Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Absolutely, I'm so passionate to check with my friends both Lionel flying is whenever I have to spend time, I will show with my friends to shut the latest news or the policies and the daily study issues because chatting can offer us the space to.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
Usually we will uh, shout our hobbies like a photography, umm, For example, I will send the photos if I come across uh, grassland. I see the ants. I will send this picture to my shelled hobby friends. We can take some suggestion of the picture.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
It depends on the category of the chatting content. For example, if I have the topic of a family of a region, I must take a friend that's also interesting this topic. However, if I just share a atmosphere that's so popular and energetic like.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
Any types of communication cannot replace the ways of face to face communication because it can give us cues of the expressions or the voice, the details that can give us emotional value. However, maybe sometimes online social.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Absolutely, I'll be willing every time. For me, I'm the debater, so I used to use the techniques of a debate to chat with my friend. Incognito process. For example. I had just an argument with my friends that if my chatting habits is full of aggression.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 42.0Sugestão: Keep your answer focused and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary repetition. Work on pronunciation and sentence structure: use simple present tense (I like chatting; I talk about news, studies).
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay updated. For example, we often discuss the latest news and our study plans, and sometimes we share advice about assignments.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: Answer directly and organize details clearly. Use linking words (for example, also) and specific vocabulary (photography, nature, editing). Reduce fillers and correct collocations (e.g., 'share my hobbies' not 'shout'). Explain one clear example briefly.
Exemplo: We usually talk about our hobbies, especially photography. For example, when I visit grasslands I often take photos of insects and send them to my friends, and they give me suggestions on composition and editing.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: Begin with a clear preference or conditional answer, then give one concrete reason and example. Use correct phrasing (e.g., 'depends on the topic' and 'I prefer one-on-one for personal topics'). Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'family of a region'.
Exemplo: It depends on the topic. For serious or personal subjects I prefer talking one-on-one so we can focus, but for fun or social events I enjoy group chats because they are lively and everyone can join in.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: State your preference clearly (face-to-face) and support it with two specific reasons. Use complete sentences and contrastive linking words (however, although). Mention when you might choose social media as an exception.
Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and hear tone of voice, which convey emotions better. However, I sometimes use social media when people are far away or when a quick message is sufficient.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 44.0Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer and one clear example. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect grammar; say 'I sometimes argue with friends' and explain why (e.g., we debate ideas). Clarify the outcome or present a short reflection about managing disagreements calmly.
Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because we enjoy debating different opinions. For example, we recently disagreed about whether my chatting style sounds aggressive, and we calmly discussed ways to express ideas without offending each other.
× Absolutely, I'm so passionate to check with my friends both Lionel flying is whenever I have to spend time, I will show with my friends to shut the latest news or the policies and the daily study issues because chatting can offer us the space to.
✓ Absolutely, I'm so passionate about checking in with my friends. Whenever I have free time, I will get together with my friends to share the latest news, policies, and daily study issues because chatting can give us space to relax.
Error type 8: Incorrect use of verb + -ing or verb patterns. 'passionate to check' is incorrect; after 'passionate' use 'about' + gerund: 'passionate about checking'. 'Check with my friends' should be 'checking in with my friends' for meaning. 'Whenever I have to spend time' is unnatural; use 'whenever I have free time'. 'I will show with my friends to shut' is ungrammatical and likely intended as 'get together with my friends to share' so corrected accordingly. Suggestion: use 'about' + gerund after 'passionate' and use natural collocations like 'check in', 'get together', 'share'.
× Usually we will uh, shout our hobbies like a photography, umm, For example, I will send the photos if I come across uh, grassland. I see the ants. I will send this picture to my shelled hobby friends. We can take some suggestion of the picture.
✓ Usually we talk about our hobbies, such as photography. For example, if I come across a grassland and see ants, I will send those photos to my hobbyist friends. We can get some suggestions about the pictures.
Error type 14: Incorrect use of quantifiers and related word choice. 'shout our hobbies' is wrong; use 'talk about our hobbies'. 'a photography' is incorrect; use 'photography' or 'a photograph'. 'send the photos if I come across grassland' needs articles and pluralization: 'a grassland' or simply 'a grassland' and 'send those photos'. 'shelled hobby friends' is unclear — likely 'hobbyist friends'. 'take some suggestion' should be 'get some suggestions'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations and plural/singular forms and use appropriate quantifiers like 'some' or demonstratives like 'those'.
× It depends on the category of the chatting content. For example, if I have the topic of a family of a region, I must take a friend that's also interesting this topic. However, if I just share a atmosphere that's so popular and energetic like.
✓ It depends on the category of the chat content. For example, if I have a topic about a family's issues in a region, I need a friend who is also interested in that topic. However, if I just want to share an atmosphere that is popular and energetic, I might prefer a group.
Error type 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and relative clauses. 'that's also interesting this topic' misuses 'that' and 'interesting' — it should be 'who is also interested in that topic' when referring to a person. 'share a atmosphere' needs 'an' not 'a' (article error but tied to pronoun/word choice). Suggestion: use 'who' for people, 'which/that' for things, and the correct verb + preposition 'interested in'.
× Any types of communication cannot replace the ways of face to face communication because it can give us cues of the expressions or the voice, the details that can give us emotional value. However, maybe sometimes online social.
✓ No type of communication can replace face-to-face communication because it gives us cues from expressions and voice, details that provide emotional value. However, sometimes online social media can be useful.
Error type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and articles. 'Any types of communication' is awkward; use 'No type of communication' or 'Any type of communication' depending on meaning. 'replace the ways of face to face communication' should be 'replace face-to-face communication' (no 'the ways of'). 'cues of the expressions or the voice' should be 'cues from expressions and voice'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('from', 'in') and fixed expression 'face-to-face communication'.
× Absolutely, I'll be willing every time. For me, I'm the debater, so I used to use the techniques of a debate to chat with my friend. Incognito process. For example. I had just an argument with my friends that if my chatting habits is full of aggression.
✓ Absolutely, I'm always willing to argue. For me, I'm a debater, so I often use debate techniques when chatting with my friends. For example, I recently had an argument with my friends about whether my chatting habits are aggressive.
Error type 4: Modal verb and related auxiliary usage and tense problems. 'I'll be willing every time' is awkward — use 'I'm always willing'. 'I used to use' suggests past habitual action; if you mean habit now, use 'I often use'. 'Incognito process' is unclear and omitted. 'I had just an argument' should be 'I recently had an argument'. 'if my chatting habits is full of aggression' has subject-verb agreement and incorrect conditional/linking: 'about whether my chatting habits are aggressive'. Suggestion: choose correct modal/auxiliary forms for present habits ('I'm always willing', 'I often use') and ensure subject-verb agreement ('habits are').