ChattingPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like chatting with friends?

Candidato

Yes I do. I think chatting with my friends can relax myself and, umm, enrich our contact.

Examinador

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Candidato

I usually uh, check with my friend in WeChat, uh, social media app umm, because we are in different cities so we can umm face to face each other usually.

Examinador

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Candidato

Umm, it depends on different situation. When I have some uh, something the group or the people know about, know about the things, I will prefer to chat with the group of people, but if the things.

Examinador

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Candidato

I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because face to face can umm enrich in keep in touch our connect connection and we can express our emotion.

Examinador

Do you argue with friends?

Candidato

MMM, very less times. Uh, unless our uh, unless we have the problem problem to dissolve, we will argue, but most of the time we.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答要更自然、简洁,并避免填充词(如 umm)。开头直接表明观点,然后用一两句具体原因支持,注意用词搭配(enrich our contact 不太地道,可用 strengthen our bond/relationship)。句子不要超过五句。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Chatting with my friends helps me relax and strengthens our relationships, because we share experiences and support each other.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答要更有条理并具体说明聊天话题。减少语气词,改正逻辑(我们身处不同城市所以不能 face to face)。先说聊天方式,再列举常聊的话题并用连接词衔接。

Exemplo: I usually chat with friends on WeChat since we live in different cities. We often talk about daily life, work, and plans for meeting up in the future.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 答案要完整并更有逻辑。先给出总体偏好,然后解释原因并举例。避免重复和未完成的句子,使用 linking words(for example, because)使表达连贯。

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If the topic concerns several people, I prefer group chats because everyone can share opinions; but for personal issues, I choose one-on-one conversations.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 表达要更简洁并使用正确搭配(keep in touch, express emotions)。给出一两点具体理由,并可补充场景比较。避免填充词并控制句子数。

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us express emotions clearly and build stronger connections, while social media is convenient for quick updates.

Do you argue with friends?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 要完整回答并用更自然的表达(rarely, resolve problems, have disagreements)。避免重复词和不完整句子。先直接回答频率,然后解释原因或举例。

Exemplo: Rarely. We only argue when there's a misunderstanding or a problem to resolve, and usually we talk it through calmly until we reach an agreement.

Gramática

27

× Yes I do. I think chatting with my friends can relax myself and, umm, enrich our contact.

Yes, I do. I think chatting with my friends can relax me and enrich our relationship.

问题类型:主谓一致/代词使用不当(归于主谓或代词问题,但按列表选择主谓一致)。原句中使用了反身代词“myself”不恰当,英语中表示被动接受动作时应使用宾格“me”。另外“enrich our contact”搭配不自然,应改为“enrich our relationship”或“strengthen our contact”。建议:用宾格代词作动词宾语,选择更自然的搭配表达。

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× I usually uh, check with my friend in WeChat, uh, social media app umm, because we are in different cities so we can umm face to face each other usually.

I usually check with my friend on WeChat, a social media app, because we are in different cities so we cannot meet face to face usually.

介词错误和句意矛盾。应使用介词“on”与平台名连用(check on/with someone on WeChat)。原句结尾“we can face to face each other usually”语法和逻辑错误,正确应为“cannot meet face to face”表示因身处不同城市无法面对面。建议:使用正确介词(on)并把否定表达放在动词上(cannot meet)。

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× Umm, it depends on different situation. When I have some uh, something the group or the people know about, know about the things, I will prefer to chat with the group of people, but if the things.

Umm, it depends on the situation. When I have something that the group already knows about, I prefer to chat with the group, but if it's a private matter, I prefer to chat with one friend.

句子结构混乱,存在不完整句和重复表达。应使用定冠词“the situation”,并用关系从句“something that the group already knows about”来修饰。最后原句中断,需补全对比内容,改为“if it's a private matter”并明确偏好。建议:把句子拆分为完整句,使用合适的关系从句和连接词,使表达清晰完整。

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× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because face to face can umm enrich in keep in touch our connect connection and we can express our emotion.

I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because face-to-face communication helps us stay connected and express our emotions.

时态问题和词序、词搭配错误。应将“face to face”作为复合形容词或名词短语“face-to-face communication”。“enrich in keep in touch our connect connection”混乱,正确表达为“helps us stay connected”或“helps us keep in touch”。“express our emotion”应为复数“express our emotions”。建议:使用固定搭配“stay connected / keep in touch”,注意形容词与名词的连写以及情感名词的单复数。

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× MMM, very less times. Uh, unless our uh, unless we have the problem problem to dissolve, we will argue, but most of the time we.

Very rarely. Unless we have a problem to resolve, we will argue, but most of the time we don't.

过去时/用词与结构问题:原句“very less times”不地道,应使用“very rarely”或“very few times”。“problem to dissolve”搭配错误,应为“problem to resolve”或“problem to solve”。句子末尾不完整,需补“most of the time we don't”以表达大部分时间不争吵。建议:使用常见的频率副词(rarely)或短语(very few times),选择正确搭配(resolve/solve a problem),并确保句子完整。

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