Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and complete: state a clear topic sentence, then give two specific rules with brief explanations. Avoid fragments and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'also'. Keep under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear a uniform and arrive by 8:00 a.m., which helps maintain discipline and punctuality. Also, we must follow a code of conduct that forbids cheating and bullying to create a safe learning environment.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with two concise reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'therefore'. Correct grammar: singular/plural and word forms. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think more rules could help students because they encourage good habits such as punctuality and responsibility. For example, rules about attendance and homework deadlines can make students more disciplined and hardworking.

Sugestão: Answer directly, avoid fillers like 'uh', and use past tense consistently. Provide one or two specific examples of the teacher's dedication and link them with words like 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher when I started school. For example, he gave extra help after class and used simple, engaging activities to make grammar and vocabulary easy to understand.

Sugestão: State a clear preference and give two distinct, specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'also'. Keep responses concise.

Exemplo: I prefer to have more rules at school because they promote good behaviour and punctuality. For instance, clear rules about classroom conduct reduce disruptions, and attendance rules help students develop time-management skills.

Sugestão: Be specific about the teacher's strictness with concrete examples and correct grammar. Explain one or two effects of that strictness on you or classmates. Use coherent linking words and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a strict teacher in primary school who expected us to memorize many vocabulary words every week. Because of his high standards, I improved my vocabulary quickly, but some students felt stressed by the heavy workload.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no answer and support it with two logical reasons. Avoid unclear metaphors and incorrect word choices. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' and keep sentences simple and accurate.

Exemplo: No, I would not want to work in a rule-free school because the absence of rules can lead to disorder and make it hard to teach. For example, without rules about behaviour and attendance, students may be distracted and learning outcomes could suffer.

× There are numerous rules for students at school.

✓ There are numerous rules for students at my school.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but context requires specifying 'my school' to match the examiner's question about the student's school. No plurality error; added 'my' for clarity.

× For instance, we are in school uniform along with arriving on time.

✓ For instance, we must wear school uniforms and arrive on time.

The phrase 'we are in school uniform' is unnatural; use 'wear school uniforms'. 'Arriving' should be the base form 'arrive' because it's part of a parallel verb structure connected by 'and'. Use plural 'uniforms' for general rule.

× Apart from that, we have to. Remember the code of con.

✓ Apart from that, we have to remember the school code of conduct.

The original is fragmented and has a typo 'con'. Combine into one sentence and correct the phrase to 'school code of conduct' for clarity and proper noun phrase.

× In my way of thinking, I believe that more rules would benefit students becau because it would make them dedicated as well as hard worker and also punctual human being.

✓ In my opinion, I believe that more rules would benefit students because they would make them more dedicated, harder workers, and more punctual.

Fix typo 'becau'. 'Make them dedicated' needs comparative/adverb 'more dedicated'; 'hard worker' should be plural noun phrase 'harder workers' with comparative 'harder' or 'more hardworking'; 'punctual human being' needs plural and parallel structure 'more punctual'. Use 'in my opinion' for natural phrasing.

× Of course, uh, when I began school I had an English teacher who was very dedicated and he teaches us English patient, simple and interesting way.

✓ Of course. When I began school, I had an English teacher who was very dedicated and he taught us English in a patient, simple, and interesting way.

Mix of past and present tense: 'began' and 'had' are past, so 'teaches' must be past 'taught'. Add preposition 'in' before method and commas between adjectives; 'patient' is an adjective describing manner, requires adverbial phrase 'in a patient way' but idiomatically 'in a patient, simple, and interesting way' works.

× Actually pretty much both but mostly I prefer have more rules at school because it helps us to be better human being along with punctual. Followed by it also makes our life very.

✓ Actually, I like a mixture, but mostly I prefer having more rules at school because they help us become better people and more punctual. They also make our lives better.

Fix sentence fragments and word order. Use 'prefer having' or 'prefer to have'. 'Better human being' should be plural 'better people'. 'Punctual' needs comparison 'more punctual' and 'our life' should be plural 'our lives'. Combine fragments into coherent sentences.

× Of course, when I started my school life, I had an teacher who was very strict and he gave me gave us a lot of vocabularies to memorize along with he punished us to for completing.

✓ Of course, when I started school, I had a teacher who was very strict and he gave us a lot of vocabulary to memorize, and he punished us for not completing it.

Use correct article 'a teacher' (not 'an teacher'). 'Vocabularies' is incorrect; 'vocabulary' is uncountable here. Remove duplicated 'gave me gave us'. Use 'punished us for not completing it' for correct verb and preposition usage.

× Actually I would not because a role preschool makes students and teacher vulnerable because rural preschool is like a bones of people without bones of people so.

✓ Actually, I would not, because a rule-free school would make students and teachers vulnerable; a school without rules is like a body without bones.

Interpretation: 'role preschool' likely meant 'rule-free school'. Use conditional 'would' consistently. Correct 'teacher' to plural 'teachers'. Replace awkward simile with clear metaphor 'a body without bones'. Use proper punctuation and parallel structure.