Rules— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific examples. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (use past tense consistently, singular/plural agreement). Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to add details.

Exemplo: Yes. My school had several rules for students. For example, boys and girls followed different regulations: everyone had to arrive on time and wear the school uniform. Also, students were not allowed to bring outside food to lunch. These rules were meant to maintain discipline and a uniform appearance.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with one or two specific reasons and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words such as 'because', 'therefore' and 'for example'. Correct verb forms and noun forms (e.g., 'it makes discipline', 'students learn discipline').

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I think more rules can help students develop discipline because they learn good habits early. For example, rules about punctuality and homework encourage responsibility, which is useful later in work and life.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the teacher, then give specific examples of why they were dedicated. Reduce hesitation and repetition, and use precise verbs (e.g., 'supported me during my ups and downs').

Exemplo: Yes. My English teacher was the most dedicated. She not only taught grammar and writing but also supported me during difficult times, offering advice and encouragement. For example, she stayed after class to help me improve my essays and motivated me to believe in myself.

Sugestão: Answer directly with 'more' or 'fewer', then give 1–2 clear reasons. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choice ('roles' -> 'rules'; 'discipline man' -> 'disciplined'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: I prefer more rules at school because they help students develop self-discipline and good habits. For instance, rules about attendance and homework ensure students take their studies seriously.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, concise anecdote: name the situation, explain what the teacher did and why, and finish with the result or your feelings. Avoid fillers and repeated words. Use past tense consistently and include a linking word such as 'so' or 'because'.

Exemplo: Yes. One of my teachers was very strict. I loved playing football, and once I went to the field during class, so she punished me for breaking the rule. That experience taught me to follow school regulations more carefully.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and support it with 2 clear reasons using correct grammar (e.g., 'rule-free', 'students don't learn respect'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' and avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: No, I would not. I think a rule-free school would make it hard to maintain respect and order because students might not learn to follow expectations. Therefore lessons could become chaotic and students might take their studies less seriously.

× my my school made a different different rules from boys and girls

✓ my school made different rules for boys and girls

Plural nouns and determiner order: 'different rules' already plural so do not use 'a different rules'. Use 'for' to indicate intended group. Remove duplicate words.'

× like to to reach school at time

✓ such as arriving at school on time

Preposition and verb choice: 'reach school at time' is unnatural; use 'arriving at school on time'. 'on time' is correct prepositional phrase for punctuality. Remove duplicate 'to'.'

× don't wear outside clothes, only wear uniforms and do not take lunch

✓ not wear outside clothes, only wear uniforms, and not bring lunch

Parallel structure and verb form: Use consistent negative forms 'not wear' and 'not bring'. 'take lunch' is nonstandard; 'bring lunch' or 'have lunch' fits context. Added commas for clarity.'

× Yes I think students would benefit more from more rules because it make a discipline when a student's students learn to diff discipline in a short age so it would it would be beneficial for them in a future and that's all

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit from more rules because they create discipline; when students learn discipline at a young age, it will be beneficial for their future

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('it make' -> 'they create'), wrong word forms ('a student's students', 'diff discipline', 'short age'), repetition, and sentence run-on. Break into clear clauses, fix agreement, use 'at a young age' and 'beneficial for their future'.'

× I learned from many teachers what my personal favorite was my English teacher because she not only taught me, she, she taught me how to live in this world

✓ I learned from many teachers; my personal favorite was my English teacher because she not only taught me English but also taught me how to live in this world

Pronoun and clause connector: 'what' is incorrect connector; use clear structure. Also parallel structure: 'not only... but also...' Remove repeated words. Specify what she taught.'

× And she seems in my ups and downs and she's eager

✓ She supported me through my ups and downs and was very caring

Verb choice and tense: 'seems in my ups and downs' is incorrect; use 'supported me through my ups and downs'. 'She's eager' is vague; 'was very caring' fits the intended meaning. Maintain past tense to match 'was my teacher'.'

× Yes, I do prefer to have more roles in schools

✓ Yes, I prefer to have more rules in schools

Word choice: 'roles' (positions) is incorrect; 'rules' (regulations) is intended. 'do prefer' is unnecessary; simple 'prefer' is correct.' },{