Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid hesitations and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Focus on natural vocabulary (close friends, online platforms) and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. I often use messaging apps because they let me stay in touch quickly and share photos or news. For example, I send voice notes when I'm busy, which keeps our conversations personal and convenient.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and add specific examples. Reduce filler words and explain clearly how chatting helps you, using linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually talk about my daily experiences and problems because it helps me feel supported. For example, I tell my friends about work stress or study issues, and they give advice or encouragement, which helps me cope better.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give clear reasons for each choice, using linking words (however, whereas). Avoid repetition and finish sentences. Provide a short personal preference with a reason and an example.

Exemplo: It depends on the situation: I prefer group chats for planning events because everyone can coordinate at once. However, I choose one-to-one chats for deeper or private conversations, for example when I need personal advice.

Sugestão: Start with a clear preference and explain reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and fillers. Offer one specific example contrasting both modes and keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually prefer social media because my schedule is busy and it's more convenient to text or call. For instance, I send quick messages or voice notes during breaks, but I still meet face-to-face for important or longer conversations.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and explain with a specific example and linking words (for example, because). Express your opinion concisely and show how you resolve conflicts to demonstrate maturity.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, which I think is natural because we have different opinions. For example, we once disagreed about plans but resolved it by talking calmly and compromising, which actually strengthened our friendship.

× Of course, I love chatting with my near and tier ones because uh, I can share everything with them and with fast ways environment and computer everyone uh, easily can get depressed.

✓ Of course, I love chatting with my close relatives because I can share everything with them; in a fast-paced environment and with computers, people can easily get depressed.

The student used awkward and incorrect adjectives/adverbs: 'near and tier ones' is incorrect for 'close relatives' or 'close friends'; 'fast ways environment' should be 'fast-paced environment'; word order and modifiers were incorrect. Use correct adjectives and hyphenation (fast-paced) and clearer noun choices. Also adjust word order for 'people can easily get depressed.' Suggestions: learn common adjective-noun collocations and place adverbs (easily) before main verbs.

× So it is easier way and convenient way to chat with them by mobile phone or with the help of Internet, we can share everything like we can do.

✓ So it is an easier and more convenient way to chat with them by mobile phone or via the internet; we can share everything that we want to.

Sentence structure is awkward and missing articles. Use 'an easier and more convenient way' (parallel structure), 'via the internet' is the correct prepositional phrase, and split the run-on sentence with a semicolon or separate sentences. Add 'that we want to' to complete the clause.

× Actually, I usually, uh, I usually prefer to share my, uh, daily experiences with my friends so that I can overcome my, uh, weaknesses.

✓ Actually, I usually prefer to share my daily experiences with my friends so that I can overcome my weaknesses.

Redundant 'I usually' repeated and extra fillers. Tense 'prefer' is present and correct; remove repetition and fillers. Maintain present simple for habitual actions.

× And if we can share our, uh, stresses with someone else, then it is easier way to overcome that thing from our mind.

✓ If we share our stresses with someone else, it is easier to overcome them mentally.

Use conditional zero/first correctly: 'If we share' rather than 'if we can share'. 'Easier way to overcome that thing from our mind' is ungrammatical; replace with 'easier to overcome them mentally.' Make pronoun number agree ('stresses' -> 'them').

× So I use.

✓ So I do.

Fragment 'So I use.' lacks an object and is unclear. Likely intended 'So I do' (meaning 'I do share'), which completes the idea. Ensure verbs have objects when necessary.

× It uh, as per my view, it totally depends on situation.

✓ It, in my view, totally depends on the situation.

Redundant 'it' and incorrect prepositional phrase 'as per my view'. Use 'in my view' and include the article 'the' before 'situation'.

× Sometime I prefer to uh, chat with uh, many people in a group.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to chat with many people in a group.

Use plural adverb 'Sometimes' (not 'Sometime') and remove fillers. Grammar requires 'Sometimes'.

× Like during these days, everyone's a mobile phones and everyone are using WhatsApp.

✓ These days, everyone has a mobile phone and is using WhatsApp.

'Everyone' is singular so verbs must be singular: 'has' and 'is'. 'Mobile phones' should be singular after 'everyone' ('a mobile phone'). Avoid 'everyone's a' confusion.

× So on WhatsApp we are option, uh, of group chats as well as the individual chats.

✓ On WhatsApp we have the option of group chats as well as individual chats.

Incorrect verb and article use: 'we are option' should be 'we have the option'; 'the individual chats' -> 'individual chats' (no article needed). Use 'have the option of'.

× Sometimes I prefer to do chat with only my.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to chat only with one friend.

Sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Do chat' is unnecessary; use 'prefer to chat'. Specify 'one friend' to complete the thought.

× It really depends on time.

✓ It really depends on the time.

Add definite article 'the' before 'time' for natural phrasing. Present tense 'depends' is correct.

× With the passage of time, everyone's have a hectic schedule.

✓ With the passage of time, everyone has a hectic schedule.

'Everyone' is singular and takes singular verb 'has'. 'Everyone's have' is incorrect contraction/verb. Use 'everyone has'.

× So during hectic schedules, uh, I don't have enough time to go to my friend homes and do a face to face conversation.

✓ So during hectic periods, I don't have enough time to go to my friends' homes and have a face-to-face conversation.

Use plural possessive 'friends' homes' to show multiple friends. 'Face-to-face' is hyphenated adjective; use 'have a conversation' not 'do a conversation'. 'Hectic periods' is more natural than 'hectic schedules' here.

× So I prefer to do everything. Uh, I prefer to share everything over the phone and sometimes I all I prefer to send just a message because it is easier and convenient way to convey our message.

✓ So I prefer to do everything by phone. I prefer to share everything over the phone, and sometimes I just prefer to send a message because it is an easier and more convenient way to convey our message.

Use correct preposition 'by phone' or 'over the phone'; fix repetition and word order. Add articles 'an' and 'more' for comparatives. Remove duplicated phrases 'I all I'.

× It's really normal if we have friends, uh, argues is normal in a human being nature.

✓ It's really normal if we have friends; arguing is normal in human nature.

Use gerund 'arguing' not 'argues'. 'A human being nature' is incorrect; use 'human nature' (no article). Semicolon separates clauses.

× Sometimes, uh, if we both have, uh, opposite opinions, then sometimes we argued over a silly things.

✓ Sometimes, if we both have opposite opinions, we argue over silly things.

Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'we argue' not 'we argued'. Remove redundant 'sometimes' and fix 'a silly things' to 'silly things' (number agreement).

× So it's normal in our friendships.

✓ So it's normal in friendships.

'Our friendships' is acceptable but 'in friendships' is more natural and concise. No grammatical error major, just stylistic.

× So I think As for my view, these kind of things makes our friendship more stronger.

✓ So I think, in my view, these kinds of things make our friendships stronger.

Use 'in my view' not 'As for my view'; 'these kinds of things' (plural) requires plural verb 'make'. 'Friendship' plural or singular: 'our friendships' or 'our friendship' but 'stronger' without 'more'. Use 'stronger' not 'more stronger' (double comparative).