Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and choose correct words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers and pronunciation mistakes (e.g., "overseas", "face-to-face"), and keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I talk to my overseas friends almost every day online because it is convenient and helps us stay close. However, I prefer face-to-face conversations when possible because they allow better emotional connection and clearer communication.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and link specific details with examples. Correct grammar (use present simple: "we keep", "we are doing"). Use linking words like "for example" or "so" to clarify purpose. Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid fragmentary sentences.

Exemplo: We usually keep each other updated about our daily life and family. For example, we share news about work and health so that we know everyone is safe and doing well.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct statement of preference and give one clear reason with a brief example. Use correct comparative phrasing ("quality over quantity") and avoid repetition and hesitations. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer talking with one friend rather than groups because I value depth in conversations. For example, I have a few close friends who understand me well, so our talks are more meaningful and supportive.

Sugestão: Make a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and explain reasons with correct vocabulary ("face-to-face", "physical cues", "emotional cues"). Avoid unclear phrases and pronoun errors. Use one or two supporting reasons and a linking word like "because" or "so".

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it lets me pick up physical and emotional cues easily. For example, I can see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand friends better than messages do.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use correct grammar ("we do argue with friends sometimes"). Clarify meaning of "learning way" with a short explanation and give an example. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases like "I win with friend".

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue, but usually these disagreements are constructive because they help us understand each other better. For example, when we disagree about plans, we talk it through and often learn new perspectives.

× I was chatting with my oversea friends almost every day, uh, because, uh, David authentic technology give it a pony opportunity to uh, communicate through, uh, online and Internet, which is awesome.

✓ I chatted with my overseas friends almost every day because digital technology gave me an easy opportunity to communicate online, which was awesome.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms. 'Was chatting' can be simplified to simple past 'chatted' for habitual past action. 'David authentic technology give it a pony opportunity' contains incorrect words and verb tense; use 'digital technology gave me an easy opportunity' so the verb 'gave' matches the past time frame. 'Oversea' should be 'overseas' and 'online and Internet' is redundant; 'online' or 'on the Internet' suffices. Improve by keeping consistent past tense and using correct vocabulary.'

× Uh, but I always, but I always prefer chatting with my friends through person 'cause I would have more.

✓ But I always prefer chatting with my friends in person because I get more out of it.

'Through person' is incorrect—use the adverbial phrase 'in person.' The sentence fragment 'I would have more' is vague; 'I get more out of it' clarifies meaning. Also remove repetition 'but I always, but I always.' Maintain present tense for general preference.'

× I We usually keep each other updated about our life, our family and any social relationship.

✓ We usually keep each other updated about our lives, our families, and our social relationships.

Start pronoun should be 'We' not 'I We.' Use plural nouns 'lives,' 'families,' and 'social relationships' to agree with plural subject 'we.' Also include 'our' consistently for parallel structure.'

× Even though we live far away from each other.

✓ Even though we live far away from each other, we try to stay connected.

The original is a sentence fragment beginning with the subordinating conjunction 'Even though.' It needs a main clause to complete the thought. Adding 'we try to stay connected' completes the sentence.'

× We also want to make sure that we are safe and we doing OK in our life so the other person wouldn't be worried.

✓ We also want to make sure that we are safe and doing OK in our lives so the other person won't be worried.

'We doing' lacks the auxiliary verb; use 'are doing' or drop 'we' to form 'doing.' Maintain present continuous 'are doing' or present simple 'do' depending on meaning; here 'are doing OK' is fine. 'Life' should be plural 'lives' for multiple people. Use 'won't' instead of 'wouldn't' because it's a present/future expectation.'

× I personally, uh, prefer talking to my friends only I, I don't have missed so many friends, uh, because I always prefer the quality than quantity.

✓ I personally prefer talking to just a few friends; I don't have many friends because I always prefer quality over quantity.

The original has multiple issues: 'prefer talking to my friends only I, I don't have missed so many friends' is ungrammatical. Use 'just a few friends' and 'I don't have many friends.' Use the correct comparative structure 'prefer X over Y' instead of 'prefer the quality than quantity.' Remove extra filler and maintain present simple for general preferences.'

× Umm, for example, I only do have a few best friends, but they all, uh, good people and uh, generous with me.

✓ For example, I only have a few close friends, but they are all good people and generous with me.

'I only do have' is unnecessary emphasis; use 'I only have.' The clause 'they all, uh, good people' lacks a verb—use 'they are all good people.' 'Best friends' can be 'close friends' depending on meaning; keep consistent present simple tense.'

× I personally always prefer communicate face to face because she's give me, uh, the physical in charge, uh, instead of technology and we won't miss out anymore emotional clue, uh, which is what I lie about facing to face, uh, communication.

✓ I personally always prefer communicating face to face because it gives me the physical cues that technology cannot, and we don't miss emotional clues, which is what I like about face-to-face communication.

Pronoun 'she's' is incorrect for 'it gives'; use 'it' for 'face-to-face communication.' 'Prefer communicate' requires the gerund 'communicating.' 'Physical in charge' is incorrect—use 'physical cues.' 'We won't miss out anymore emotional clue' should be 'we don't miss emotional clues.' 'I lie' is wrong verb; use 'I like.' Maintain present tense for general preference.'

× I will say this, umm, we do argue with my friend sometime, but in a, uh, learning way.

✓ I would say that we sometimes argue with our friends, but in a constructive, learning way.

Use 'I would say' as a natural phrase. 'We do argue with my friend sometime' mixes pronouns and tenses; use 'we sometimes argue with our friends.' 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to mean occasionally. 'Learning way' is awkward; 'constructive, learning way' clarifies intent.'

× We, we not everybody understand each other.

✓ Not everybody understands each other.

Remove filler 'We, we.' Use 'Not everybody understands each other' with subject-verb agreement: 'everybody understands.' Alternatively, 'We don't all understand each other' is also acceptable. Ensure correct verb form for singular indefinite pronoun.'

× So I think to me, uh, I win with friend is occasionally acceptable.

✓ So I think, to me, disagreement with friends is occasionally acceptable.

The original is garbled: 'I win with friend' is incorrect. Likely intended meaning is 'disagreement with friends.' Use 'disagreement' or 'arguments' and correct word order. Keep present simple for general opinion.'