while we prepared for an important test. This motivated me because having clear goals made a big difference.

Sugestão: Your answer has some vocabulary errors ('rolls' instead of 'rules') and unclear phrasing. Try to proofread your answers, use correct vocabulary, and structure your sentences clearly with linking words.

Exemplo: Currently, I prefer fewer rules, but I believe having more rules is better because they help create a safe and positive learning environment and encourage good character development.

Sugestão: Your answer contains grammatical errors and sensitive content that should be expressed carefully. Use correct grammar, avoid informal or inappropriate expressions, and provide clear, respectful descriptions.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was in fifth grade, I had a very strict teacher who enforced discipline strictly, such as giving punishments if we didn't complete homework or pay attention in class.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid vague expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: I wouldn't like to work in a rule-free school because I believe strict rules help people become better individuals. Without rules, the school environment might become chaotic.

× In my opinion, setting a strict rule to students could help them to have more discipline in life and at the same time they will understand how important to follow the rules and it's a way of respecting others.

✓ In my opinion, setting strict rules for students could help them have more discipline in life and at the same time they will understand how important it is to follow the rules and that it's a way of respecting others.

The phrase 'setting a strict rule to students' is incorrect; 'setting strict rules for students' is the correct form. Also, 'how important to follow' lacks the verb 'it is' to be grammatically correct. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I once had a really dedicated teacher who taught us math and during that time we were preparing for a really important math test and she would give us a lots of homework and somehow I find that really motivating because umm, setting a goal was a big difference.

✓ I once had a really dedicated teacher who taught us math and during that time we were preparing for a really important math test and she would give us a lot of homework and somehow I found that really motivating because, umm, setting a goal made a big difference.

The phrase 'a lots of homework' is incorrect; the correct form is 'a lot of homework' because 'lot' is singular here. Also, 'I find' should be past tense 'I found' to match the past context. 'Was a big difference' should be 'made a big difference' for correct expression.

× At this time, I would prefer fewer rolls, but I think it's better to have a more because it will help students to ensure a positive and safe learning environment and also it will set a good personality.

✓ At this time, I would prefer fewer rules, but I think it's better to have more because it will help students ensure a positive and safe learning environment and also it will help develop a good personality.

The word 'rolls' is a misspelling; it should be 'rules'. Also, 'a more' is incorrect; it should be 'more' without 'a'. The phrase 'help students to ensure' is better as 'help students ensure'. 'Set a good personality' is awkward; 'help develop a good personality' is clearer.

× Yes, I believe I was in fifth grade and I used to go to a place where they let me practice every single day and there was a teacher who would beat us if we don't do the homework or don't listen her.

✓ Yes, I believe I was in fifth grade and I used to go to a place where they let me practice every single day and there was a teacher who would beat us if we didn't do the homework or didn't listen to her.

The conditional clause requires past tense 'didn't' instead of 'don't' to match 'would beat'. Also, 'listen her' is incorrect; it should be 'listen to her' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to'.

× I don't think that's a really good experience to have because I believe that people in under strict restriction becomes a better person and working in this rule free school would just look like a disaster.

✓ I don't think that's a really good experience to have because I believe that people under strict restrictions become better persons and working in this rule-free school would just look like a disaster.

The phrase 'in under strict restriction' is incorrect; it should be 'under strict restrictions'. 'Becomes' should be 'become' to agree with plural 'people'. 'Rule free' should be hyphenated as 'rule-free'. 'A better person' changed to 'better persons' to agree with plural 'people' or could be 'become better people' for natural expression.