Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct, concise and natural. Begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Not really, I'm quite introverted") then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid contradictions and odd phrases like "I don't like you." Keep within 2–4 sentences and correct basic grammar (e.g. "communicate with" → "talk to").

Exemplo: Not really — I'm quite introverted, so I prefer small, familiar groups. For example, I feel uncomfortable talking to new people, so I usually wait until I'm comfortable before I open up.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words (e.g. "When we're out, we...; at college, we..."). Be more specific with examples and reduce fillers. Use accurate verb forms and simpler phrasing: "we discuss" rather than "we talk about our life."

Exemplo: When we meet casually, we usually talk about our lives and future plans. At college, we mainly discuss assignments and how to prepare for exams, for example sharing study tips and timetables.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct statement ("I prefer one-on-one conversations") and give one specific reason with a linking word. Correct awkward phrasing and reduce filler words. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer one-on-one conversations because I'm introverted and find large groups overwhelming. For instance, I can express my opinions more comfortably when speaking to a single friend.

Sugestão: State your preference directly and support it with two concise, specific reasons using linking words (e.g. "because," "for example"). Avoid vague phrasing and repetition like "you can and talk about you." Use correct collocations ("face-to-face," "build confidence").

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build confidence and improve communication skills. For example, speaking in person teaches you to read body language and respond immediately, unlike social media.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and balance it with nuance. Start with a direct answer ("Sometimes") then explain why with specific examples and linking words ("because," "for example"). Avoid absolute statements and reduce fillers. Use plural/singular agreement ("a major factor").

Exemplo: Sometimes — disagreements are normal and can strengthen friendships because they help clear misunderstandings. For example, my friend and I argued about plans once, and after talking it through we understood each other better and became closer.

× If I analyse my behavior, no, I don't like talking or communicate with new people or friends because I'm the kind of person quite introvert and quite closer to myself.

✓ If I analyse my behaviour, no, I don't like talking or communicating with new people or friends because I'm the kind of person who is quite introverted and keeps to myself.

Pronoun and relative clause issue: 'kind of person quite introvert and quite closer to myself' is ungrammatical. Use 'who is' to introduce a clause describing 'person', use adjective 'introverted', and the reflexive phrase should be 'keeps to myself' rather than 'closer to myself'. Also 'communicate' needs -ing to match 'talking or communicating'. Grammar problem type ID: 12 refers to incorrect use of pronouns and related clause structure; this correction fixes that by adding 'who is' and adjusting pronoun/reflexive usage.

× So becoming free or communicate to other people, it's not of my place.

✓ So becoming free or communicating with other people is not my way.

Parallelism and verb form: 'becoming free or communicate' mixes -ing and base forms; both should be in -ing if coordinated. 'Communicate to' is wrong; use 'communicate with' or rephrase. 'It's not of my place' is unnatural; 'not my way' or 'not for me' is better. Grammar problem type ID: 8 addresses incorrect verb + -ing forms and parallel structure.

× So yeah, I don't like you.

✓ So yeah, I don't like it.

Pronoun reference: 'I don't like you' wrongly addresses the examiner; the student likely means 'I don't like that' or 'I don't like it' (the activity). Using 'it' correctly refers to the idea of talking to new people. Grammar problem type ID: 12 covers incorrect pronoun use.

× It defaults in the situation like if you are outside, uh, meeting with people casually with my friends, I will talk about our life, what are our future plans.

✓ In casual situations, like when I am outside meeting people with my friends, I talk about our lives and our future plans.

Awkward structure and word order: 'It defaults in the situation like' is ungrammatical. Change to 'In casual situations' and correct verb tense and word order. Use 'I talk' rather than 'I will talk' to match habitual action. Use 'lives' plural and 'our future plans' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 26 covers sentence structure errors.

× If we are in the college, we talk about assignments or different topics of the subjects, how to prepare for the exams.

✓ If we are at college, we talk about assignments, different subject topics, and how to prepare for exams.

Preposition and article use: 'in the college' should be 'at college' (or 'in college' in some varieties). 'Different topics of the subjects' is awkward; 'different subject topics' is clearer. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'exams'. This is present habitual action so present tense 'talk' is correct. Grammar problem type ID: 6 addresses present tense usage and related preposition/article issues.

× So those are the things which we communicate during our time.

✓ So those are the things we talk about during our time together.

Verb choice and agreement: 'communicate during our time' is awkward; use 'talk about' and add 'together' for clarity. Subject-verb agreement 'those are' is fine, but the verb phrase needed correction for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 27 relates to subject-verb and appropriate verb selection.

× As I have already trolled in previous answer, I am quite introvert or the private person so I like to talk with only one or peoples or the friends during my time because as I'm an introvert person so I don't want to be that quite free and I always include quite introverts so yeah I'm only one person.

✓ As I said in my previous answer, I am a private, introverted person, so I prefer to talk with only one friend at a time because I don't want to be very outgoing and I enjoy spending time alone.

Multiple structure and word choice errors: 'trolled' is wrong; use 'said'. Use articles: 'a private, introverted person'. 'Only one or peoples or the friends' is corrected to 'only one friend at a time'. Remove repetition and unclear phrases like 'include quite introverts'. Simplify to a clear, grammatical sentence matching the meaning. Grammar problem type ID: 26 covers sentence structure issues.

× It's, I think I like to talk face to face rather than having a social media because in the social media you can and talk about you, you might get addicted to those, uh, phone smartphones, but if you talk to face to face, you can build confidence.

✓ I think I like to talk face to face rather than use social media because on social media you can talk about yourself and you might get addicted to smartphones, but if you talk face to face you can build confidence.

Preposition and article errors: 'having a social media' should be 'use social media'. 'In the social media' should be 'on social media'. 'Talk about you' should be 'talk about yourself'. Remove duplicated words and awkward phrases. This correction fixes preposition and pronoun use. Grammar problem type ID: 11 addresses incorrect use of prepositions.

× You can, uh, have different skills like a communication skills.

✓ You can develop different skills, such as communication skills.

Article and noun form: 'a communication skills' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use 'communication skills' without 'a' or say 'a communication skill' for singular. Also 'have' replaced with 'develop' for natural collocation. Grammar problem type ID: 13 covers incorrect use of adjectives/articles with nouns.

× So yeah, those are the things you can learn during those times.

✓ So yeah, those are the things you can learn during those times.

This sentence is acceptable but keep present tense for general truth. No change needed other than punctuation or fluency. Grammar problem type ID: 6 indicates present tense usage; here it is correct.

× If you have friends, you will argue.

✓ If you have friends, you may argue.

Modal verb choice and present generality: Using 'will' suggests certainty; better to use 'may' or 'might' for possibility. This keeps the sentence appropriate as a general statement about relationships. Grammar problem type ID: 6 addresses present tense/modal nuance.

× That's uh, I think, uh, it is a universal truth.

✓ I think it is a universal truth.

Redundancy and filler words: Remove extra fillers and redundant 'That's ... it is'. Simplify to 'I think it is a universal truth' for clarity and correct structure. Grammar problem type ID: 26 covers sentence structure.

× Umm, because without argument, there won't be any communication.

✓ Because without argument, there wouldn't be any communication.

Conditional consistency: For hypothetical general statements, match modal tense: 'there wouldn't be' is more natural here than 'there won't be'. Also avoid starting sentences with fillers. Grammar problem type ID: 26 covers conditional sentence structure.

× Argument is one of the major factor which helps you to create a strong bond with the friends and also clear out the situation through the argument.

✓ Argument is one of the major factors that helps you create a strong bond with friends and also clear up situations.

Agreement and word choice: 'one of the major factor' should be 'one of the major factors' (plural). Use 'that' not 'which' for defining clauses. 'Clear out the situation through the argument' is awkward; 'clear up situations' is natural. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'friends'. Grammar problem type ID: 13 addresses adjective/noun agreement and related choices.

× So yeah, it is the major factor into the friendship.

✓ So yeah, it is a major factor in friendship.

Preposition and article: Use 'a major factor' not 'the major factor' unless claiming uniqueness. Use 'in friendship' rather than 'into the friendship'. Make the phrase concise and idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID: 26 covers sentence structure and preposition use.