Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
Yes, I'm willing to travel with my friend. I often just travel to my friend and WeChat and social media. We often just change each artist what what what worry what we see it before. So I will just exchange our information and.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I would say there are a lot of expats like like the football team, like the famous players and influencer and delicious food and some daily daily lights. Yes, I will talk everything with my friend.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
Actually I'm prefer to chat with a group of people because we can just talk about many aspects like like the football, football match. We can have a lot of the comments on these games and we can get a lot of.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
It's bound to face to face because I think in the true in true life, we can just directly communicate with each other. We can we can observe their real situation and they are they are real moment.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
A absolute little yes, I do. I often argue with my friends, umm, uh, because a MMM, such great go, such as, uh, we just, uh, plan go to the, uh, traveling. So, uh, we often have the, uh, argument, uh, at the at the moment because I, I want to go there, but he, but he want to and then he want to go there, but I want to, but I don't want to, I want to.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 40.0Sugestão: 回答不够直接且混乱,句子多次重复且信息不明确。需要先直接回答问题(Yes/No + 简短理由),然后用1-2个清晰的支持句补充具体细节,避免重复和无意义填充词(如 umm、what)。注意句子流畅和语法(动词时态与搭配)。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often use WeChat or social media to share travel plans and photos. We usually exchange information about places we've visited and recommend routes or restaurants to each other.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答内容较模糊且词汇重复(like like,daily daily),缺少逻辑连接。应给出一个主题句,然后用连词(for example, such as, also)列举2-3具体话题,并给出简短解释或例子来支持。
Exemplo: We talk about many topics, such as football, food, and daily life. For example, we discuss football matches and famous players, share recommendations for delicious restaurants, and talk about our daily routines or interesting events that happened to us.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答比较清晰但仍有重复与未完成的句子(we can get a lot of ...)。应先给出明确偏好,然后用连词(because, so)补充1-2具体理由,最后用完整句子总结。避免冗余词和重复短语。
Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because it allows more perspectives and lively discussion. For instance, when we talk about football matches, everyone shares different opinions and comments, which makes the conversation more interesting.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答明确但含有口语填充词和重复(in the true in true life, we can we can)。建议给出清晰的主题句并用两句具体原因支持,使用连词(because, so)使逻辑连贯,注意语法(observe their expressions/feelings rather than 'real situation')。
Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows direct interaction and better understanding. For example, you can observe facial expressions and body language, which helps to understand feelings more accurately than text messages.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 35.0Sugestão: 回答含糊且重复填充词很多,使意思难以理解。应先直接回答(Yes/No + 频率),接着说明原因并举具体例子(例如为了旅行计划或目的地争执)。练习使用清晰的句子并避免频繁停顿或重复。
Exemplo: Yes, I do argue with my friends occasionally, usually about practical matters. For example, when we plan a trip we sometimes disagree about the destination or schedule — I might prefer a quiet place while someone else wants a busy city, so we discuss and compromise.
× Yes, I'm willing to travel with my friend. I often just travel to my friend and WeChat and social media.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends. I often chat with my friends on WeChat and other social media.
原句句子结构混乱,‘travel to my friend’与上下文不符,且并列成分使用不当。应明确主谓宾结构并用恰当动词(chat)和介词短语(on WeChat)。建议理清意思后重组句子,如“chat with my friends on WeChat”。
× We often just change each artist what what what worry what we see it before.
✓ We often just change what we see before.
原句含有大量冗余词和错误代词(each artist, it),导致意思不明。将重复词删去并用正确代词和从句结构表达“改变我们之前看到的内容”。
× So I will just exchange our information and.
✓ So I will just exchange information with them.
原句缺少宾语与完整结构,‘exchange our information’与上下文不搭配。应使用完整的及物结构并加上介词短语表明交换对象:‘exchange information with them’。
× I would say there are a lot of expats like like the football team, like the famous players and influencer and delicious food and some daily daily lights.
✓ I would say there are a lot of topics, like the football team, famous players, influencers, delicious food and daily life.
原句中‘expats’(外籍人士)与列举项不匹配,且重复词‘daily daily lights’错误。应使用‘topics’或‘subjects’来引出讨论内容并纠正名词形式。
× Yes, I will talk everything with my friend.
✓ Yes, I will talk about everything with my friends.
动词搭配错误,英语中应用短语‘talk about something’,并将单数friend改为复数以符合前文多位朋友的语境。
× Actually I'm prefer to chat with a group of people because we can just talk about many aspects like like the football, football match.
✓ Actually I prefer to chat with a group of people because we can talk about many aspects, like football and football matches.
原句中‘I’m prefer’使用了错误的助动词形式,应为‘I prefer’(不加be);此外重复词需删减,名词复数形式用于泛指比赛。
× We can have a lot of the comments on these games and we can get a lot of.
✓ We can have a lot of comments on these games and share many opinions.
原句结尾不完整且定冠词使用多余。需要补全谓语并明确宾语,建议改为“have a lot of comments”并补充“share many opinions”。
× It's bound to face to face because I think in the true in true life, we can just directly communicate with each other.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because in real life we can communicate directly with each other.
原句‘It's bound to face to face’结构不通,更自然的表达是‘I prefer face-to-face communication’;删除重复词‘in the true in true life’并用‘in real life’替代。
× We can we can observe their real situation and they are they are real moment.
✓ We can observe their real situation and real emotions/moments.
原句重复且搭配不当,‘real moment’应改为更合适的名词(emotions/moments),并删除重复词。建议根据语境选择“emotions”或“moments”。
× A absolute little yes, I do.
✓ A small amount, yes, I do. (或) Absolutely, yes, I do.
原句冠词和形容词搭配错误。应使用“absolutely”表示肯定,或改为“a little”表示程度小,不能混用为“A absolute little”。
× I often argue with my friends, umm, uh, because a MMM, such great go, such as, uh, we just, uh, plan go to the, uh, traveling.
✓ I often argue with my friends because we sometimes disagree when planning trips.
原句语音填充词过多且结构混乱。应去掉口语填充词并用简洁表达“在计划旅行时意见不合”。
× So, uh, we often have the, uh, argument, uh, at the at the moment because I, I want to go there, but he, but he want to and then he want to go there, but I want to, but I don't want to, I want to.
✓ So we often have arguments at that moment because I want to go there, but he wants to go somewhere else.
原句主谓不一致(he want → he wants),重复且矛盾。应使用复数“arguments”表示多次争论,并保证第三人称单数动词加-s;此外需要简化并明确定义双方的不同意见。