Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many hesitations and filler words, which affects the natural flow. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, avoiding redundancy and filler sounds.

Exemplo: Yes, my school has strict rules that all students must follow. These rules help maintain discipline and create a good learning environment for everyone.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is unclear due to hesitations and grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your opinion clearly with specific reasons.

Exemplo: I think having some rules is important, but too many strict rules can negatively affect students' mental health. Therefore, more rules are not always beneficial.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and provide more specific examples to support your admiration.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a dedicated accounting teacher who inspired me to pursue a career in accounting. He always motivated me and taught useful techniques that helped me understand the subject better.

Sugestão: Your answer is repetitive and unclear due to hesitations and grammar mistakes. Use linking words to organize your ideas and express your preference clearly with reasons.

Exemplo: I prefer a balanced number of rules at school because too many rules can harm students' mental health, while too few rules may reduce discipline and flexibility.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and contains many hesitations and unclear pronouns. Try to speak clearly, use correct pronouns, and provide specific details about the strict teacher.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very strict teacher who was respected by everyone. Although he was strict, he was also dedicated and helped us learn effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by hesitations and unclear phrasing. Try to express your thoughts more fluently and use linking words to connect your points.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to work in a rule-free school because it offers flexibility and encourages students to learn in their own way, which can help them reach their full potential.

× Yes, I think UH rules are very disciplined because that's uh, uh student, uh, that's students makes uh discipline to follow that.

✓ Yes, I think the rules are very strict because students make discipline to follow them.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms, such as 'student' and 'students' and uses 'makes' instead of 'make' for plural subject. Also, 'rules are very disciplined' is incorrect; rules themselves are not disciplined, but they can be strict. The correction uses plural forms consistently and correct verb agreement.

× And uh schools is such a thing that where everyone should follow the rules.

✓ And schools are such places where everyone should follow the rules.

The subject 'schools' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'such a thing that where' is awkward; 'such places where' is more appropriate for plural 'schools'.

× more rules is not necessary.

✓ more rules are not necessary.

The subject 'more rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× he motivate always me to become a accountant in the future

✓ he always motivates me to become an accountant in the future

The subject 'he' requires the verb in third person singular form 'motivates'. Also, 'always' should be placed before the verb. 'a accountant' is incorrect; 'an accountant' is correct because 'accountant' starts with a vowel sound.

× he teaches some techniques that is very helpful for me as well.

✓ he teaches some techniques that are very helpful for me as well.

The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'techniques', which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× I think UH schools should provide a balance rules for everyone

✓ I think schools should provide balanced rules for everyone

'A balance rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and 'balance' is a noun here. Using 'balanced rules' (adjective + plural noun) is correct.

× fewer wells being uh, fewer rules can be uh can reduce can more be flexibility.

✓ fewer rules can increase flexibility.

The phrase is confusing and contains 'wells' instead of 'rules'. 'Fewer rules' is plural and should be followed by a plural verb or appropriate phrase. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning.

× he was uh the one, one of the most uh, dedicated and strict teacher in my school

✓ he was one of the most dedicated and strict teachers in my school

'One of the most' requires the noun to be plural ('teachers'). Also, 'he was the one' is redundant here.

× everyone scared uh her very much because uh, he was uh the one

✓ everyone was very scared of him because he was

The pronouns 'her' and 'he' are inconsistent referring to the same person. 'Everyone scared her' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone was scared of him'.

× I would really like to contribute in the role free school

✓ I would really like to contribute to the rule-free school

The verb 'contribute' is followed by the preposition 'to', not 'in'. Also, 'role free' should be 'rule-free'.

× encouragement to, uh, encouragement for the students, uh, so, so that he can learn and get the most.

✓ encouragement for the students so that they can learn and get the most.

'He' is singular but refers to 'students' which is plural, so 'they' should be used.