Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a short example. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word order errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay close and solve work-related issues. For example, we meet at the campus cafeteria once a month to catch up and discuss any problems at work.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct verbs and clearer specifics. Use a linking phrase to introduce examples and avoid vague phrases like 'something like that.'

Exemplo: We usually talk about our jobs and personal news. For example, we often share updates about part-time jobs, upcoming exams, and recent experiences with friends or family.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct statement of preference, then give one concrete reason and a brief example. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use) and replace unclear words like 'motivity' with 'motivation' or 'details'.

Exemplo: I prefer talking one-on-one with a single friend because it allows more focused and honest conversations. For example, I once asked a close friend for advice about a difficult task at my job, and we discussed possible solutions in detail.

Sugestão: Good clear preference. Make the phrasing more natural and concise, and give a specific example. Replace 'interconnection cannot be disrupted' with a clearer reason such as 'the conversation feels more genuine' or 'there are fewer misunderstandings.'

Exemplo: I prefer talking in person because you can read body language and avoid misunderstandings. For example, when we discuss sensitive topics face-to-face, we understand each other's tone and expressions better than in texts or chats.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, explain briefly why disagreements happen, and finish the example clearly. Fix tense and incomplete sentence issues; use linking words like 'for instance' and conclude the consequence or resolution.

Exemplo: Yes, occasionally I disagree with friends when we have different opinions. For instance, I once argued with a coworker about the best way to support a customer, and we resolved it by discussing options and agreeing on a plan.

× Yes, I love talking with my friends because it helps us know more about each other and also we can discuss up to work.

✓ Yes, I love talking with my friends because it helps us get to know each other better and we can also discuss work.

The phrase 'know more about each other' is acceptable but 'get to know each other better' is a more natural collocation; 'discuss up to work' is ungrammatical. 'Discuss' should take the object directly (discuss work). Use of present participle 'talking' is correct but surrounding phrasing needed correction to idiomatic English.

× For example, I my friends usually hang out together every month in the cafeteria.

✓ For example, my friends and I usually hang out together in the cafeteria every month.

Word order and subject placement are incorrect: 'I my friends' is not valid. The correct subject order is 'my friends and I'. Place time expressions ('every month') after the verb phrase or at end. This fixes sentence structure and subject placement.

× When I meet my friends I we usually share to each other about our work and some news about our life.

✓ When I meet my friends, we usually share news about our work and our lives.

Extra pronoun 'I' is redundant ('I we'). 'Share to each other' is incorrect; 'share with each other' or simply 'share' is better. 'Some news about our life' should be plural 'our lives' for each person's life. Also add a comma after the subordinate clause.

× Maybe we join a part time job, something like that for example.

✓ Sometimes we take on a part-time job, something like that, for example.

'Join a part time job' is incorrect collocation; use 'take on' or 'have' a part-time job. Hyphenate 'part-time'. 'Maybe' and 'for example' used together is redundant; 'sometimes' fits better. Punctuation added for clarity.

× Too many is my preference is talking with one of my friends in one-on-one way because it helps us to discuss motivity about on issues we met in daily life.

✓ My preference is talking one-on-one with one friend because it helps us discuss motives or issues we encounter in daily life.

Original has duplicated 'is' and unnatural 'Too many is my preference'. Correct subject-verb order: 'My preference is...' 'One-on-one' is a fixed expression. 'Motivity' is not correct; likely 'motives' or 'motivation'. 'Discuss ... about on issues' has extra prepositions; 'discuss issues' is correct. Use 'encounter' instead of 'met'.

× For example, one time I want to receive an advice from my friends about my job.

✓ For example, one time I wanted to get advice from my friends about my job.

Tense should be past ('one time' indicates a past event) so use 'wanted'. 'Receive an advice' is incorrect; 'advice' is uncountable so use 'get advice' or 'receive advice' without 'an'.

× To be honest, I prefer to talk to my friends in person compared to via social platforms because it helps us to read our body language more easily and also the interconnection cannot be disrupted.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to talk to my friends in person rather than via social platforms because it helps us read body language more easily, and the connection is less likely to be disrupted.

Use 'rather than' instead of 'compared to' for preferences. 'Read our body language' can be 'read body language' (omit second 'our'). 'Interconnection' is unnatural; use 'connection'. Use passive 'is less likely to be disrupted' for clarity. Removed unnecessary 'to' after 'helps'.

× Yes, sometimes I have disagreement with my friends.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have disagreements with my friends.

'Disagreement' should be plural 'disagreements' when speaking about occasional, repeated occurrences. Alternatively, use 'a disagreement' for a single event. Use plural to match 'sometimes'.

× For example, one time I disagree with my coworker about what to do to support our customer.

✓ For example, one time I disagreed with my coworker about how to support our customer.

Tense should be past ('one time'), so 'disagreed'. 'About what to do to support' is wordy; 'about how to support' is more natural. 'Customer' may be singular or plural depending on context; keep as 'customer' if referring to a specific one.

× And in this case we need to look.

✓ In that case, we needed to find a solution.

Original sentence is incomplete and vague: 'we need to look' is missing an object. Match tense to prior sentence (past), so 'needed'. Provide a complete object ('find a solution') to clarify meaning.