Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words to connect your points smoothly. Also, try to avoid listing rules without linking them logically.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For instance, students are not allowed to be late in the morning, and they must remain quiet during lessons. Moreover, if they want to speak, they should raise their hand first to maintain order.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but contains unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and check your sentence structure. Also, provide specific examples with clear explanations.

Exemplo: I think students would benefit from having suitable rules because they help create a structured learning environment. For example, rules about punctuality encourage discipline, which in turn improves students' focus during class.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and clarify your meaning. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was in junior high school. She always encouraged us to feel comfortable and confident when expressing ourselves, which made learning much more enjoyable. As a result, her support helped me develop a positive attitude towards school.

Sugestão: Your answer has good points but contains unclear and awkward phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, explain your ideas with specific details.

Exemplo: I prefer to have more rules at school because they help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment. However, it is also important for teachers to explain the values behind these rules so that students understand why they exist.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and detailed, but you can improve by correcting minor grammatical errors and using more natural expressions.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very strict teacher when I was an elementary school student. She was very demanding and expected us to follow all the rules perfectly, which made me feel quite intimidated. Even now, I still feel a bit nervous whenever I think about her.

Sugestão: Your answer has several unclear and incorrect phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, complete your sentences to convey full ideas.

Exemplo: I wouldn't like to work as a teacher, even in a rule-free school. Teaching is a challenging job that requires a lot of patience and responsibility, whether the rules are strict or relaxed. Managing students and helping them learn effectively can be difficult without clear guidelines.

× I think students would benefit from having suitable rules because they help create a structured learning environment. For example, rules about punctuality and with backhand incurred discipline and improved focus in class.

✓ I think students would benefit from having suitable rules because they help create a structured learning environment. For example, rules about punctuality and behavior encourage discipline and improve focus in class.

The original sentence contains incorrect word usage ('with backhand incurred') which is not grammatically correct or meaningful. The correct words are 'behavior encourage' to properly express the intended meaning. Also, the verbs should be in present tense to match the general statement about rules.

× Yes, I had already dedicated when I was a junior high school student.

✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher when I was a junior high school student.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly uses 'had already dedicated' which is not correct. The intended meaning is to say the student had a dedicated teacher, so the sentence should include 'a really dedicated teacher' to be grammatically correct and clear.

× However, it is also important for teachers to teach students about more value so that they understand what its rules exist.

✓ However, it is also important for teachers to teach students about more values so that they understand why the rules exist.

The word 'value' should be plural 'values' because it refers to multiple principles or morals. Also, 'what its rules exist' is incorrect; it should be 'why the rules exist' to correctly express the reason for the rules.

× Yes, I had a very strict teacher when I was in elementary school student.

✓ Yes, I had a very strict teacher when I was an elementary school student.

The phrase 'in elementary school student' is incorrect because 'student' should be preceded by an article and the preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'an elementary school student' to indicate the time period.

× I wouldn't like to work as a teacher, even in a ruthless school.

✓ I wouldn't like to work as a teacher, even in a rule-free school.

The word 'ruthless' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is a school without rules, so 'rule-free' is the correct adjective to use.

× For me, teaching is a challenging job because it requires a lot of patience and responsibility, regardless of whether the rules are strength or relaxed.

✓ For me, teaching is a challenging job because it requires a lot of patience and responsibility, regardless of whether the rules are strict or relaxed.

The phrase 'rules are strength or relaxed' is incorrect. The correct adjective is 'strict' to contrast with 'relaxed' when describing rules.

× I think managing students and helping them learn effectively.

✓ I think managing students and helping them learn effectively is important.

The original sentence is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb or predicate. Adding 'is important' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.