Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer, more grammatical and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and incorrect vocabulary (e.g., "handmaid's dress", "free illness").

Exemplo: Yes. At my public school students had to wear uniforms every day. For example, everyone wore the same blazer and tie to promote equality and reduce distractions. Also, phones were banned in class to help students focus on lessons.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with specific reasons and use linking words (because, for example, therefore). Reduce repetition and hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. More rules can help students develop better time management because clear schedules and homework policies encourage punctuality. For example, a study routine set by the school can help students balance study and extracurricular activities.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: state briefly that you had a dedicated teacher, then give specific examples of her behaviour. Use correct tense and simpler vocabulary rather than long, unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a very dedicated high school teacher who was strict but supportive. For example, she prepared engaging lessons and checked our homework every day so we understood the material without feeling pressured.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer (more or fewer) and explain with one or two clear reasons, using linking words (because, however). Avoid contradictions and unclear phrasing like "prefer fewer roles that have in public school."

Exemplo: I prefer fewer rules. Although strict rules taught me discipline, fewer rules would allow more creativity and independence, which are important for personal growth and practical problem-solving.

Sugestão: Be precise and coherent: state the fact, then give clear examples of her strictness. Fix grammar (tense and subject-verb agreement) and remove hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes. My English teacher in high school was very strict. She required us to complete every homework, checked our classwork carefully, and held extra study sessions to improve our results.

Sugestão: Give a clear stance (yes or no) and support it with reasons and an example. Avoid confusing terms ("row", "rural free school") and reduce hesitations. Use linking words (because, however, therefore).

Exemplo: No, I would not. I prefer working in a school with clear rules because they help maintain discipline and support learning. For instance, clear behaviour policies make it easier to manage classes and ensure all students can learn effectively.

× Yes, I come from a public school, so there got, uh, the handmaid's dress.

✓ Yes, I come from a public school, so there is a uniform, the handmaid's dress.

The phrase 'there got' is colloquial and ungrammatical for existence. Use 'there is' to indicate existence of a singular noun (there is a uniform). Also 'handmaid's dress' seems to be intended as a specific uniform name; ensure correct noun choice. Suggestion: Use 'there is' for singular existence and replace informal 'got.'

× Make sure that students wear uniforms every day, uh, to show and to ensure the free illness and equality among the students.

✓ Make sure that students wear uniforms every day to show and ensure fairness and equality among the students.

The phrase 'free illness' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice. Use 'fairness' or 'equality' to express equal treatment. Also remove redundant 'to' before 'ensure.' Suggestion: Use appropriate nouns (fairness, equality) and keep parallel structure.

× That's why we, we must wear uniforms every day and children shouldn't use phone in the classroom.

✓ That's why we must wear uniforms every day, and children shouldn't use phones in the classroom.

Redundant 'we, we' should be reduced to 'we.' 'Phone' as a countable noun in this context needs plural 'phones' or 'a phone.' Also add a comma before conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Remove repetition and use plural when speaking generally.

× Yes, I think a lot of rules and, umm, guidelines can help students and they have time management after their school.

✓ Yes, I think many rules and guidelines can help students manage their time after school.

'A lot of rules and guidelines' is acceptable but 'many' is more natural with countable nouns. 'They have time management after their school' is ungrammatical: 'manage their time after school' is correct. Suggestion: Use 'manage their time' and remove unnecessary articles.

× I think, yeah, that's why, uh, many rules can benefit students not only for their studies.

✓ I think many rules can benefit students not only in their studies.

Preposition 'for' is incorrect with 'benefit' here; use 'in their studies.' Also remove filler words. Suggestion: Use 'benefit students in their studies' for clarity.

× Yes, umm I had a very dedicated teacher when I'm back in high school.

✓ Yes, I had a very dedicated teacher when I was in high school.

Mixing present tense 'I'm' with past context is incorrect. Use past tense 'was' to match 'had.' Suggestion: Match tense of time reference to past events.

× She's really strict and also make sure that her students enjoy the way she learning and the way she thought mattered the way she used because she don't want to push their.

✓ She was really strict and also made sure that her students enjoyed the way she taught and the methods she used because she didn't want to push them.

Multiple errors: tense consistency (use past 'was', 'made sure', 'enjoyed'), incorrect verb forms ('learning' -> 'taught'), misuse of 'thought' and 'used' were confused, and subject-verb agreement 'she don't' should be 'she didn't.' 'Their' is wrong pronoun; use 'them.' Suggestion: Keep past tense for past events, use correct verb forms and object pronouns.

× As I come from the government schools, umm, our schools are really strict and will organize.

✓ As I come from government schools, our schools were really strict and well organized.

'The government schools' can be 'government schools' generally. 'Will organize' is incorrect; likely meant 'well organized' (adjective). Also tense: talking about past experience use past tense 'were.' Suggestion: Use 'well organized' to describe the school and match tense.

× That's why I think, uh, coming from a public school teach me a lot of things in my life, not only for my study.

✓ That's why I think coming from a public school taught me a lot in my life, not only in my studies.

Subject-verb agreement: 'coming from a public school' requires past 'taught' when referring to past influence. Use 'in my studies' not 'for my study.' Suggestion: Use past tense 'taught' and correct preposition 'in.'

× That's why I prefer fewer roles that have in public school.

✓ That's why I prefer fewer rules in public school.

'Roles' is a wrong word; should be 'rules.' 'Fewer' is correct with plural 'rules.' Remove 'that have.' Suggestion: Use correct noun 'rules' and simpler structure.

× Yes, I had umm a street, a very St. teacher.

✓ Yes, I had a strict, very strict teacher.

The student intended 'strict' but said 'street' and 'St.' which are incorrect. Use 'strict' adjective. Suggestion: Use correct adjective spelling and avoid fillers.

× She is dollar latree and she teach us English and she's very strict for our studied.

✓ She was a native teacher and she taught us English, and she was very strict about our studies.

The phrase 'dollar latree' is unintelligible; likely 'native' or 'dollar' error — interpret as 'native teacher' if intended. Use past tense 'was' and 'taught.' 'Strict for our studied' incorrect: use 'strict about our studies.' Suggestion: Use clear adjective and correct preposition.

× She made sure that we did every homework that she give us and then she usually strict on our study especially.

✓ She made sure that we did every homework she gave us, and she was usually strict about our studies.

Tense mismatch: 'give' should be past 'gave.' 'Usually strict on' should be 'usually strict about.' Suggestion: Keep past tense and use 'about' with 'strict.'

× I think it depend on yes, umm, but personally I like to work as a teacher in a row, have a big uh, more rural school because a rural free school, a student from rural free school, they can really be naughty and bad that.

✓ I think it depends on the situation, but personally I would like to work as a teacher in a large rural school because students from rural schools can sometimes be more naughty.

Wrong verb 'depend' needs third person singular 'depends.' Use conditional/modal 'would like' for preference. Many unclear phrases corrected: 'row'->'role' or removed, 'more rural'->'large rural,' 'rural free school' unclear; simplified. Also avoid repeating 'they' incorrectly. Suggestion: Use 'depends,' 'would like,' and simplify unclear phrases.